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how do u like my song?

for all the kids who lost parents in the war.

a girl sits door the phone
waiting for her dad to come home
he's been gone a long time

he has been acros the sea
but the girl waits so she can see
him come home

but she's waiting
for a call that will never come
though the days grow long
he's neva comeing home
cause she's
waiting for a call that will neva come

the girl sits door a pine
thinking bout what they will do
with there time

they will have so much fun
out in the summer sun
she thinks but

she's waiting
for a call that will neva come
though the days grow long
he's neva comeing home
cause she's
waiting for a call that will neva come

the days pass by
she's never seen the glint of his eye.
then she sees her momma cry.
she knows that calls neva going to come

she's waiting
for a call that will nva come
though the days grow long
he's neva comeing home
cause she's
waiting for a call that will neva come
it ain't neva going to come.

mostly my songs are really happy but I was reading the news and though so many kids and teens lost their moms and dads because of a war. I just though they would like it.
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HaruLuver said:
I like it
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HenryFammy said:
I think it's ok but if u want honest feedback, I'd just go to www.Formvote.com
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