My Little pony Friendship is Magic Article: "The Innocent" Case 1 ACT 1

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posted by SomeoneButNoone

My Name Is Slash...
I lived in Canterlot... But my mother died and I needed to verplaats to Ponyville... to my dad... Im not normal 15 years old Stalion... Im a detective... I wantet to be detective because of.... one thing...

jaar 1995 - Dream World

White Stalion - *have mes in one hoof and Mare in another hoof* HAHAHA! I WILL SAVE HER!
Police - Stop it! What do u want
Stalion - my god...
Mare - w-what the hell where we are
Slash Mom - ...
Slash - ugh...
Police - What u want?
White Stalion - hahaha... hahahahaha...
Police - ...
White Stalion - HAHAHAHAHAHA I WILL SAVE HER~!!! I WILL SAVE u ALL!!!
Detective - What he have with that all "Save" thing
White Stalion - I WILL SAVE HER AHAHAHAHA *put mes in mare body then put it in his head*

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The last I remember is scream and Police running to theme... it was my mom best friend... now Im in ponyville...
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"The Innocent"

Case 1 - the mystery murder

ACT 1 - New Start...

jaar 2014
Ponyville
Sparkle House

Sparkle - ahh welcome slash in your new home!
Slash - mgh...
Sparkle - hallo I know u hate me... but... for your sister... can we talk like familly?
Slash - ...
Sparkle - *give hoof to shake* deal?
Slash - ... *give hoof and shake Sparkle hoof* deal...
roze Filly - D-Daddy...
Slash - hm? Ah PinkCandy how are you?
PinkCandy - ummm who are u m-mister
Slash - uh... I just remember now she was young... Im your brother...
PinkCandy - B-Brother? B-Big Brother? Daddy is that my Big Bro u Talked about
Sparkle - yes my dear!
*Blue Stalion came to house*
Blue Stalion - ummm mr. Slash...
(This is my partner... BlueBlade... he is... annoying sometimes)
Slash - huh... *look on BlueBlade* what u want?
BlueBlade - uhhhh... nothing... really... I need to toilet and... my hot-
Sparkle - go...
BlueBlade - Thank u mr. Sparkle hehe *run to toilet*
Sparkle - hehehe...
Slash - he is older then me and he is like kid...
Sparkle - I think u need rest
Slash - Yea... I going sleep... *go to room*
uur 0:00

Slash - *wake up in strange place like destroyed city in noowhere* h-huh... w-what the... Hello?

??? - I am you... u are me...
Slash - What the... WHO ARE YOU! WHERE I AM!
??? - u want to hear a truth?
Slash - y-yeah...
??? - u are weak... u are very weak... u are dead!
Slash - What... Wait... This place... IS THAR DREAM WORLD!
??? - This place is created from ponies minds...
Slash - GOD DEMN IT! I NEED WAKE UP!
??? - u All Gonna Die...
Slash - *Wake up* HUH!... *sigh* What the hell was that...
PinkCandy - Umm... bro... Dad says u need to go to school
Slash - GOD DEMN IT SCHOOL!

Ponyville School
8:00
Classroom E-5

Teacher - This is our new Student Slash!
Slash - h-hi...
Blue Hat Wearing Mare - Ummm Mr. Can Slash sit volgende to me!
Teacher - hm? ohhh I get it... Detective need to stay with detective huh? ok then... Slash sit there...
Slash - *sit volgende to Mare*
BlueSparkle - Sup... Im blue sparkle
Slash - huh... u are detective too?
BlueSparkle - yup! Im detective with my Senpai ((( I love Word Senpai - Senpai is Older Persone than u coming to same school :D I gonna use it many times, well I gonna use ALL words Like that from Japan :)))) *give Slash a smile*
Slash - hm...

After School
16:30

BlueSparkle - Ahhh... finally ove-
BlueBlade - uhhh Slash-san (((another word)))
Slash - WHAT BLUEBLADE!
BlueBlade - W-We Have Problem...

Ponyville Street

Slash - W-Whoa! I never meet something like this...

*There is a body hanging from building rooftop*

BlueSparkle - w-what the! We NEVER had something like this

Slash - ... I think... We have a case...
BlueBlade - we have an- *run somewher* *viomit*
Slash - COMON BLUEBLADE WHAT THE HELL!
BlueBlade - I-Im s-sor- OH GOD *viomit again*

TwilightSparkle - I-I saw everything
Slash - What do u saw...
TwilightSparkle - I moved the streets an-and I saw this body... *start cry* My god....
Slash - mhm... we dont gonna get anything from u I see...
BlueSparkle - I dont get it... why someone hang bodies on rooftop... uh...
Slash - hmm... I dont know too
BlueSparkle - well... umm... Slash... uhh... *look on ground* N-Nevermind...
Slash - hmm... BlueSparkle How about we hang out toogether? maybay coffee of sometihng
BlueSparkle - um... ok...

