Dragon Ball Z DBZ Style story - Really need honest opinions :)

JSSummers posted on Nov 16, 2011 at 02:34PM
Hey Guys, Just looking for some help and advice.

I've written the first chapter of a story called Angel X thats kind of like dbz for action, and I just want to get peoples opinions on it.

Feel free to be brutally honest, let me know what you like and what you don't I would love to know, hope you enjoy it and thanks for your help - its truly appreciated :)

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