Duncan's POV
Ok, so I'm sitting on the bus just waiting for Gwen to arrive. We go to her stop and I look out the window to see LeShawna patting Gwen's back while Gwen is still in small tears. I smacked my forehead. Ugh I'm such an idiot. I don't know what came over me! If I was totally sane at that moment, I would've even picked up the phone to answer Courtney's call and this would've never happened. Gwen, LeShawna, Bridgette, and Heather boarded the bus. Bridgette sat with Geoff from the zitplaats, stoel across from me again, Heather sat in the zitplaats, stoel behind Courtney, LeShawna sat behind Trent, and Gwen sat volgende TO TRENT! Did she just do that to me pissed? Focus Duncan, we're not talking about Trent here. I need to apologize to Gwen. I peeked my head out of the aisle. "Um, h-hey Gwen." I stuttered. She didn't answer. All she did was just sit there and stare into the ceiling. Man, I really blew it this time. My first love is probably never going to forgive me. But, I can't give up. Maybe on a smelly stinky bus filled with noisy 16 jaar olds isn't the right place to apologize to Gwen.
Trent finally spoke, "Haven't u done enough Duncan? u broke my girls heart, you-" I interrupted him. "Wo, Wo, Wo, what do u mean door your girl? Last time I checked, u were taking an attraction to Courtney." He shrugged his shoulders. "Mm, Courts ok but y'know, our relationship is only temporary. Besides, Gwen's a real girl, a girl who deserves affection, something that a mohawk wearing punk can't deliver to her." I swear, I was seriously going to stempel, punch that dude. " Oh yeah, and a gitaar playing, hairspray wearing, Elvis is?" I responded. "Whatever Duncan, Gwen will be mine. Besides, she's way too weak to resist. If u haven't noticed, Gwen isn't really the type of person who would stand up for herself. She's so gullible." He chuckled. Ok, now I am P-I-S-S-E-D! No one, talks about Gwen that way. I'm surprised that she wasn't hearing this. i guess she's too lost in her thoughts. That jerk! He doesn't deserve such an amazing girl like Gwen. Snap out of it Duncan, we're not focusing on Trent. That dude's just trying to be a distraction. The bus stopped,and everyone exited the bus. Before Gwen could walk into the building, I grabbed her door the arm, and pulled her to a corner. She was squirming in my arms. "Let go of me jerk! I'm going to be late for class. I just kept on holding on.
(This is going to be a convo. I'm too lazy to write who's talking but it's pretty clear. Here's a hint, it's back to back starting with Duncan.)
"Gwen,"
"Leave me alone. Why don't u just run along and go make out with Courtney?!"
"Courtney doesn't mean anything to me! You're the one I like."
"Really? Cause it didn't look like it Saturday night."
"Please, I just want u to forget about Saturday. Saturday was the biggest mistake of my life. I don't know what came over me and I regret every thing that I did to hurt you."
"Well, it's too late for apologizing. I just think that it would be better for us both if we just stay apart."
(Gwen get's up and starts to leave)
"No, Gwen. Don't leave me, I beg of you. I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I, DUNCAN MILLERS, LOVE GWEN FABRAY" (i know it was gwen rivera last time but i decided to change it)
(Duncan gets down on his knees)
"Duncan, just get up, everyone is starting to stare."
"Let them stare. I want to be with u Gwen, no other girl, IN THE WORLD! I love u so much. I wouldn't be able to live with myself, knowing that u aren't veilig and away from danger."
(Duncan holds Gwen hands and Gwen blushes)
"I may not be able to give u the world, but I can treat u like u are the world. u mean everything to me and I never want to let u go."
(Duncan had tears in his eyes)
"Duncan, I..."
"Just give me another chance plz!" (Duncan pulls up his overhemd, shirt sleeves to reveal tons of cuts.) I cut myself just because of my mistake. Because I was missing u and me. The best thing that's ever happened to me, I screw up!
(Duncan gets angry, takes out his mes and starts cutting and stabbing himself screaming, "Stupid, stupid, stupid!")
(Gwen takes the mes out of his hand)
"I would never be able to live with myself knowing that u were hurt because of me. Duncan, I absolutely LOVE u with all my heart. I was just devastated so much because I would never think that the person I love would do that to me. u mean the world to me and I now know that u are really sorry for your mistake and I"m sorry for my mistake too, but hey, we all make mistakes. I'm just really glad that we're sorting this all out. I love u Duncan and I will never ever let go of that love no matter what."
"So does this mean u forgive me?"
(Gwen leans in for a kiss and Duncan and Gwen kiss for at least 40 seconds)
"Does that answer your question?"
"Pretty much."
(Gwen notices Duncan still bleeding)
"We have to get u to the hospital."
