So, I want to be a director when I'm older but I at least want some commentaren on my movie summary...please be honest but no mean commentaren please!!

"Pandemonium"
A movie about a 14 jaar old girl and a 16 jaar old boy, Annie and Blake, who live in the country with their parents. One hot summer day, a tornado breaks out and destroys the farm house, kills the whole family except for the teens, and leaves everything a complete wreaks. They start to travel to find a safer place to live, but the tornado is not like other tornado's...it breaks out trying to kill the teens in almost every city that they go to. Along the way, they meet 3 survivors. A man, his 8-year-old daughter, and their dog, Jess. They all set out to find safety in New York City where the tornado stops, but when the tornado hits them inexpertly, they all take cover in a small shed. But as Blake tries to get everyone inside, a piece of wood flies to him and Jess the dog jumps in the way to save his new friend! But the wood hits Jess's ribs and slowly kills the dog (dramatic scene). Little girl, named Louise, crying and her daddy badly wounded. They soon make it to New York City and they all go to the hospital and start a new life as one family. At the very end of the movie, it shows Blake standing on a high heuvel door their home pagina in NYC, which is a large ranch with horses and stuff sort of out in the country, and he's looking out and watching the sky. Annie calls him for lunch and he says "I'll be there in a second!" and then stares back at the sky. He then says "Don’t ever come back..." mostly remembering the tornado. Then he goes to eat. Then it goes to another city in another country and shows the country side and a family and stuff, and then the tornado comes out of nowhere and wipes out the farm. A piece of wood from the shed flies to the camera and the screen goes to black. The End (:
What do u think?
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IloveMyLord said:
I didn't read Your summary .
But I have To say, If u have a Dream Now
Do Your Best To reach It
Don't Wasting, door say I Will ,Say I'm.
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Usui--takumi said:
That's a cool story
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