What do u think of this fan fiction I made? It's based on my country.

It's good but it's not for me I hate Oc's and I hate when they magically come into an anime getting buddy buddy with the animes characters....but all in all it pretty good.....😐....

syew hart-, hart it , serious! mmg susahlarh nak jumpa auteur mcm awk nie! i salute you.