The Fanfic NicoL's Mark of Athena

Nicolicious posted on Apr 13, 2012 at 10:45PM
Heyheyhey peoples and this is my Mark of Athena.
Rating: T maybe or something else
Characters: All of RR's characters and my characters like George and Taylor etc
Synophis(Don't know how to spell it) The campers are heading to Camp Jupiter to get Percy and the rest of the prophecy kids but they also have another prophecy to deal with
Here are the prophecies
'Seven half-bloods shall answer the call
To storm or fire the world must fall
An oath to keep with a final breath
And foes bear arms to the Doors of Death'
And this one
'Wisdoms daughter walks alone
The Mark of Athena burns through Rome...'
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een jaar geleden Nicolicious said…
I'm gonna post the first chapter
Chapter 1
Jason’s pov
Today was the day; I was going to see my camp again. I was going to see Bobby, Dakota, Gwen, Hazel and Reyna again after so long. I stared at the clouds as we flew by.
“An hour till we land.” Annabeth said coming to stand next to me.
“You’re anxious aren’t you?” I asked.
“Yup so are you.” She stated.
“You know you saying that doesn’t surprise me.”
“Yeah I can read expressions really easily but yours are harder than usual.”
“Must be the roman in me.” I said staring at the hills rolling by. Annabeth nodded in agreement but then we heard Leo shouting at Piper and Piper shouting back.
“Huh I’m gonna go sort that out.” Annabeth sighed and walked off downstairs to go find out what was wrong with them. I looked around at the huge ship and all its occupants. There was Thalia and Phoboe that made up the hunters; there was the Stoll brothers and Chris Rodriguez that made up Hermes cabin. There was Clarisse and her brother Derek that made up Ares, and then there was Butch from Iris, George from Nemesis, Clovis from Hypnos, Will Solace and his sister Georgia from Apollo, Taylor from Thanatos and Lou Ellen from Hecate cabin were all relaxing sort of across the deck, which meant that Miranda Gardiner and her twin sister Katie Gardiner from Dementer were down stairs or they had fallen off the boat trying to catch seaweed to plant in a garden. I laughed at that which received some looks. I looked away then spotted a bunch of buildings surrounded by a river, wait no normal river it was the River Tiber!
“Guys down there head down there!” I screamed at someone anyone.
“Calm Jason I got it.” Leo said as he steered the ship down to the camp. As I looked down I saw a bunch of Romans in five turtle formations with a Pegasus in the middle and three figures next to the Pegasus. As the boat descended I got a look at old friends and enemies and then we landed.
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een jaar geleden Nicolicious said…
laugh
Yes no comments :D
een jaar geleden Nicolicious said…
laugh
Yes still no comments
I have always wanted a forum where no one comments
een jaar geleden Nicolicious said…
laugh
Haha lol still no comments this is funny :D
een jaar geleden Nicolicious said…
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Noooooo comments this is the best forum ever!!!! :D
een jaar geleden blakerose12 said…
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This is Great !! And dont worry about the comments u just got to keep writing :D And its been long since i commented but ill keep reading it seems good :) keep writing and ill keep Reading and commenting :DDD
een jaar geleden Nicolicious said…
Why thankyou :D

