kasteel [xy xx] Runaway while u can

I decided to make my first fan fiction about kasteel and Beckett so constructive criticism is appreciated. Please comment.




"It's getting late, we should sleep on it." kasteel zei looking at his watch.
Beckett looked up from the papers she was reading.
"Separately!" kasteel stammered quickly.
Beckett lowered her eyes to the floor.
"Katherine Beckett, I never..." kasteel whispered as he headed for the door.
"Well, why not, Castle? Am I not attractive enough for you?"
"No." kasteel zei turning around.
Beckett got up from her chair and walked over to Castle. "Then what is it? Don't u sleep with...