Eclipse

Elle sat motionless in the attic with her brother,she let herself scream but marcus quickly covered her mouth to avoid unwanted attention,she walked towards gwen's lifeless body and knelt down,marcus pulled her up saying'come on elle,we've gotta go'they carried gwen's body out and a few days later,they creamated the body,while standing there stareing at the flames,marcus turned and said'they're gonna pay elle,she turned to her brother and said'every last one of them....okay people i would love to read what u think about this,its my first attempt to write a novel so be honest but not rude.