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Call me wacko,call me " a weird one ",
i don't care,'cause u don't see...
u don't see the dept of my soul,
so call me what u want to...
When the sorrow tear my heart,
i hide my tears,i hide it from you,
'cause that's the way u can't see it,
the pain pulling me down and u don't feel
me the right way,the way i want...
Still the sorrow screams inside me,
that dark side of me u will never see,
u will never understand when i hush then
when i should say something,when i smile when i should cry...
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I don't like poetry but well done!
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Thank you. :)
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orangeturnip said:
a poem that sounds like a scream
a sadness inside ,
a message from your soul
a sad cry
but poems can be from the heart
can also be ...
from a position of empathy of anothers pain
either way i hope u can see
the sun is shineing (i wish looks likes its gonna storm)
any way i didn't want to write a short answer
i wanted to express that i loved it
but in doing so i
waffled and draged out my responce un neccercererly long and lost my sence of spelling with the pain of brain freezing numbness

any hoos

this is for u
♥
and dont break it.
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Thanks... I won't....
irena83 posted een jaar geleden
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awwwh.
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life_rehab said:
this is nice. really. i read poetry quite a lot and i'm a rather harsh critic but i do believe that this is pretty good. i mean, it's not Whitman of Shakespeare of whatever and you'll have to work hard and practise a lot to develop your talent, but this is 'you', u know, a little piece of your soul under the mask of words and it is quite beautiful...if u polish it a little bit, it will be really good. nice job:)
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Thanks a lot...
irena83 posted een jaar geleden
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i hope u didn't mind my answer (i'm not sure if your commentaar is sarcastic of not...). really, that's just what i think... nevertheless, i like the poem and it shows great potential but you'll see that if u keep writing, you'll definitely evolve, you'll get better with every poem -- again, this doesn't mean that i don't like it cause, well, actually i do. anyway, i also wanted to say that it's nice to see other young people interested in poetry:)
life_rehab posted een jaar geleden
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life_rehab; this ----> but this is 'you', u know, a little piece of your soul under the mask of words ... IS BEAUTIFUL! oh em gee
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Vixie79 said:
"you will never understand when i hush then"

I love how u did this line, love the word hush too. ♥♥♥
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:) ♥ thank you.
irena83 posted een jaar geleden
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lol
CB4evaGiggles posted een jaar geleden
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You're welcome hon ♥
Vixie79 posted een jaar geleden
CB4evaGiggles said:
wow, i think thats a really good, and about the soul poem, i like it!

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Thank you. ♥
irena83 posted een jaar geleden
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your welcome!! ur good!
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Pikafan32 said:
It's another beautiful accomplishment. Truly a fascinating write.
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aw thank u so much. :)
irena83 posted een jaar geleden
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:3 Your welcome
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clanbillr said:
Hi "irena83",
Thank u for the awesome poem, "Again"!! We all get to wear our disguises because we don't want certain people to see how we're really feeling inside!! But those disguises end becoming walls so we don't get hurt again!! u sound like a truly loving and caring lady and someday the right person will come into your life!!! Just be aware that sometimes love is only there for a short while but it can feel like a lifetime!!!
So your neither wacko of weird, it's just life!!! Your poems are from deep down inside of u and keep letting them out!!!
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Hi "irena83", Thank u for the awesome poem, "Again"!! We all get to wear our disguises because we don't want certain people to see how we're really feeling inside!! But those disguises end becoming walls so we don't get hurt again!! u sound like a truly loving and caring lady and someday the right person will come into your life!!! Just be aware that sometimes love is only there for a short while but it can feel like a lifetime!!! So your neither wacko of weird, it's just life!!! Your poems are from deep down inside of u and keep letting them out!!!
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Yes i agree with you,we all wear our disguises so those one's who can hurt our feelings easily can not see that. We try to cover that,our weakness.
irena83 posted een jaar geleden
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Thank u and yes they are deep, i can say a cry of my soul.
irena83 posted een jaar geleden
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We all have that same weakness inside of us!!!! I know it's your poem but we all cry in our souls!!!
clanbillr posted een jaar geleden
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Oh yes we do.
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CullenProperty said:
Pretty. Are u writing it from past experiences from someone that hurt u of just because u can?
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Well actually i wrote that from my personal experience. It did happen a long time ago, but i guess i didn't forget.
irena83 posted een jaar geleden
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On one hand it's funny that we can't seem to forget those things! But on the other hand it's great that we don't so we don't have to repeat and go through them all over again!!!
clanbillr posted een jaar geleden
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oh well, thats sadening & pretty cool at the same tim
CullenProperty posted een jaar geleden
NatyLy said:
I love it! good job! :)
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:) Thank you. ♥
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