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--At the hospital---(Still Duncan's POV)
OK so Gwen's pasting around my hospital room like crazy! She's so caring. "Wow, u look worried babe. Hey, look, if you're sweating that hard, u might as well go stand door the plants in the waiting room, they could use some watering." I joked. "Not funny Duncan, I mean, u could be seriously hurt. What if...What if.." Her voice trailed off and there were tears forming in her eyes. "Uggh, this is all...my...fault." she complained. "Gwen, it's not your fault, I'm to be fine. Just don't worry sweetheart." She finally took a seat. I struggled out of my bed to give her a kiss. I kissed her on the cheek but she gasped. "Duncan, stay in bed. u could get even meer injured." Gwen placed me back in bed. I smiled at her, closed my eyes, and went to sleep. I could hear the doctor's foot steps enter the room and Gwen's beautiful voice. "Is he going to be ok doctor?" She asked. "He's going to be fine but I think he should stay over night for observations. I could feel Gwen give me a quick hug but then I opened my eyes and remembered what I wanted to tell her, "Watch out for Trent." I explained to her what Trent zei about her on the bus. She didn't seem sad at all. She only seemed like she didn't care what Trent said. "Forget about Trent, he's way too aggravating and clingy. I could care less about Elvis." I sat up. "Elvis? Now you've got the lingo down sister." I gave her a hug. She was half way out the door. "Oh and, if Elvis tries anything with ya, just let me no so I can straighten him out." I zei as I cracked my knuckles. She rolled her eyes at me and waved goodbye. Then, I went back to sleep.
Gwen's POV
I'm so glad Duncan and I got back together. When I left the hospital it was already 12:00. I had a 5 uur rest and woke up with tiny bags under my eyes. I went on the bus when Trent slipped volgende to me. "Hey Gwen." he greeted me. "Oh, hi Elv... I mean, Trent." He smiled at me as I rolled my eyes. "So u wanna do something after school?" he tried. "With you, no thx." Trent's smile suddenly turned into a frown. "Why is this about Duncan?" he angrily asked. "No," I lied. "I just don't want to go out with you. Besides, my hart-, hart belongs to Duncan." Trent became furious. "Duncan?! Gwen Fabray u are going on a datum with me after school and that's final!" he screamed at me. Wait, when did Trent become the boss of me? "Trent u are not, the boss of me. I'm not going!" this time I screamed in his face. "C'mon Gwen! Go with me!" he angrily shook me. I can't believe he would do that to me. Pick me up door the shoulders, and shake me! "No!" I screamed. This time he smacked me across the face!" What is he, Chris Brown? "If I were you, I would come of your secret's out." Wait, my secret? My secret! "Who told you?" I demanded. "Not important right now. Anyways, see u after school at 7, babe!" Ugh, Trent is such a jerk. How am i gonna break the news to Duncan? I don't wanna stretch him out and make him feel like he has to pound someone. I don't think I should tell him immediately. Maybe I'll tell him right after school when I meet him at the hospital to pick him up. I don't know what to do!
Ok, so I'm sitting on the bus just waiting for Gwen to arrive. We go to her stop and I look out the window to see LeShawna patting Gwen's back while Gwen is still in small tears. I smacked my forehead. Ugh I'm such an idiot. I don't know what came over me! If I was totally sane at that moment, I would've even picked up the phone to answer Courtney's call and this would've never happened. Gwen, LeShawna, Bridgette, and Heather boarded the bus. Bridgette sat with Geoff from the zitplaats, stoel across from me again, Heather sat in the zitplaats, stoel behind Courtney, LeShawna sat behind Trent, and Gwen sat volgende TO TRENT! Did she just do that to me pissed? Focus Duncan, we're not talking about Trent here. I need to apologize to Gwen. I peeked my head out of the aisle. "Um, h-hey Gwen." I stuttered. She didn't answer. All she did was just sit there and stare into the ceiling. Man, I really blew it this time. My first love is probably never going to forgive me. But, I can't give up. Maybe on a smelly stinky bus filled with noisy 16 jaar olds isn't the right place to apologize to Gwen.
Trent finally spoke, "Haven't u done enough Duncan? u broke my girls heart, you-" I interrupted him. "Wo, Wo, Wo, what do u mean door your girl? Last time I checked, u were taking an attraction to Courtney." He shrugged his shoulders. "Mm, Courts ok but y'know, our relationship is only temporary. Besides, Gwen's a real girl, a girl who deserves affection, something that a mohawk wearing punk can't deliver to her." I swear, I was seriously going to stempel, punch that dude. " Oh yeah, and a gitaar playing, hairspray wearing, Elvis is?" I responded. "Whatever Duncan, Gwen will be mine. Besides, she's way too weak to resist. If u haven't noticed, Gwen isn't really the type of person who would stand up for herself. She's so gullible." He chuckled. Ok, now I am P-I-S-S-E-D! No one, talks about Gwen that way. I'm surprised that she wasn't hearing this. i guess she's too lost in her thoughts. That jerk! He doesn't deserve such an amazing girl like Gwen. Snap out of it Duncan, we're not focusing on Trent. That dude's just trying to be a distraction. The bus stopped,and everyone exited the bus. Before Gwen could walk into the building, I grabbed her door the arm, and pulled her to a corner. She was squirming in my arms. "Let go of me jerk! I'm going to be late for class. I just kept on holding on.
(This is going to be a convo. I'm too lazy to write who's talking but it's pretty clear. Here's a hint, it's back to back starting with Duncan.)
"Gwen,"
"Leave me alone. Why don't u just run along and go make out with Courtney?!"
