My latst poem!!!

"My Dearest Love"

u came into my life, door neither chance nor fate.
But door destiny, who zei for true love, I would no longer wait.
Like an angel, u fell from heaven, to Earth below.
u came into my life, and set my hart-, hart aglow.
Whenever u leave me, and what I say is true.
I lay awake through the night, my hart-, hart crying for you.
u are my only desire.
To anyone else, I could never aspire.
Though now u are gone, my dearest love,
I find peace, knowing u are watching over me from above.
And when, at last, eternity dies.
I rejoice at once again seeing the love in your eyes.
But in this moment, I shan't lose heart.
For not even death can tear our love apart.

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