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Something bad is going on... And I will NEED to know it... But I need to remember about my social life... and that dreams... Case, Life, Dreams... this everything must have something inside...

Too Be continued
In Act 2 - Case Start

BlueBlade

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SomeoneButNoone I had problems with adding Photos :/ I will try next time

_Laugh_ Quite awesome! ^_^

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alinah_09 so many Sparkle names...but anyway how about using "kun" too?

SomeoneButNoone I have it in plan alinah :)

SomeoneButNoone Oh yeah and many Sparkle name because... I dont have ANY idea of another name

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The last solstice - Chapter 34: Showdown at the Four Doors Café

posted by NocturnalMirage

The last solstice

AUTHOR'S NOTE: I usually keep this section at the end of the chapter, where it belongs, but this time I believe it is necessary to have it right at the beginning. It's been a long time, since I worked on this story and those who read it, might have thought it was finished of I abandoned it. Nope, it was just on hiatus. It's funny actually. I experience writer's block with my other fanfic, but yesterday, I got into the mood for some Celestia again, so I resurrected this story, because it still needs a chapter of two to finish properly. All right, now that we got this out of...

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Magic of Friendship: Part 2---Anti-socialite

posted by alinah_09

going inside i took a zitplaats, stoel near the windows at my left,i always liked being beside the windows where i can feel the wind,i stare out the windows for a bit,looking at the birds flying across the sky...so free,while im stuck in this jail

"hey...can i sit here?" zei an unfamiliar face

"what?...huh,oh,yeah,sure...go ahead" i zei a bit surprised

the mare had scarlet hair,a lighter shade for her vacht, bont and smaragd, emerald green eyes,i could tell that she was taller than me and that she's a transfer student because this was the first time i saw her,she was soon followed door two meer newbies who sat on her left...

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Silver Tune's Story 35

posted by _Laugh_

Silver Tune was laying on her bed. She was bored. After some minuten of silence, her sister, Roxy Tune entered the room. She smiled. Silver Tune stared at her sister.

Roxy Tune: Hey, Tunes. How's your throat?
Silver Tune: ... * looks down*
Roxy Tune: I can see you're still sick. * sigh* Will u be able to go to school tomorrow?
Silver Tune: *nods*
Roxy Tune: That's good. So, anyways.. I received a call from Trixie's mother. She zei that her daughter has gone missing. Have u seen Trixie lately?
Silver Tune: *shakes head, no*
Roxy Tune: I hope she's alright.
Silver Tune: *lays down*
Roxy Tune:...

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My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Christmas Contest 2013

posted by Quillabex

Merry Christmas, of should I say Happy Hearts Warming everypony! If u are reading this u are either one of the contestants of the contest of just curious to see who won! The choices were hard, but my friend Nalenthi and I have finally come to a decision.

Drum roll please!

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In first place, with 15 props, one fully colored artwork from me, one lineart from me, and a request/videogame/that type of stuff livestream iiiiiiiis

NocturnalMirage! Congratulations!

In 2nd Place, with 10 props, one fully colored artwork from me and one lineart from me iiiiiis

karinabrony! Congratulations!

In...

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Magic of Friendship: Part 3---100x the 'ugh's

posted by alinah_09

The volgende dag came like a bolt again going through the cycle of breakfast, bath time, wearing the school uniform and school itself. Having to go through activities wasn’t really that enjoyable to me as the activity this dag was song composing (on muziek period) but Mrs. Sync spared us some difficulty and got us to our temporary groups: one group for each row of arm chairs,vertically and also that we can take the melody from other songs and just rewrite the lyrics

“okay, so we get to be groupmates then” Liz zei to me as she gathered the rest of our group to huddle up

“so what do we do?”...

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Casino Royale Part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

In the train station, where Mr. Black, and Der Cheif was waiting.

Mr. Black: What is taking Hola so long? I can't trust her if she's going to do something too long.
Der Cheif: Gambling is a hard thing to do. Especially if you're not good at it. Hola is not good at gambling.
Mr. Black: And so I've noticed. *Turns on TV*
Reporter: This is CPN, Canadian pony News. We've received word that two ponies were chasing each other in a construction sight in Maredagascar.
Camerapony: *Zooms in on scene*
Mr. Black: That's Hola being chased!
Camerapony: Officials say that they do not know who the mare was,...

