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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Hello. I wrote this artikel for people on this club that like writing fanfictions, but have the feeling that they don't do good. This artikel should help u out, and it might also encourage others to start writing fanfictions, if they haven't done so.

Again, this is for people on this club that feel like they want to do better, of just don't like reading/writing fanfictions in general. If u think you're good at writing, of do like reading/writing in general, give me some feedback.

There are many important things to have in a fanfiction.

1. A setting.

This is very important. If u don't have a setting in your story, the audience will be confused, and wonder where it takes place. u must include where the story takes place, and/or when it takes place.

Often, when I write a fanfiction that takes place today, I don't add when it takes place, but I always write down when it takes place, if it's in the past, such as my Ponies On The Rails articles. u can see the month, day, and jaar that each episode takes place in.

As I zei earlier, it's important to write down where your story takes place. Since this is a My Little pony club, u can have it take place in any of the towns for this show, such as Ponyville, Canterlot, Manehattan, Fillydelphia, of Vanhoover. u can also create your own towns like I have. Here's a lijst of towns I created for my fanfictions

St. Foalis - St. Louis
San Francisco - San Franciscolt
Norfoal - Norfolk
Chicagoat - Chicago

Other times, I use real city names for my fanfictions, like Cheyenne, Denver, Portland, and the town that I currently live in, Frenchtown.

2. Characters

u can't have a story without characters. Well... u could, but it would be boring. If u can't think of a creative pony name for your OC, try and use real names. That's what I've done with most of my OC's. Also, it's important to have a picture of your OC in the fanfiction so that the readers can understand what he/she looks like.

3. The type of story

There are many ways u can write a fanfiction. u can make a..

Comedy
Drama
Action
Adventure
Creepy pasta
Clop fic
Crossover

Comedy is the best type of fanfiction to write if u know a lot of good jokes. Keep your readers laughing as they enjoy all of the good humor in what you've written.

Drama is not a good type of fanfiction. From what I've heard, Drama is when u have a ordinary activity, filled with anger, shouting, and sometimes, punching someone in the face. of in this case, punching somepony in the face.

Action fanfictions can be very good, as long as u don't make it too violent. Entertain everyone reading your fanfiction door adding...

Gunfights
Car chases
Huge explosions behind a pony walking away with sunglasses
A fistfight on top, boven of a moving train
A fistfight on top, boven of a moving plane

This isn't all u need to fill your fanfiction with loads of action, but once u get started, you'll find meer ways to add action into your fanfictions.

Adventure fanfictions can be about many things, such as treasure hunts, searches for lost artifacts, of huge ripoffs of the Daring Do boeken that regenboog Dash loves to read. I haven't written an adventure fanfiction yet, but I plan to start, door creating an OC who turns out to be Daring Do's son.

Creepypasta is for bronies/pegasisters that like writing things about ponies being turned into cupcakes, of about Big Macintosh raping the CMC while killing them at the same time. If you're going to write a fanfiction like that, don't do it on this website. That's the last thing we need!

Clopfics are loathed door most people on this website. Basically, clop fics are about porn/rule 34. It may be perfect for Rarity, but not for us!

Crossover fanfictions are where u make a crossover of My Little Pony, with anything your hart-, hart desires. Most of my fanfictions are crossovers, mostly of films I like to watch.

4. The way to write a fanfiction

There are two ways of writing a fanfiction. The correct way, of the wrong way.

The wrong way is this.

"Hello." zei Vinyl Scratch

This is like watching a movie in black & white. u get your readers bored, just before they finish the first paragraph.

The correct way is this.

Pinkie Pie soon saw Maud.

Pinkie Pie: Guten tag!
Maud: *Looks at Pinkie* Oh... Hey.

It's quicker to write like this, and it's meer popular. However, u can't write like this in real life, unless it's for a play. However, this is the internet. Feel free to write like this, no one will stop you.

5. A plot

u must think about what's going to happen in your story. What's the goal? What's the conflict? How does it end? Here's an example from one of my fanfictions I wrote last year

Hedgehog In Ponyville Episode 8

On my deviantart, it's caleed Hedgehog In Ponyville: The Nazis Strike Back

The plot: Twilight Sparkle turns evil, and helps a scientist named Doctor Robotnik capture Princess Celestia. What they don't know is that somepony is disguised as Celestia. Spike, and Luna tell Sean, and Shredder about this, and have them try to rescue Celestia, while destroying the kasteel she is being held in.

Conflicts: Diamond Tiara, and Silverspoon kom bij them, but are double agents, working for Nazi Forces. regenboog Dash joins Sean, and Shredder, but loses to Twilight in a sword fight.
Diamond Tiara, and Silverspoon knock out Shredder, and attempt to escape from Sean. He needs to fight the two fillies on top, boven of a cable car.

Ending: A very close friend of Twilight is on the plane that Sean, Shredder, and their team gets on board. He attempts to kill Sean, but realizes that his plan fails, then jumps out of the plane without a parachute.