Haha I started on the HoO club so I decided to put it n here cause there are less forums
een jaar geleden Nicolicious said…
Here is the next chapter :D
Chapter 2
Percy’s pov
Annabeth is coming right now; she is going to walk out of that ship and run up to me and hug me and everything will be okay. The ship landed and a boy with blonde hair walked out and waved which received some gasps and murmurs and a slight cuss or two from Octavian which made me smile. Next out came a boy with elfish features who stumbled on the way out then burst into flames, I was going to panic and spray water on him but the flames extinguished themselves and a girl with choppy brown braided hair came out and smacked him on the head. Then a girl in a silver parka and black hair screamed my name and tackled me.
“You aren’t Annabeth are you?” I asked breaking the hug.
“Nah you know me Kelp head.” The girl who I realized was Thalia said after she punched me in the arm.
“Yeah I know you. Where is Annabeth?” I looked around but couldn’t find her. Then I got slapped across the face and immediately the Romans raised their weapons. I looked at who slapped me and there was Annabeth.
“Um hi Annabe…”
“HOW DARE YOU DISAPPEAR FOR EIGHT MONTHS AND THEN WHEN WE FIND YOU ALL YOU CAN SAY IS HI!” She screamed in my face.
“Um jees Annabeth I didn’t mean to disappear like that I was gonna say more than hi but if your not okay with that I’ll say sorry.” I said while rubbing the back of my head.
“Its fine I guess but we will talk more about this later.” She grumbled then she gave me a small kiss and stormed off to talk to Clarisse who gave me thumbs up, which I responded with another finger than my thumb.
“Damn your girlfriend scares me.” Frank said slapping my shoulder.
“Yeah she scares me too.” I agreed.
“Eep!” Hazel said or squealed.
“What?” Frank said protectively.
“That is Sammy.” Hazel said pointing to the flame boy. Obviously the flame boy noticed us because he walked this way.
“What am I going to do?” Hazel said freaking out.
“Don’t freak out for starters.” I said but as I said that Hazel speed walked away to Annabeth, Thalia, Clarisse and the other girl that came with them. As the Sammy boy approached Frank and I prepared for the worst.
een jaar geleden blakerose12 said…
big smile
Good chapter (great) i liked how percy responded to clarisse :PPP
een jaar geleden Simcool said…
cool
I like this
Screw the comments thing
Just keep writing people will come aroundXD
Btw nice Percy response to Clarrise
een jaar geleden Nicolicious said…
Thanks guys here is the next one
They get longer don't worry.....I think

I am posting the next chapter :D
Chapter 3
Annabeth’s pov
The nerve of him! Eight months and then all he says is hi. I was totally zoned out of the conversation until some girl who must have been Roman walked up and asked to stay and talk for a while.
“Sure don’t see why not.” I said as Piper and Thalia agreed and all we got from Clarisse was a grunt and something about Romans and how they smell.
“We should go to the senate house there will most likely be a meeting about you Graceus.” The girl we learnt was called Hazel said.
“Graceus?” Clarisse said gripping her spear and raising an eyebrow.
“Sorry been around Octavian for too long. Oh and don’t get offended if Octavian tries to kill you okay.” She said apologetically raising her hands.
“Come on let’s go see this killer Octavian.” Thalia said smiling.
“It’s your funeral.” Hazel said smiling as she led us to the senate house and showed us our seats next to the other campers. I sat down next to Piper and saw the Praetor Reyna, as I learned her name was, get up and smile at Percy (Grr) then walked to the middle of the senate house addressing everyone
“As you all know the Greeks have come for another 3 people for the prophecy of the seven. Annabeth could you explain?” Reyna said with a smile, but in her eyes they said mess with me you die.
“Um, yes I can.” I stood up and about 400 eyes turned my way. “Right the prophecy goes like this:
Seven half-bloods shall answer the call
To storm or fire the world must fall
An oath to keep with a final breath
And foes bear arms to the Doors of Death.” I finished and everything went silent.
“Um thank you Annabeth. Does anyone have suggestions to who the seven are?”
“Yeah there are three from Camp Half-blood so far.” Jason said standing up.
“Yes so who are the other four?” Reyna asked intrigued.
“Well we thought three from your camp and then the last would be chosen via vote.” I said standing up again.
“Very smart idea and I know who the three from our camp should be.” She said her face full of admiration. “It should be Frank Zhang, Hazel Levesque and Percy Jackson.” There was no challenge from anyone in the senate so Reyna continued. “They should leave immediately after the seventh is chosen.” Reyna ended. “Senate meeting adjourned.” She got up and left as soon as possible which left me with wonder.
een jaar geleden blakerose12 said…
Great chapter :)))) keep up the good work :D !
een jaar geleden Nicolicious said…
big smile
Why thankyou :)

