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This poem is devoted to every girl who'sad and feels like nobody understands her...I'd like to hear your opinion.

Sitting in her room,listening her favoriete song over and over again...
Her head is full of thoughts she won't share with anybody but paper...
She's alone,no matter if there's somebody around.
She's alone with her thoughts,trying to get away,to suppress the dark side of her soul,to kill every dark thought that travels through her mind...
And remember,dream is just a fantasy,you won't escape from your fear,you won't find your cure dreaming better days...
And she cries only when she's alone,so nobody can hear,and she prays for the dag when the Sun will shine again,the dag when she will feel the joy of life,the purpose will be bright...

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NICE WORK!!! its nice!
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Thanks...
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i understand all thiz
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GaGaBoi said:
Personally i think she needs to get laid.
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lol
irena83 posted een jaar geleden
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LOL!
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WOW!!
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LuvWeezy7 said:
Just so u don't freak out i am stating MY opinion. :)

I thought it sucked. Maybe it was good for your level of work but to me it wasn't all that great.
This must be just me but, it wasn't put together all too well. Some words didn't fit in there and other words didn't even exist where they needed to be.

Other than that u do have a good idea i must say.
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Sorry for being a critic. I just have a thing for writing and your mistakes bugged me. :( Please don't take this personally.
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No,it's ok. I like honest answer.
irena83 posted een jaar geleden
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well,i'm not american,and therefore i can not express myself the way i want...
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xxXsk8trXxx said:
Honestly...me and most other girls I know are nothing like that at ALL.
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Thanks for being honest. But this poem is about barriers that should be broken. One frozen moment of sorrow.
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How emo. Why are there no happy poems anymore? Do all poems have to be about some type of 'sorrow' that's ruining your life?
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thanks
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depp-fan said:
ITS VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!
I LOVE IT
GREAT JOB!!!!!
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thanks honey.
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Goth-Girl-36 said:
i love it! it sounds alot like me.
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amethyst44 said:
i love this. poetry is something u should pursue. ;) <3
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;) thanks a lot.
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energizerbunny said:
I think it's a good poem, I believe there are girls like this, I may not know any but I think there are and I feel sorry for them
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thanks...
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Jamie38459 said:
It's a sad poem, so very true,that it was made 2 the others who R feelin bloo. Sorrowful and a painful life, that (maybe) only we can tell, that she'll feel down everyday, and may feel worse than hell(maybe).
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nice comment... thanks.
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Ur welcome :)
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skillet_luvr said:
I like it. It's really good. :)
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thanks...
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zanesaaomgfan said:
Funny...That reminds me of some girl at my school, who has issues...She touches u in uncomfortable ways that u couldn't explain, she asks to be her friend when your in a bad mood, she laughs when somebody else can't answer the vraag but when the teacher calls on her she stays quiet, and she laughs at her own insults, so if u say, "Oh, u stink!" She'll freakin' laugh like your insulting yourself. Shes such an idiot! Thats why I refuse to be her friend!
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Maybe u should be her freind, you'll find out that people can surprise u like I did
K5-HOWL posted een jaar geleden
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If she touches my boobs, like she did today, should I? Umm no.
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zutaradragon said:
sounds like me...
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TheFunnyChick95 said:
Completely describes me. Thank you... :)
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What!?
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josh-ada said:
OMG!!!!
ITS SO LOVELY POEM!!!!
i m not like that girl but that poem made me cry :(
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Thanks...
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DWLoverTBCEDT said:
that's beautiful, I love it
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thanks...
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K5-HOWL said:
Yup
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Yup
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aw i like it....
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fabstar said:
luv it :)
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thanks...
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JB4E said:
I love the poem, I simpily love it.
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thanks...
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Vixie79 said:
I love this one. Like I zei before, I'm so glad I'm not the only one that feels this. For years I did. Some of my fantasies have been such agony, because I never could experience them. This poem was simply written truthfully and straight forward. I Love it! ♥
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