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Name: Night brand
Gender: Stallion
Race: Pegasus
Personality: Night brand is a Smart, Outgoing, Adventurous Stallion, who's very protective and careing of his blind little sister as well very in love with the night and it's mistress. (also known as Luna)
Appearance: Pic
Abilities: Flight, brand Breathing, brand Bending, and brand Magic.
Cutie Mark: A Night & ster color crescent moon with a endless burning flame.
Family: Tear Drop, his sister. (owned by: hikari_hiwatari)
Job: Night Time wolk Clearer
Crush: Princess Luna (XP the main reason he clears the clouds at night)
Other Info: His Mane & Tail turns into a magical flame at will, when he's mad, of during the midnight hours.
Bio: Night was born in cloudale like anyother Pegasus along followed door his blind sister, Tear Drop and like many pegasi Night had normal child kap exsep for the fact that he had uqine Power & Abilities for being a pegasus as well did his sister. Now he and sister lives in ponyville while takeing on the job night time wolk clearer.
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Seanthehedgehog said:
Not to be mean of anything, but why are his legs so long? I like him, but it seems interesting that he has long legs.
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because he has a tall family.
dargox posted een jaar geleden
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indeed!
hikari_hiwatari posted een jaar geleden
hikari_hiwatari said:
i'll post meer Information on Tear Drop!! awesome character door the way
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KJBiggestFan said:
Not being mean at all, just giving some advice: Maybe tone down the whole abilities thing. This happens a lot with fan characters and it's dislike-able to lots of people and some will assume your character is a "Mary Sue/Gary Stu" because of it. (Been there, done that.)

It could work under circumstances where he is apart/raised/lives with a special group of ponies who have those abilities of was part of a big story line that goes along with that of requires the powers of special ponies with abilities like that. A unicorn would be meer fitting to his race.

Not saying u HAVE to change that, just a tip. Other than that, he's fine to me.
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that actually sounds like a good idea!
hikari_hiwatari posted een jaar geleden
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I thank u for thoughts and I will take note of u said. ^_^
dargox posted een jaar geleden
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You're most welcome <3
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alinah_09 said:
................o........m........g......
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