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fdarcy said:
I do hope that you know that I am coming after you with a pitchfork, how could you end this with a cliff hanger? I loved " my penis has three minutes to live" that was very funny even though to Arthur, he was dying. Now that he has said those magic words as I guessed would lead to the ending of the curse he will be very
happy that he does not have to give up his Guinevere.
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fdarcy said:
I forgot to say I enjoyed the entire chapter.
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Well, it was midnight. The day was over....
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I actually enjoyed the cliffhanger and liked that you ended it there as it keeps you guessing as to what happens next . Naww the flashback with little Arthur and Leon had me wanting to cuddle Arthur so much. The line fdarcy mentioned had me giggling too a little.
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Arina0122 said:
Kim, so cute it was midnight. The day was over. I love it.
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Arina0122 said:
Arthur's pain and suffering was displayed so well. It hurt to watch. Gwen love and support no matter what happen is heart-warming. Arthur's dreams should give him hope. Thank you.

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Aww Arthur as a seven year old was too adorable. And painful. Thank you for that.
His pain is described so vivid and real. I love that!!
And the cliffhanger. That's Kim I know and love ^^
Oh and that dream, very similar ending as the one when he dreamt their daughter.. Subtle. Amazing. Loving it!!!
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Chapter 62:
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Oh I knew that the way for Arthur to break the curse was for him to tell Gwen he loves her and mean it. I really liked that Gwen went to Morgana and that Morgana was only trying to help Arthur (though it was harsh) and I love that they got along.

The Merlin/Arthur phone chat had me giggling. I'm looking forward to the dinner and A/G revealing all to the gang. It's time really.
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lailastar said:
Enjoy your week away, looking forward to the next chapter.
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I love Morgana!!! Bitchy, but with a soul. Interesting what you said about previous life. I never thought about that in this fic. I liked how you turned it out, Gwen knowing but not able to tell. Merlin the sassy is amazing. And Arthur finally being able to be his true self with her is pricless. Not surprised he asked her to move in. I was expecting him to propose ^^
Good luck with the moving!! :)) Have fun!
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I have wifi, but we'll see what I have for time...
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That's great! :))
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Chapter 63:
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Lovely, sweet chapter. A definitely good pick me up after I had another cortisone injection in my wrist. It hurts a lot. So thanks!
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Aww you still have problems with your wrist? So sad to hear that!!
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I have tenosynitis which can take a while to recover from especially if you have tiny wrists like mine. Though losing my brace overseas two weeks till the end of the trip didn't help either.
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You clumsy. I must be hard to deal with it. But as it can be recovered, it is not such a terrible thing. From my point of view.

Aww Bora Bora. Lucky them! Finally red roses. Yay! And moving in was so sweet. Arthur doing most of the job. Gwen trained him well! I am glad he told her about the dreams..
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Gwen didn't train him! He's doing this all on his own!
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I blame my dad, I has a nap after doing my exercises (so my brace was off) and then he told me to get out of the car so he could park it. That is when I lost it. We looked everywhere, even went back to the car park. It was no where to be found. Yeah, it will hopefully get better after this second injection, they say that in one area it can need up to two injections. I just hope it does get better. They can do surgery, but I don't want to have that. I miss work and the children. I see a baby, I want to hold it. I keep hinting to my sisters that I want to be an aunty.
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Fair point, Kim.
I understand why you don't want surgery. Have you tried alternative medicine? I know I probably should't be suggesting that, but I've come to realise it's always worth a shot. It can't do harm.
Don't get me started on babies. I don't want one of my own ( yet ) but I go crazy whenever I see one. Thankfully I am really close with my aunt's kid, who's almost 6 now but I still see her as my little baby. So that's my dope.
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Chapter 64 (Day 70):
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Oh I loved the dinner party! I hope we get more scenes of the group together before the story ends. I enjoy seeing them all interact.
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fdarcy said:
Sorry that you have not heard from me for awhile, I have been on complete bed rest per Doctors order with a herniated disc. I just read 62-64 and I loved them all,sorry I can't type more I just can't sit up any longer.
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Get better!
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fdarcy said:
Thanks
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Hunith is simply amazing. Arthur and Gwen certainly now how to make the wait enjoyable ^^
The whole gang together was perfect. The way they interacted felt natural and just, well perfect. Don't know what else to say!
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@Joppa, I miss your comments. Well, I don't know if I can do alternative medicine. I'm not really into that type of thing. I'm seeing a hand therapist and that is helping. Really, the fact my wrists are tiny is probably why its taking a while to get completely better. I do things like change my bed and not long later my wrist swells up more. I just have to keep doing my exercises and building my strength up.