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Casino Royale Part 5

posted by Seanthehedgehog

That night, Con was sent to the airport to find Lasala.

Con: *Looking at passengers* (P told me Lasala was a grey stallion with a black mane.) *Continues looking*
Dutch ponies: *Looking at Con*
Dutch Captain: *Grabs walkie talkie* Now?
Lasala: Now.
Dutch Captain: *Looks at Dutch ponies* Now

All five of them grabbed sub machine guns, and started shouting

Dutch Captain: Everypony on the ground now!
Con: *Sees Lasala out on runway*
Dutch pony: *Goes to Con* Hey, get on the ground!
Con: *Teleports onto runway*
Lasala: *Grabs rocket launcher*
Con: *Pointing gun at Lasala* Stop!
Lasala: *Shoots rocket at Con*...

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Casino Royale Part 6

posted by Seanthehedgehog

volgende morning, Con was back at his strand house. The police misunderstood what Con was trying to do, and they took him back to his house, where P was waiting for him.

P: u put a great effort in preventing that airplane from being blown up.
Con: Thank u sir. Why was that pony trying to blow it up?
P: Ever since 9/11, security in airports have been very high. Some may even say too high. The United States of Equestria has tried to create a new jetplane which can spot terrorists, inside the plane, and security cameras mounted with lazers kill the terrorists. As a result, security in airports would...

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Casino Royale Part 11

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Con, and Vesper arrived at Vanhoover.

Con: u know what we should do first?
Vesper: What?
Con: I heard there was a great muziek store in this town. What we should do is get the newest CD from Queens Of The Stone Age. I really like their music.
Vesper: I think their muziek is good too.
Con: We'll buy one of their CD's then, but first I want to buy a nice, big house.

So, they bought a big house, and were on their way to the muziek store.

Con: *Walking volgende to Vesper*
Dutch ponies: *See Con*
Der Cheif: Not yet.
Dutch Ponies: This was Mr. Black's plan?
Der Cheif: Yeah. Get the mare.
Dutch Ponies: *Running...

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Games Ponies Play: Episode 1

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Ten Cents

Episode 1

Reporting Ponies

Game played: Grand Theft Ponies 5

Ten Cents: 10Cents
Jordan: Striker31
Unknown pony: Epicne$$
Unknown pony: bdp
Unknown pony: Zorin
Applejack: CombineHarvester01
Twilight Sparkle: $Money$

10Cents: *On train tunnel*
Striker31: What are u doing?
10Cents: I'm trying to jump on a train.
Striker31: *Stealing helicopter at an airport* Which tunnel are u at?
10Cents: I'm on the tunnel door the highway.
Striker31: Ok, I'm flying there now.

Epicne$$ has joined the game

Epicne$$: Aw yeah bitches, I am going to pown all your asses.
10Cents: Good luck with that.
Epicne$$: 10Cents? u must...

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Quantum Of Solace Part 5

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Moneybit's disguise

volgende morning, Con was going out to buy groceries.

Lola: Don't forget the canolli's.
Con: Yeah yeah yeah yeah.
Moneybit: *In disguise* Hello sir. I'm Matilda. Please come with me.
Con: I have to buy some food.
Moneybit: Just come with me.
Con: Whatever.
Moneybit: Taxi!
Taxi driver: *Stops*
Moneybit: *Pushes Con into Taxi, and gets in*
Taxi driver: *Driving taxi* Where to ma'am?
Moneybit: The airport.
Taxi: Okay. While we get to the airport, let me tell u a little something about myself. I was seven years old when I saw a taxi for the first time. I thought it was amazing how u could take somepony...

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Ponies On The Rails episode 22 part 2

posted by Seanthehedgehog

The train with the Korean War veterans stopped at the Cheyenne Station.

Pete: *looking at train*
Veterans: *Getting out*
Orion: *comes out of engine* I'm glad the war is almost over.
Pete: Me too, but honestly, we're making a lot of profit for delivering these vets back home pagina from San Franciscolt.
Orion: I agree. If we keep this up, we'll have millions of dollars on our hooves.
Captain Wilson: *walks to Pete* Are u Pete Reimer?
Pete: Yes sir. How can I help you?
Captain Wilson: I want to thank u for getting me, and my squad back home pagina safely. Oh, and uh I don't have enough cash for a hotel. You...

