This is for sla aka Fen aka my so-called lover -__-
Story:
Eulogy for Istar:
Dere many tings I ken sab ‘bout Istar. Istar was good sista, an good amigo. She na bad performer as well, but die working on los altos, on da platform. Heahs how dess passed: she skeerd door los altos, she dizzy an fell in de arena, an die, as Istar’s sista Mariam sab. Na I feel all lone coz of she dess. I hope ya all feel triste an all lone too.
Istar dead coz Hyd an Peter sab she perform borin on de flar. I don tink she boring. I tink she interesting. I tink she wicked performer. She spik saft an she dress an do hair nice. She loved door de peb, an she loved dem back. Don ever stop lovin she.
I hav very good memries of Istar. Dere was wan tyam wen she perform very good wid Mariam in practice. It was be fore Joella, Peter, an Liane joined the peb. She do special backflips an lan on shoulders of Mariam, while Mariam stan on high platform of los altos. Tha was first tyam she try los altos, an she skeerd of it later the nex manyan. But she perform good, an Mariam proud.
Sam tyams I ketch Istar missing Earss. She tell me how she miss family an amigos fram Earss, how she cyan re memba nada, how she cyan re memba how she was on Earss, how happy an triste she was. Wan noch, she tell me bout her segretos, an how she will always love Mariam, even tho she jealus of sista sam tyams. It make me cry. If ya knew segretos Istar keep, u cry as hard as me wen I heard dat wan noch .
Istar was good nina, very good, but som times she toon bad side. Joella tell me tings bout Istar. She tell me Istar give up hope fo Joella, an didna help. Istar is also rude som times. She has many bad momentos an flaws, but I hope you, de peb, fo’give Istar lak Joella did. Wat past is past. An now she dead, theah no need an no point to hate Istar any mo.
I wis I culd bring Istar back, I wis she na dead. I wis she didna fall from de platform at los altos into hans of dess. Dere many tings I didna sab to Istar, many tings I wis I culd sab to she. I neva sab me segretos to Istar, neva got to share me past wid she. I feel triste dat I neva ken see Istar a gain. She is gone. She no mo. She in de past now, of as sprit watching us. Do na be skeerd of sprit if ya feel it. Istar sprit keep ya veilig an loves ya .
Now is de tyam to bury body of Istar. Is very triste to see she leave us lak dis, may be foreva. But she will all ways re main in de memries of us, the peb. Good bye, Istar, fellow amigo an sista. We of de Galax-Arena miss ya.
commentaar FROM ZE TEACHER:
M______, (my name lol)
Well, what can I say? Apart from ‘brilliant work’, there isn’t much else I can add. u were the only member of class to take on this task, which was always going to be a great technical challenge. Not only have u ‘nailed’ the patwa, using it consistently and appropriately throughout, but u have also managed to express deep and moving emotions in this pidgin language. The tone is beautifully controlled throughout, and fits perfectly with everything we know about the situation of the peb.
Really, this exceeds all my expectations. It is outstanding work on every level. Well done for pushing yourself, and well done for succeeding.
E. Mc_____ (teacher's name lol)
Grade: A
Story:
Eulogy for Istar:
Dere many tings I ken sab ‘bout Istar. Istar was good sista, an good amigo. She na bad performer as well, but die working on los altos, on da platform. Heahs how dess passed: she skeerd door los altos, she dizzy an fell in de arena, an die, as Istar’s sista Mariam sab. Na I feel all lone coz of she dess. I hope ya all feel triste an all lone too.
Istar dead coz Hyd an Peter sab she perform borin on de flar. I don tink she boring. I tink she interesting. I tink she wicked performer. She spik saft an she dress an do hair nice. She loved door de peb, an she loved dem back. Don ever stop lovin she.
I hav very good memries of Istar. Dere was wan tyam wen she perform very good wid Mariam in practice. It was be fore Joella, Peter, an Liane joined the peb. She do special backflips an lan on shoulders of Mariam, while Mariam stan on high platform of los altos. Tha was first tyam she try los altos, an she skeerd of it later the nex manyan. But she perform good, an Mariam proud.
Sam tyams I ketch Istar missing Earss. She tell me how she miss family an amigos fram Earss, how she cyan re memba nada, how she cyan re memba how she was on Earss, how happy an triste she was. Wan noch, she tell me bout her segretos, an how she will always love Mariam, even tho she jealus of sista sam tyams. It make me cry. If ya knew segretos Istar keep, u cry as hard as me wen I heard dat wan noch .
Istar was good nina, very good, but som times she toon bad side. Joella tell me tings bout Istar. She tell me Istar give up hope fo Joella, an didna help. Istar is also rude som times. She has many bad momentos an flaws, but I hope you, de peb, fo’give Istar lak Joella did. Wat past is past. An now she dead, theah no need an no point to hate Istar any mo.
I wis I culd bring Istar back, I wis she na dead. I wis she didna fall from de platform at los altos into hans of dess. Dere many tings I didna sab to Istar, many tings I wis I culd sab to she. I neva sab me segretos to Istar, neva got to share me past wid she. I feel triste dat I neva ken see Istar a gain. She is gone. She no mo. She in de past now, of as sprit watching us. Do na be skeerd of sprit if ya feel it. Istar sprit keep ya veilig an loves ya .
Now is de tyam to bury body of Istar. Is very triste to see she leave us lak dis, may be foreva. But she will all ways re main in de memries of us, the peb. Good bye, Istar, fellow amigo an sista. We of de Galax-Arena miss ya.
commentaar FROM ZE TEACHER:
M______, (my name lol)
Well, what can I say? Apart from ‘brilliant work’, there isn’t much else I can add. u were the only member of class to take on this task, which was always going to be a great technical challenge. Not only have u ‘nailed’ the patwa, using it consistently and appropriately throughout, but u have also managed to express deep and moving emotions in this pidgin language. The tone is beautifully controlled throughout, and fits perfectly with everything we know about the situation of the peb.
Really, this exceeds all my expectations. It is outstanding work on every level. Well done for pushing yourself, and well done for succeeding.
E. Mc_____ (teacher's name lol)
Grade: A
;]]]]]] I was bored. And please, no Femonk/Travtina comments.
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1. Helena door MCR
Because 2 people already covered it and it's full of win.
2. Girlfriend door Avril Lavigne
I always find it funny when guys sing it. xD Especially the "Hell yeah, I'm the motherfucking princess!"
3. 17 door Jet
Coz he is... 17, I mean. :p
4. NYAN CAT song
He knows all the lyrics. ;]]]
5. Waiting door Green dag (or any of the songs off Warning)
Because I am currently addicted to the song.
6. Destroya door MCR
I am a perv ;]
7. Baby door Justin Bieber
Coz he lied to us all about doing it.
8. Addicted door Simple Plan
Becauseeeee... I dunno. lol
9. I Wanna Be Sedated door The Ramones
Because... it rocks.
10. Sing door MCR
Appropriate, isn't it?
11. a redneck country song
lol I dunno any, but it'll be funneh if he does.
12. Time to Dance door Panic!
Because I zei so.