LOL I'm the same. Don't want kids now (I'm only just started dating a guy now and had my first proper snog), but I definitely do down in the future. At the moment I'm dying to be an auntie, but I don't know when this will happen. So I pretty much play auntie to the kids at care and my second cousins.
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That's all right Millie! I am glad you're gonna get better. Just take it as an excuse to be lazy. Unmade bed is better than swelled wrist.

My mum bought me this shirt for pregnant ladies( I am not fat by the way :D). It is actually really cool, has a baby on it and all. She got it cause she thought it was awesome and knows I love babies. But I still take as her way of saying what the hell are you waiting. She always asks when I am going to start dating. It's pretty annoying. But I don't think I am ready for it, plus my self esteem is super low.
Aaaa I am happy for you though, the proper snog and all. LOL Seriously though, I think it's great. I am happy if you're happy!
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Chapter 65 (Day 81):
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fdarcy said:
Loved the proposal and the fact that he felt compelled to call and tell Morgana. I also liked that he remembered that Gwen made their wedding rings. Dinner with Morgana and Wolf? wow!
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OMG that proposal was just the best thing ever! So cute! I loved the phone call between Arthur and Morgana and it's good to see them repair their relationship.

Also I love how descriptive you are when Gwen is repairing/making jewellery. Did you do a lot of research for that?
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I have actually done a moderate amount of jewelry making. Have taken several art metals classes, both in school and as an adult.

And Gwen's jewelry is actually based on my friend Natasha's jewelry. I went to school with her, and now she's a professional jewelry designer/maker.

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Oh cool! I've always wanted to learn how to make jewelry. And pottery too. At the moment I am doing moasic classes which I really enjoy. One day I'll do pottery and some other classes no doubt.

Oh I'm just looking at your friend's jewelry and its very Celtic like. I love it. I saw a lot of that type of jewelry when we toured England, Scotland and Ireland.
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I've also done pottery. For a short while, I was between music and art for career paths, actually.
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That jewelry is pretty cool! I am not really into it, but I appriciate good ideas and originality. And she has both of that! I especially liked the rings. Not an expert, but she is really good!

I am actually not surprised to hear that you were between music and art. Considering how well you write, you have talent for art!


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Arthut worried about rings was adorable. I loved how he proposed, typical him, all caring. The banter between him and Morgana is great. I like them much better when they're getting along.
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Oh cool! Did you like it? I'm not surprised you are a very creative person.
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I love pottery wheel. I'm going to take another class soon...
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Chapter 66 (Day 83):
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fdarcy said:
I am glad that they can forgive each other, and become brother and sister.
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Oh I loved Arthur and Gwen's lunch with Morgana. It was great that they talked and forgave each other about the past. I really like the idea of Morgana having a pet snake too.
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Morgana is really awesome.. The whole brother and sister moment was very emotional and beautiful. Lol at the snake. I knew Arthur would be jelous!
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Chapter 67 (Day 85):
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9567812/67/
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Okay, apparently fanpop doesn't like links anymore. Chapter's been updated. Click Chapter 66 and hit next...
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Lovely chapter! Seeing A/G visit their families graves was lovely though a little sad.

Also, my sister got engaged over the weekend so I finally get a brother.
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fdarcy said:
Thank you for the update, this was such a beautiful and emotional chapter. I am getting better and I will start to catch up on the other story.
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Aaa congrats to your sister, Millie!!!!! :)) I am happy for you, that you finally get a brother! Xxoo
Arthur wanting to die at the same time as Gwen is actually really sweet, in some way, and I'd say normal, when you love someone that much. Arthur's talk to his mum left me with tears. It's just so sad. And all the presents he got for Gwen's parent and asking a permission to marry her was soo sweet and caring. I loved it.
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Chapter 68, Day 98 (let's see if the link will work now):
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9567812/68/6­0

Nope. Link ain't working.
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I've been wondering when you'll update this!
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I hadn't forgotten.
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Lovely chapter apart from Uther... being well Uther. I wanted to slap some sense into him.
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You better not :D

Damn, i really wanted to like Uther. I'm liking Arthur's therapy with ice cream though. And the other therapy as well.