Now that u have seen the example, it shoudn't be difficult to make the plot, conflicts, and ending of your fanfiction.

That's all there is to it when it comes to writing a fanfiction. I wish u the best of luck on your future fanfictions. Everyone has their own talent, but anyone can write.

The end.
Twilight: If somebody had told me when I was a blank flank that one dag I'd give a speech to a class at Celestia's School of Magic, I wouldn't have believed it, but.. I hope that I have been up to the task, because I can tell that all of u are and that the future of Equestrian magic is in good hooves.

Spike: (sarcastically) Wow, hehe. That was even better than the first eleven times.

Twilight: Eh, I don't know, Spike. I'd like to be able to get through the whole speech without looking at the cards.

Spike: Come on, Twilight! u can't be nervous about giving a speech to a bunch of magic students!...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Date: July 2, 1961
Location: Cheyenne, Wyoming
Time: 3:00 PM
Railroad: Union Pacific

Pete: *Inside the station with everyone* Okay. There's thirteen of us. I will be the referee, and the rest of u must choose your teams. Pierce Hawkins, and Nocturnal Mirage are team captains.
Hawkeye: Okay. *Gets in front of everyone with Mirage* My first pick, Metal Gloss.
Metal Gloss: Yay. *Runs to Hawkeye, and kisses him*
Mirage: Why did I have the feeling u would choose her?
Hawkeye: Because she's my wife.
Mirage: Dan, you're on my team.
Dan: I am very pleased door this. *Walks to Mirage*
Hawkeye: Stylo,...
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added by NocturnalMirage
Source: EQD, joyreactor
added by NocturnalMirage
Source: joyreactor, EQD
posted by Seanthehedgehog
Date: May 25, 1961
Location: Cheyenne, Wyoming
Time: 9:45 AM
Railroad: Union Pacific

Percy and Jeff returned to the yards in time to see Hawkeye arrive in a freight train with Stylo.

Hawkeye: *Stops volgende to Snowflake's tower*
Stylo: Well it looks like Percy and Jeff just got back from fixing track.
Hawkeye: Let's ask them how it went.
Stylo: I'll do that, u go uncouple these engines from the freight cars.
Hawkeye: I did that last time. u do it!
Jeff: *Uncouples the engines from the freight cars with his magic*
Hawkeye & Stylo: *Looking at Jeff*
Jeff: Neither of u wanted to do it,...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Date: May 15, 1961
Location: Cheyenne, Wyoming
Time: 10:32 AM
Railroad: Union Pacific

Pete, and Hawkeye told their vrienden about the auction. Hawkeye also told the other ponies that worked with him.

By the time it was time to go home, Hawkeye stopped in Pete's office.

Hawkeye: How many ponies did u get to kom bij the auction with us?
Pete: Seven.
Hawkeye: I talked to everyone else. Metal Gloss, Mirage, and Dan have a few items to put up for auction.
Pete: Okay. The auction takes place on the 17th. Remember, we need to make over ten thousand dollars.

And on the dag the auction took place, it was...
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posted by SomeoneButNoone
(Pilot)

WARRNING : I don't mean to offend anyone and everything is only for jokes. No harash feelings.



Welcome to Dan Rants - place filled with my opinion and useless banter!
There will be some offensive stuff and profanity in really small way.
It also include jokes about Canadians. Just kidding Canadians are great.
For first episode I chose something everyone met : community.

Because I dont really consider myself brony anymore doesn't mean I don't take part in community. Let's thru some of basic community members.

The German Brownies - Rare but seen - they love a guy with name Adolf and surname...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Tim, and Julia interrogate the pony in the Ferrari they chased. When it was over, they spoke to Captain Jefferson in his office.

Captain Jefferson: So he's not part of the Low Riders.
Julia: No sir. He just zoomed past us over 100, and that's how the chase started.
Tim: He zei he was heading to a business meeting, but when he saw us chasing him, he tried to lose us on the highway.
Julia: How long is he going to be arrested for?
Captain Jefferson: 8 years. Attempting to kill u two didn't bring him any justice.

The Low Riders met up across the straat from the train station around 9 O' Clock....
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Sean and regenboog Dash stopped their cars outside of the barracks they were going to destroy.

Sean: *Using an MK46, and a Smith & Wesson 500*
Rainbow Dash: *Gets out a Striker Shotgun* Let's do this.
Sean: Okay. There's just one meer thing we need. *Opens the romp, kofferbak of his car, and grabs a backpack* Time bombs.
Rainbow Dash: u must have a lot in there.
Sean: Enough to destroy a building three times the size of this one. Let's go. *Walks towards the door. It's locked, so he breaks it down with his machine gun*

Song: link

Sean: *Goes in with regenboog Dash*
Nazis: *Coming from the right*
Rainbow...
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posted by Canada24
MEANWHILE:

Diamond: ONE VOTE!?.. Silver Spoon! u didn't vote for me?!

Silver Spoon: No, I didn't.

Diamond Tiara: But you're my best friend!

