I wrote this dream for the Harry Potter Club and I want others opinions.
My HP dream:
It t'was the seconde wizarding war, a cold dreary night. Instead of Harry, Hermione, and Ron, it was Me, my best friend Lilly, and my bgf- Dan. Together, we were carefully walking in London, Remus door our side. Out of a portkey, another friend, Emmalee comes out and is out of breath. 'Voldemort *pant* is back *pant* looking for u *another pant* if u don't come soon *you get it don't you? pant/gasp* he will kill every last person' I told her to go back and keep fighting till the bitter end. Since I knew what was going to happen to Remus, I told him, 'Ever since my parents died, you've been like a father to me, *gave him a hug* and I know every little thing that's going happen once we go back. u and Tonks will- die. I'm sorry.' he drops to his knees and cries in pain and fustration. I cry with him. Then regaining my composure, I turn to Dan. Knowing I'm going to die as well, I reach for his hand. And hold it as tight as I can, then pull him closer. He reaches around my waist as I kiss him carefully. Over my shoulder, I hear Lilly comforting Remus. Right now all I care about is my love, Daniel. (not Daniel Radcliffe, he's my real friend. But ironic isn't it?) As I draw away, I make sure to give Lilly one last hug.
Lupin opens a portkey to hogwarts, as we enter we all spleet, split up. I walk to the astronomy tower, awaiting my fate. I turn the corner and see Bellatrix, contemplating her strategy. I walk right out into the open and let her see me. 'AVADRA KEVADRA! AVADRA KEVADRA!' And I see myself die. I'm not dead but I'm dead. I can see her through other eyes. I feel no pain, yet something deep inside me stirs. She walks away laughing triumphantly. 'Wake up child.' 'I am NOT a child' I reply to the mysterious voice. 'Yeah right.' another voice says. 'She is meer of an adult than u will ever be.' I hear Sirius say. 'Dont speak to Fred like that, Sirius. It's not fair. She will grow, he won't.' Fred died?! Oh yeah. I knew that. 'Mom?' I say. 'Hi baby.' M