Here is another then I gotta sleep

Chapter 4
Reyna’s pov
That girl taking Jason off me what a bitch! I speed walked to an alley behind the shops and sat down on a brick and balled my eyes out with silent tears. I watched my tears fall to the floor and leave puddles on the cement. Why me? Percy got Annabeth back why couldn’t I get Jason back? I heard footsteps at the end of the alley; I jumped up and pulled out my gladius and waited. The person approached and there was the Greek Annabeth smiling. She came and sat down and patted beside her, I sat down and stared at the floor.
“You like Jason don’t you?” She asked, I looked up and her eyes were full of concern.
“Yeah when you are Praetor you get close if the other praetor is of opposite gender.” I said tears welling up again.
“Yeah I figured. I just want to let you know that Jason and Piper aren’t going out and that I want to be friends and so does Piper.” I looked up at her after that sentence and nodded my head in determination.
“Sure.” I managed a weak smile to go with it.
“Good oh and I was thinking. Would you like to be the seventh member of the prophecy?” Annabeth asked.
“You’re serious right?” I stood up not believing a single word she said.
“Yes I am serious I’ll ask the others but Piper, Leo, and Hazel have no problem with it.” She said with an even bigger smile. I was nearly jumping up and down with excitement at what she was saying. I took some deep breaths and sat down.
“Tell me about your camp.” I said relaxing.
“Fine, we are situated in Long Island Sound in New York we have just under twenty cabins and we are disguised as a strawberry farm. We have a dragon called Pelius that guards the Golden Fleece.” She answered calmly.
“You have the Golden Fleece!”
“Yes now let me continue we are in New York because we want to be as close to the gods as possible and…” The rest of the conversation was so amazing I couldn’t believe it. I looked at my watch.
“We should go I will show you to your bunk. I led the way and then went to my house and crashed on the bed and fell asleep instantly.
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een jaar geleden Simcool said…
Nice chapter
een jaar geleden blakerose12 said…
Reyna the seventh . Nice twist :) it's great
een jaar geleden Nicolicious said…
big smile
Chapter 5
Piper’s pov
I don’t know what I did but that Reyna girl had been giving me dirty looks ever since I stepped out of the Argo II. I was paying absolutely no attention to the meeting until Annabeth said she was going to see Reyna.
“Hey tell her I would be more than happy to have her on the quest.” I said before she left.
“Same. Oh and hey if Piper gets Jason tell her that Leo is here to comfort.” Leo said with a cheesy smile.
“Ah no I’m good Leo.” Annabeth denied with a fake smile. She said goodbye and went to go see where Reyna went.
“Leo you are an idiot.” I said smacking him on the back of the head.
“Ow! Beauty queen you need to calm down.”
“Do. Not. Call. Me. Beauty. Queen!”
“Fine calm your make up.” Leo ran off laughing before I could impale him with Katropis. Some dude called Dakota came and took me to the 5th Cohort barracks where I would be staying the night. I thanked Dakota and walked to my bunk and lie down and fell asleep

Jason’s pov
I can’t decide between Piper or Reyna it is so frustrating! Lucky Percy having only Annabeth to reunite with, how come I couldn’t remember Reyna’s name and what see looked like. I walked to my house and kicked the door closed; I looked around and saw that Percy hadn’t changed anything. I silently thanked Percy and sat down on my bed which had a thin layer of dust.
“He probably hasn’t even been in here.” I laugh and lie down and stare at the roof thinking of all the trouble I’m in right now. After a while a slowly drift off to sleep.

Leo’s pov
Man Piper is so bossy she needs to grow a sense of humor; I see some dude walk to me.
“Come with me.” He said.
“And you are?”
“Bobby Keaner son of Vulcan.”
“Really cause I’m a son of Hephaestus “I said jumping up and down.
“That’s nice what can you do?” Bobby asked.
“Oh just this.” I burst into flames making him back away.
“Whoa that is um… awesome I guess” Bobby said stepping forward. I ‘turn off’ my flames and smile.
“Aren’t you going to show me where I sleep?” I asked.
“Yeah you are staying in the 4th Cohort’s barracks.” Bobby said pointing to a building.
“So I’m gonna head over there and go to bed so I’ll see you later dude.” I walk\run off to the barracks and collapses on a free bunk and dreams of Festus and the ship.
een jaar geleden Nicolicious said…
big smile
Hey can you guys read my other forums(In the description)
een jaar geleden Simcool said…
Sure I see if I can.
Trying to write on my forums
while doing homwork is pretty stupidXD
But yeah I'll try
een jaar geleden Nicolicious said…
big smile
Thnx
een jaar geleden blakerose12 said…
Great chapter :) and I might read the others but ive been really busy so a maybe :D