"Courtney doesn't mean anything to me! You're the one I like."
"Really? Cause it didn't look like it Saturday night."
"Please, I just want u to forget about Saturday. Saturday was the biggest mistake of my life. I don't know what came over me and I regret every thing that I did to hurt you."
"Well, it's too late for apologizing. I just think that it would be better for us both if we just stay apart."
(Gwen get's up and starts to leave)
"No, Gwen. Don't leave me, I beg of you. I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I, DUNCAN MILLERS, LOVE GWEN FABRAY" (i know it was gwen rivera last time but i decided to change it)
(Duncan gets down on his knees)
"Duncan, just get up, everyone is starting to stare."
"Let them stare. I want to be with u Gwen, no other girl, IN THE WORLD! I love u so much. I wouldn't be able to live with myself, knowing that u aren't veilig and away from danger."
(Duncan holds Gwen hands and Gwen blushes)
"I may not be able to give u the world, but I can treat u like u are the world. u mean everything to me and I never want to let u go."
(Duncan had tears in his eyes)
"Duncan, I..."
"Just give me another chance plz!" (Duncan pulls up his overhemd, shirt sleeves to reveal tons of cuts.) I cut myself just because of my mistake. Because I was missing u and me. The best thing that's ever happened to me, I screw up!
(Duncan gets angry, takes out his mes and starts cutting and stabbing himself screaming, "Stupid, stupid, stupid!")
(Gwen takes the mes out of his hand)
"I would never be able to live with myself knowing that u were hurt because of me. Duncan, I absolutely LOVE u with all my heart. I was just devastated so much because I would never think that the person I love would do that to me. u mean the world to me and I now know that u are really sorry for your mistake and I"m sorry for my mistake too, but hey, we all make mistakes. I'm just really glad that we're sorting this all out. I love u Duncan and I will never ever let go of that love no matter what."
"So does this mean u forgive me?"
(Gwen leans in for a kiss and Duncan and Gwen kiss for at least 40 seconds)
"Does that answer your question?"
"Pretty much."
(Gwen notices Duncan still bleeding)
"We have to get u to the hospital."
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--At the hospital---(Still Duncan's POV)
OK so Gwen's pasting around my hospital room like crazy! She's so caring. "Wow, u look worried babe. Hey, look, if you're sweating that hard, u might as well go stand door the plants in the waiting room, they could use some watering." I joked. "Not funny Duncan, I mean, u could be seriously hurt. What if...What if.." Her voice trailed off and there were tears forming in her eyes. "Uggh, this is all...my...fault." she complained. "Gwen, it's not your fault, I'm to be fine. Just don't worry sweetheart." She finally took a seat. I struggled out of my bed to give her a kiss. I kissed her on the cheek but she gasped. "Duncan, stay in bed. u could get even meer injured." Gwen placed me back in bed. I smiled at her, closed my eyes, and went to sleep. I could hear the doctor's foot steps enter the room and Gwen's beautiful voice. "Is he going to be ok doctor?" She asked. "He's going to be fine but I think he should stay over night for observations. I could feel Gwen give me a quick hug but then I opened my eyes and remembered what I wanted to tell her, "Watch out for Trent." I explained to her what Trent zei about her on the bus. She didn't seem sad at all. She only seemed like she didn't care what Trent said. "Forget about Trent, he's way too aggravating and clingy. I could care less about Elvis." I sat up. "Elvis? Now you've got the lingo down sister." I gave her a hug. She was half way out the door. "Oh and, if Elvis tries anything with ya, just let me no so I can straighten him out." I zei as I cracked my knuckles. She rolled her eyes at me and waved goodbye. Then, I went back to sleep.
Gwen's POV
I'm so glad Duncan and I got back together. When I left the hospital it was already 12:00. I had a 5 uur rest and woke up with tiny bags under my eyes. I went on the bus when Trent slipped volgende to me. "Hey Gwen." he greeted me. "Oh, hi Elv... I mean, Trent." He smiled at me as I rolled my eyes. "So u wanna do something after school?" he tried. "With you, no thx." Trent's smile suddenly turned into a frown. "Why is this about Duncan?" he angrily asked. "No," I lied. "I just don't want to go out with you. Besides, my hart-, hart belongs to Duncan." Trent became furious. "Duncan?! Gwen Fabray u are going on a datum with me after school and that's final!" he screamed at me. Wait, when did Trent become the boss of me? "Trent u are not, the boss of me. I'm not going!" this time I screamed in his face. "C'mon Gwen! Go with me!" he angrily shook me. I can't believe he would do that to me. Pick me up door the shoulders, and shake me! "No!" I screamed. This time he smacked me across the face!" What is he, Chris Brown? "If I were you, I would come of your secret's out." Wait, my secret? My secret! "Who told you?" I demanded. "Not important right now. Anyways, see u after school at 7, babe!" Ugh, Trent is such a jerk. How am i gonna break the news to Duncan? I don't wanna stretch him out and make him feel like he has to pound someone. I don't think I should tell him immediately. Maybe I'll tell him right after school when I meet him at the hospital to pick him up. I don't know what to do!