Silver Spoon: Am I? 'Cause I tried to help door mentioning your 'surprise' statue, and suddenly I wasn't even allowed to speak! u could have actually won this election if u just listened to me. u wanna know how? [whispering] Sorry. I'm not allowed to speak.

Diamond Tiera: (growls and storms off).

AppleBloom: Boy. She seems pretty upset.. We should check on her.

Scootaloo: We don't know that she's upset/. Not to a certainty. All we know for sure, is Diamond lost.

Diamond Tiera: (is heard screaming).

Sweetie Belle: What about now?

Scootaloo: Again, not enough evidence. For all we know, she's being murdered.

Sweetie Belle: (as if this ISN'T a reason a for concern) True enough.

AppleBloom: Yes.. But we should go anyway.
posted by Seanthehedgehog
Didont was standing volgende to his train. It was 9:15.

Nazi Pony: Engineer!! Start your engine!
Didont: *Climbs into his engine's cab*
German Ponies: *Covering up the artillery guns with tarps*
Didont: *Opens the regulator, and blows the whistle. The train starts moving*

There was wheel spin when the train left, but Didont poured some sand onto the tracks to give his engine meer traction.

The train was travelling at 30 miles an hour, and most of the surroundings were brick houses.

Meanwhile with the Colonel that we haven't seen since part 2, he was tonen up to the yards where his train was getting...
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added by NocturnalMirage
Source: facebook, joyreactor, EQD
posted by Seanthehedgehog
ezel ezel Inn

Starring regenboog Dash as Marisa Sayers
Double Scoop as Lloyd
Saten Twist as Mercury
Pleiades as Joanna
Master Sword as George
Mortomis as Ranger
Blaze as Richard

At the ezel ezel Inn, everyone was sad. A pony was dead.

Lloyd: Mercury was a good boss, a good friend, and-
Mercury: I'm not the one that died.
Audience: *Laughing*
George: It was Donovan who was killed. He was doing a job, killing a pony for creating counterfeit money, when the police shot him to death from behind.
Marisa: He also had some jobs for me.
Ranger: Really?
Richard: What kind of jobs?
Marisa: Blowjobs.
Audience:...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Theme Song: link

Master Sword: Come on Tom, let's go meet the others.
Tom: Right behind you.
Double Scoop: *Standing on straat corner*
Aina: *Runs out of her house*
Sunny: Hey, wait for me. *Flying in the middle of the street*
Saten Twist: *Polishing his chain saw, but stops to go meet the others*
Pleiades: *Arrives at corner*
Mortomis: *Standing volgende to Double Scoop*
Tom: meer ponies!!
Snow Wonder: *Arrives in a brand new Corvette*
Heartsong: *Climbs out of a manhole*
Annie: *Arrives on a bicycle*
Blaze: *Flies out of a house window, and lands volgende to Tom*
Sophie Shimmer: *Gets off of a slow...
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added by NocturnalMirage
Source: joyreactor
added by NocturnalMirage
Source: facebook, joyreactor
posted by Seanthehedgehog
 The pony with Jeff
The pony with Jeff
Date: August 9, 1959
Location: Ponyville, Neigh Jersey
Time: 4:00 PM
Railroad: Lehigh Valley

Jeff drove an inspection kar, winkelwagen on the train tracks to where the mainline needed to be repaired. Another stallion was with him.

Jeff: So, how long have u been working on this railroad?
Donovan: Since 1941. Before the line was dieselized, I drove lots of high speed passenger trains to Manehattan.
Jeff: Fascinating. *Stops the cart* Is this where we have to repair the line?
Donovan: Yeah.
Jeff: Alright then, let's get to work.
Donovan: How about you? What jaar did u start working for your railroad?...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
The Story of Corporal Agarn

Theme song

Though he goes on a rage from time to time
He is a very good friend of mine
And in Fort Courage he is well known as
Corporal Agarn

Starring Master Sword as Corporal Agarn
Tom Foolery as Captain Parmenter
Saten Twist as Sargent O' Rourke
Mortomis as Dobbs, the bugler
Snow Wonder as Wrangler Jane
Cosmic regenboog as Corporal Vanderbilt
Blaze as Corporal Duffy

And introducing the hedgehogs as the Indians.

Sean as Chief Wild Eagle
and Sonic as Crazy Cat

Corporal Agarn was helping Captain Parmenter put weapons in the supply room when this happened.

Dobbs: *Playing...
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added by NocturnalMirage
Source: facebook, joyreactor, deviantart
posted by Seanthehedgehog
Master Sword, and Tom were walking down the straat together.

Tom: So, how's everything going?
Master Sword: Not too bad. I got to see somepony drive a '67 Camareo. How about you?
Tom: Things are going fine for me. Except for my life on the computer. I keep getting these advertisements thanks to Spamdex.
Audience: *Small laughter*
Master Sword: What kind of advertisements do they send you?
Tom: Who cares? They're advertisements. They do not belong on the internet. It's not a place for commercials, it's a place for ponies to watch videos, play games, and post self portraits.
Master Sword: u mean...
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