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Please read this it's a warning to all fan fic readers!!

posted by Macareina

Please read this: I am warning u of a fan fic that will make u not see Macintosh the same! Tittle: sweet appel, apple massacre. What it's about: I was scared almost to death reading cause it's about big Mac violating(raping) the cutie mark crusaders and killing them with knifes he is planing to do the same freakin thing thing with Applejack!!' O_O I hate this freakin horror stuff u must be either drunk,stupit,crazy,mental,rapest,and like to see girls die to read this crap! I have read this and I reget reading :(

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Ponies On The Rails: Season 2 highlights

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Theme song >>>> link

Seanthehedgehog presents

Season 2 Highlights of

Ponies On The Rails

Starring

Peirce Hawkins "Hawkeye" From Seanthehedgehog

Red Rose From Chibiemmy

Honey Bee From NaomiWinx

Coffee Creme From KarinaBrony

Snowflake & Orion From Alinah09

Metal Gloss From DragonAura15

Stylo From Jimmythedragon

Gordon, Percy, Jeff, Bartholomew, and Pete from Seanthehedgehog

Hawkeye: *stops train at station* Hi. I think u know where this is going. For ten episodes of this season, I have made many readers of this series very happy, and gave them a good laugh.Though personally, I...

The Racer (10 jaar Anniversary)

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Robotnik: Snooping as usual I see. *Takes cover as a Lotus passes through the hole, and lands in front of the logo*

A police car went through the hole as well, but it was going too slow, and landed on it's roof.

It was a warm evening in Appaloosa, as a Lotus sped down the highway being driven door two russian stallions.

Sergi & Apyr's Lotus Eltrot

This was playing on their radio: link

Seanthehedgehog presents

The Racer

Russian driver: *stops car*
Russian stallion: *gets out, with spraypaint*
Russian driver: торопить (Hurry)
Russian stallion: *sprays ster on sign*
Police ponies:...

Ponies On The Rails Episode 5

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Running from Chicacolt to San Franciscolt is a railroad called the Union Pacific. It's the largest railroad in the United States, and is run door thousands of ponies. This is the story of some of those ponies that run the rails, aka railroading.

Episode 5: War pony

May 15, 1951

The korean war has been going on for months. Everypony on the Union Pacific was doing their best to deliver supplies to Las Pegasus for use in the U.S military.

Gordon: *doing yard work*
Pete: Gordon, I have something for u to do.
Gordon: Great! I'm doing a lot of that here.
Pete: I want u to go to Las Pegasus.
Gordon: Cool....

Grand Theft Ponies: Manehattan Part 2

posted by Seanthehedgehog

The train yard was in a place called Woodstock. It's door Port Morris, and a few miles north of Midtown.

Once they arrived, Firearm stopped his car on a bridge going over the yard.

Pierce: Did Browning tell u what we're supposed to do?
Firearm: Not really. He just zei he wanted us to go on an "adventure" *Gets out of his car with Pierce*
Pierce: Well, good thing he told me what to do last night after we returned from St. Foalis. *Pulls out a WA2000 sniper rifle* The Hetfords are making a deal inside that train yard. We have to kill both the buyer, and the dealer. Got a rifle?
Firearm: I think...

Tom Foolery: Old Stomping Grounds Part 4

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Tom Foolery was now going to talk about dogs.

Tom: I love dat dog. I never met him before, but I know I love 'im.
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: He's gonna be wonderful when I meet dat dog. *Sticks his tongue out, and pants like a dog*
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: Lots of ponies have lots of doggies. And u don't even need to have a dog to know about 'em. Your friend could have a dog. He can be your friend's dog. That makes him your dog friend.
Crowd: *Chuckling*
Tom: u go there to visit, and the dogs there, u go to pet him, and say Hi hello. How are you? You're wonderful Sneezy, and for that moment, he's...

Tom Foolery: Old Stomping Grounds Part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Tom: Now this is a short segment where I like to inform u about simple things that not many ponies take time to notice. The first thing being we all have something in common, and that is...we're all here in Neigh Jersey.
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: At an auditorium. In a high school.
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: u ever wonder why Manehattan always gets so much praise?! It's a fucking dump!
Crowd: *Cheering, and laughing*
Tom: It's a cesspool of littering, rape, and traffic jams!
Crowd: *Laughing, and clapping*
Tom: There might be a few good landmarks here and there, but u have to wait 3 hours for 70 cars...

Tom Foolery With A Bit Of Salt Part 2

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Tom waited for the crowd to stop laughing. Once they did, he proceeded with his volgende joke.

Tom: Does the time bother you?
Crowd: *Chuckles*
Tom: I get bothered door the time. Not so much the time itself, but other ponies bother me. For the time.
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: u get this old mare that asks what time is it? What time is it?
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: As if, u yourself were responsible for keeping time.
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: I mean I feel honored that they think I'm the one in charge, but u must understand u don't see official time keeper here, do you?
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: Here's another way...