Millie! Where have you been girl?
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fdarcy said:
Oh no I thought that after the dinner Uther was going to try and be nicer but I guess a leopard can not change his spot. The good that has come of this is that Arthur now realises that his father will never change and he no longer needs to try to get his approval.
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New chapter is up!
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fdarcy said:
Oh thank you for the update and a great New Years gift and also Happy New Year, I do hope you have a very prosperous and successful year. Now back to the story loved that Uther is so fatherly and caring and that Arthur is now out from his shadow. can't wait for the next chapter.
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Almost a month since the last update! Cccc
I'll catch up soon!
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"Are you going to eat that? Are you going to eat that? Are you going to eat that?" LOL My dog's not that polite. He's more like "That's mine!" Love the comparison though!!
I always love Sick Arthur. He's too adorable. Banter with Merlin way funny as usual.
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Sorry about the delay. Got a lot of things going on. And now I'm doing a fic challenge on LJ until Wednesday, so nothing's getting worked on.

The dog I described is my dog.
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fdarcy said:
Good luck with your fic challenge and I do like your dog.
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Oh well then you're forgiven ^^
Yes, I assumed you're speaking from experience!
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I'll link to the results when we're done. It's about quantity this time (250 word max, ugh), not quality, so no voting and I don't really care if I win (being that I am more about quality). But I do have 2 that are already expanded to full one-shots out of this, and they'll be up after the challenge is over as well.
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Only 250? Personally I perfer longer ones, where you can get into the story, and definitely quality over quantity always! But I know you and I know I will love it, so I can't wait! Good luck anyways!
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250 words is KILLING me. For reals. I did one that was dialogue-only (no names, no descriptions, nothing) that turned out really cool, I think. It's pretty funny, too, actually. As a fellow nerd, you'll love it, Joppa.
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That's quite a challenge! But so was 60 and that turned out more than fantastic!
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Next chapter is up!
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fdarcy said:
Just read chapter 70 and I have to say that I am happy that Arthur told his father just how he feels and will longer do things to get his approval. He has grown up so much, loved the Brownies. Thanks for the update.
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I'm glad Uther is slowly turning into a good guy. With all his past accumulated rage, Arthur did pretty good. He handled it perfectly! And now I have craving for brownies..
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Updated!
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Sorry it took me this long. The techonolgy is hating me at the moment.
"He hugged me," .. LOL I can totally see Uther saying that!
That was a beautiful wedding.. Unusual the way I like..
It's nice to see Uther try. Really nice!
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No one freak out on me, but I'm not writing Arthur and Gwen's wedding in this story. I actually hate writing weddings. They're incredibly boring to write. This one was okay because I got to make stuff up (Druid wedding and all), but after writing the one in "Fire," I was like NEVER AGAIN.
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Yes, I remember you saying that, so I wasn't really expecting one!
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Updated! Two more chapters after this one and it's done!
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Please tell me you have something else in mind after this!
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I might...
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Arthur getting a pedicure; I cannot imagine that LOL
I loved what he did with the locket. Her present was amazing as well.. I envy them cause I always have the hardest time choosing it.. And getting a dog from the shelter is the best idea..
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Updated!
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fdarcy said:
Chapter 71: loved the Druid wedding, you're imagination knows no bounds. I know that you said that after Fire you would never do another wedding so thank you for this one.
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fdarcy said:
Chapter 72: Bora Bora, one of the most beautiful islands in the Pacific and a wonderful and relaxing place to vacation. Enjoyed the skinny dipping at midnight, the Christmas gift that Gwen made and Arthur's reaction and appreciation for the gift.
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fdarcy said:
Chapter73: Thanks for the update, having them get married on Bora Bora was nice and certainly get around the wedding. Uther giving a wedding party/ reception was lovely. Can't wait for the next chapter. Loved Gwaine.
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Final chapter is up!
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Loved how you ended it with Arthur's dream, perfect.
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How did I miss this? :O Now I have something to look foward tonight!
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fdarcy said:
Loved the ending. Can't wait for your next story, thank you.
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Day 1 seems to me as well like it happened a lifetime ago!
Secret wedding, well maybe more spontaneus than secret.. Must say I am surprised but I love the idea.
Aww Pepper, that sounds familiar! ^^
Them being adorable married couple is just right.. Can't explain, but I don't really have to..
And Arthur as a father is the most adorable thing ever! Literally living the dream...
It was the perfect ending for a perfect story!!! Thank you love!
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Yes, Pepper is my dog, in sparkling detail. In her younger days.
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