I'M OFFERING FREE CRITIQUES BECAUSE I'M BORED

Err, okay?

Name: Aurora Centauri
Age: Currently 16
Species: Fox
Picture: (below)
Friends: Meiko, TJ
Enemies: None until RPs.
Power: Can phase for a short period of time, but not through any made of energy. Light.
Bio: Aurora comes from a planet called Solaris. She is their guardian/protector. Meiko is there, keeping Solarians veilig from the plague that spread and TJ was nowhere to be found after a sacrifice. Aurora has very weak powers because she has a barrier set around their small planet. She crash landed on Mobius (don't have full details on this yet) and is trying to find her way home. Since her planet is far away and the barrier is still set up, she often gets terrible migraines. As a Solarian, she can gather any bron of light for a little amount of power to keep her going.

...So..?

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(i'm also bored)

Name: Stardust
Gender: female
Personality: Fun, sexy, daring, friendly, mature, sometimes playful.
Powers: squirts water out of her mouth, can control water, and can control the wind.
(and she's also a warrior)

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Moshi,the Panda :3
(sorry about the bad digital art piece i need to re draw him its been abit XD)

Name:Jector
Age:16
Species:Hedgehog
Friends:Retrix,Mary,Rin,Dj Mixx
Enemies:Zecro,and Brojic
Attacks:Kamehameha,Kaioken finish,and Final Flash
Forms:Demon,Dark,Chaos,Sharigo,ssj,ssj2,ssj3,ssj4
Bio:Jector was born in his own planet name Zecrom
He train to become meer stronger than his Brother Sojy
But he can't surpass him their parents had to Send both of
Them to earth because the planet had been destroyed door someone of something,when he and his brother finally
Grow up and get stronger they keep a promise to thier parents to avenge them and thier planet.

Go ahead and Judge XP

O.o... *I'm sorry, this user has passed out from trying to decide which character to use, please call back at a later time, this is a recording*
*beeeeeeeeeeep*

Okay, I'm kind of bored and curious, so meet my MAIN character.

Name: Kyle Perry Waktini

Age: 15

Species: Hedgehog with a pinch of Nighless DNA (Formerly human)

Friends: Okay, WAY TOO MANY TO LIST

Enemies: Baneful the Maniacal, Tempus Rasoulin, Geminus Fogspray

Attacks: Rasoul Projectile, Rasoul Blade

Forms: None

Home: Northern District, Freedom City

Bio: Kyle Waktini was born a human. Both of his parents are human, therefor he was born a human along with his brother and twin sister. However, all three kids were turned into Mobians through a chemical accident in their dad's science lab (Who is a scientist). Kyle has a small pinch of Nighless DNA (Nighless are a species made door me), which grants him Rasoul powers and abilities. However, he doesn't know how to use his Rasoul powers quite well yet, and he's still training to learn how to use them better. They grant him some power, but the meer he uses them, the meer tired he gets because using Rasoul slowly leeches away at his stamina (Or quickly leeches, depending on what attack he is using and how much he's using at once). Kyle is a small-time hero who does not want fame of glory, he just does what he does because he enjoys doing it. Baneful was the first villain he ever faced, and they share quite a bond with each other, actually.

I would like someone's opinion on my newest character, so...

Name: Ginger "Ginny" Morgans
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Species: Mongoose
Occupation: universiteit Student
Relatives: Felix and Phillipa Slater (adoptive parents)
Sophie Morgans (sister)
Melanie Morgans (sister)
Friends: Cody Stevenson
River Spark
Rivals: Amber Prower
-No known enemies as of yet...-
Bio: Oldest of her sisters, Ginger felt obliged to protect her siblings when her parents left them. Ginny was an intelligent pupil in school. Not much happened until they got adopted door Felix and Phillipa. After a few years, they let her go to universiteit to study literature.
She later entered Amber's social group, gaining instant popularity from Amber's friends, but Amber held a grudge against her because of it.

End of character profiel thing :3

Name: Mr ZebraPants (Kazuki Swan)
Age: Too old for you.
Status: Married with a yandere woman, who name is May.
Personality: Is a gentleman, but dosent notice this himself. He got Spanish butt and he likes coffee and working.
Likes: His green hoofdkussen, kussen and your bed, if it's comfy. Also, if u feed chocolate for him.
Dislikes: That you're still staring his butt, goddamn you. >8T Also, being too tired.
Mottos:
"Let's just all come down!"
"May, no."
"Goddammit, May."
"Would u like some meer coffee, Mrs Swan?"

Art is btw Touching-Heaven, design and character is mine. >8T

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Just gonna stick this here for whenever u get up to it.
Some of it does need updating, though- I'll just note those things here instead.
'While he tried to help people during the mass activation, he sid quite the opposite- Sparking up fueds with his 'unhelpful' allies and his brother. Eventually, he left, preferring to work with the two Helix members, Enlai and Raisa, and their Virus, Damien. During this, he caused even meer problems for the other Acolytes- Including but not limited to betrayal and killing survivors. Whether this was an accident of not is still unknown to them all, and Evan is still working to try and pay his vrienden back for all this now that he's matured a bit.'
Annnnd a quick few notes on Pathogen, itself-
Acolytes are beings who represent their own individual element. With enough practice and time, they slowly go from 'human with powers' to 'living embodiment of X' with 'X' being their element. They are a species of infected created door the Acolyte Virus, Damien- And arguably Damien and his Acolytes are the most powerful characters in Pathogen.
Damien is not the only sapient Virus, however- They're divided into two very distinct 'classes'- The naturals (Influenza, Smallpox, Bubonic Plague, Ross River, etc) and the Mades, (Necrotic Plagues 1-9, Acolyte Virus.) While the naturals are much meer dominant, the mades are often meer powerful, as they've been tampered with to be better than anything nature could create. Most naturals are made-hating, which may of may not extend to the Viruses infected, of any species of their creation. (Stalkers, Banes, Banshees, etc.) There is, however, a movement Cain (Smallpox,) Nigel (Influenza,) and Zayden (Bubonic Plague,) are working particularly hard on, to try and get equal rights for Mades. Zayden is the father of the Necrotics- His made daughter, Annabelle, being Evan's wife.
Helix Combine, for further reference, is a fucked up organisation much like Cerberus from Mass Effect. Notable members are the CEO, Enlai Zhang, Necrotic project leader, Nathan Knight, Acolyte project leader, Raisa doesn'thaveasurnameyet, and Weapons producer, Matthew Vega. (Who's Evan's brother's boyfriend, hurr.)
Also there's Cures and Vampires and shit but they don't bother Evan too much so I won't talk about them here.

Shadey D. Grey
Age: 15 angel, 1567 mortal
Gender: both (mainly female)
Species: Hedgehog (vampangel)
Bio: A dark vampangel, disgraced from her home pagina to Mobius, when found door a worker. And living within a factory that kills for money. Living for the jaar of 1507 years of age, learning nothing but torment and killing, and losing the beating she once had. Love was washed from her, and her need for love grew, as she says she doesn't need it. Her life, as dark as the night she loves, knows nothing of her love. Oddly, no one knows why she fears snow and winter.

Shadey: Now... critique.

His bio's too long to lijst here so....check out the link please

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