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as always, please give CONSTRUCTIVE critisism. let me know things u like, dislike about my writting

and as this is a continuation, please read the afore episodes :D

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Episode 5: Responses

Monitors drone out the sound of soft breathing. It was a steady beeping that bounced knowingly off the think walls. A knock from the door startled a man lying aboard a hospital gurney, causing the beeping to increase mildly. “Carter?” Sleepily, Carter rubbed his eyes with his left hand, leaving the other...