random poem i wrote..but i need a name for it.most creative name gets compliment :D

i was really bored..and imn study hall. its not my best poem..not even close. but i need a name for it.lol



I see u coming, i must think fast
I hide the knife, and take your raft
yes i love you
this is true
but your the reason, i feel so blue



u smile at me, i wonder why
all i can do is cry
no, i wont forget u care
that your always there
just give me back my lighter
it makes my life brighter

I hear u want to give me away
dont deney it, ill be okay
just dont say u love me
and dont try to hug me


Yes im backing away
leave me this way
just give me the gun
and then u can run
u cant help me today
all u can do is pray
but it wont make me stay

it might not be that great..but i like nameing all my work. lol

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this poem isint about my bf. i was thinking about my brother at the time.lol
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HaleyDewit said:
How about: I can't spell,but I still love you.
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XD
MrOrange16 posted een jaar geleden
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what did i spell wrong??
outsidersfan_14 posted een jaar geleden
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a lot of things
HaleyDewit posted een jaar geleden
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oh..well im not a good typer.
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LunaShay said:
Never Forget You.....






IDK I PANICKED DX(No,i just cant think of a title<_<)
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lol its fine
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MrOrange16 said:
Brother Dearest?

I don't know. I can't come up with good titles.
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neither can i. obviouslly.lol.
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Meh, I tried....
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ginnyweasleyfan said:
Oh dear brother...
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Fizzy-Izzy said:
At first I started door thinking: Leave Me
Then I thought: I'm leaving
But then I realised the tune I was reading it to!!!!!!!!! and I think u should call it................................................
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BABY!!


Well...... I liked some of the others better, but Baby made me laugh.

I hate JB btw. I can't wait to here him hit puberty!!
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cudambercam13 said:
Suicidal Questioning.
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