Narration contest! 10 complimenten to whoever does a god job!

With u as the narrator, describe meeting someone with your appearance. I'll do an example:


The slouched figure barely standing before me was an odd one. The dark, loosely fitting cloths made the built intermediate. But I could see that he wasn't very tall (maybe 5'0 at the most) There was something about the person that made me doubt that the small stature was an indication of age, so i looked to the visage for clues. The face was a square, near-white landscape with the hills of acne scattered over it. The left cheek was oddly risen and spherical. Beneath the black and gray striped hat, lackluster gray-green eyes stared at me with an indifference and (i didn't notice it at first) a nervous light that gave life to the sullen mask.
As far as i could tell, this person was either a melancholy midget, of perhaps a rather ugly boy no older than 13 (it was hard to tell)
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WOW ! You're a great writer :)
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LUV_4_BIEBER said:
She sat on the bench, dressed in dark, loosely fitting attire, not caring that the rain was drenching her. Her once curly shoulder-length hair was framing her pale hart-, hart shaped face, making her blue eyes stand out from the darkness about her. As I got closer, I could see the small scars her bracelets werent covering. Her lips were thin and a light shade of soggy, nude lip gloss was covering them. Now that her black eyeliner was spreading out around her eyes, the blueness was almost inhuman. She saw me and spoke with a soft tone. "Why the hell are u staring at me?" she said.
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u paint such a vivid picture. Wait right there! I'm geting your props!
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Aww! Im a good painter lol :)
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InvaderStickly said:
As I gazed at the dark shadow, it started to become less blurry. I could see the long curls in her hair, the light red and yellow hair lines, and then her head. Her head, nearly the size of say Michael Cera's head? Her short eyebrows, her small, shining blue eyes. Her not dark yet not pale skin, her skinny black clothing. She weighed about 140 lbs. She wore the black clothes that were very tight, similar to Cat Woman's clothing. She wore tight black cloves as well. She had no shoes on, so u could see a bit of her toes nearly at the bottom.
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u sure did add some personality with the observations.
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