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Devil Thy Name Is Woman

Id like to hear some feedback on my story. Like your opinion on the characters, what u think I should add to the story, etc. Your feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks!
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chokladen94 said:
I love your story! :D i like that in the last part u got to see a softer part of Svetlana that she cared. but at the same time its scary. i dont know what u could add to the story because its already very good and i know its gonna be better and better :) you're a great writer
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Thanks! I figured I'd put that in because it'll take some time but eventually she falls in love with Michael too.
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haha great :) i had a feeling that would happen
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