What do u think of my poem?

Standing in self-hatred,
drowning in my tears,
looking back on my life,
what I've been through the past 18 years.
Living in my sister's shadow,
everything I do and say,
wishing somehow things would change,
prayong for a way out.
Same old shit just another day,
living this evil life that was created just for me.
Starving for love, affection, and attention,
I know none of this os how it's really supposed to be.
I try to be strong,
even though I feel so weak,
feel like just giving up,
but I can't accept defeat.
Pretending like I'm always happy,
although I'm never really okay.
Waiting for the end,
the pain I feel everyday.
It's hard to say what's wrong,
when nothing goes right.
Hard to keep myself going,
when I've been blinded door darkness.
This pain is never ending,
it just goes on and on and on.
It's all so unbelivably real,
I just wish it all was gone.
Trying to pick myself up,
when I've fallen so far and hard.
But I don't know where I'm going,
it's all so very dark.
My hart-, hart is weak, my emotions sore,
I do my best to never let it show.
But deep down inside I feel like I'm dying,
and nobody knows.
A lot of fucked up thoughts,
run through my head constantly.
I just wish I didn't live,
this life is misery!
 kfchater94 posted een jaar geleden
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blackrose294 said:
Its ok.
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Lulu_Kururugi said:
i loved it, its sad but also understandebale. i have felt like that alot of times in my life
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thank you.
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ISABELLA92 said:
I'm sorry that I never knew these things. I wish u would have told me u felt this horrible. I'd have done something different. I'm sorry that u couldn't tell me how u truly felt. I'm sorry I'm not here for you. I'm sorry that even through our friendship we couldn't talk about this. Mostly I'm sorry that I make u feel this way.
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u don't make me feel this way. The world does. Although I do live in your shadow which sucks. And our friendship has nothing to do with this.
kfchater94 posted een jaar geleden
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Right now I'm just so angry at her. Not at you. So don't beat yourself up too bad. It's not u whose hurting me.
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Message me we need to talk!
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Dream-On said:
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asshole
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I'll Take That as a Compliment
Dream-On posted een jaar geleden
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whatever
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:D
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Kevy1 said:
I read this poem and imagine some rock muziek behind it and that was awesome. And I relate to it at some level.
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thank you.
kfchater94 posted een jaar geleden
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u should make band of something because it would be cool to hear your poem on radio I think it would be a hit.
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Lol. Yeah that would be cool.
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BeastBoyCahill said:
Ummm... Well, that was... Cheery...
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xXitachiXx said:
I love it great job.
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