stabbed her in the throat

no no no

Like i usually do when i say a story sucks, i go back in a few days to read the comments after mine and really it should not be rated R, it should be rated XXX, porno

wow

i dont think aqualad cares ..... even thoguh he should

i dont care at all because its MY story NOT theirs.

true enough
like i said earlier i understand ur argument
@lordchaos
ihavnt seen u comment very often these days

its just if you dont like it dont read it its that simple.

Well.....that was um...........interesting.....l

^im glad he stopped posting
did u like it?!
i hope not

im back bitches.

...

Annabeth

It had been a few years after I had left camp and I decided it was time to return and face my demons. I had married a nice mortal named Rick Riordan. “Honey I’m getting ready to leave.” He walked into the kitchen and kissed me on my cheek. “Ok be safe. “ I had boarded my plane and arrived at camp halfblood. The place was like a ghost town; not to mention Thalia’s pine was gone. An arrow whisked past my head and cut my cheek. I scanned the area but no one was in sight. Then a guy with a black robe stepped out from behind the Artemis Cabin. “Show yourself.”

The guy took of his robe and my jaw dropped. “Percy...” my jaws clenched with anger. He tried to hug me but I pushed him away. “Aren’t you with Thalia now? Where is everyone?” Where is Thalia’s pine?”

I was cut short by a stunning kiss. “Stop.. don’t...” he kept kissing me but it felt so real. “No I’m married Percy.” he took a step back. “m.. ma.. married.?” I nodded my head. “I'm sorry Percy you left me for Thalia. I had no place to turn and he was there for me.” I looked around for an explanation but there was nothing that needed to be said now.

“Thalia has claimed a dictatorship here in camp follow me.” I reluctantly followed him. He took me behind his cabin and opened up an underground shack that wasn’t half bad.

“She killed everyone off that didn’t agree with her. He had a few pairs of boots by his bed that were covered in mud which I figured came along with the G.I. Joe buzz cut.

“Annabeth I need you to know after you left I resisted Thalia. I didn’t mean for it to happen like that.” I turned the other way looking over my shoulder.

“Percy its ok.” I didn’t know what came over me but I jumped on him and wrapped my legs around him and dramatically started making out with him. He tried to speak but I cut him off. “How could I ever let you go?”

“Baby I'm sorr-.” I cut him off again and kissed him some more and pushed him back down on the bed. I licked my finger. I rubbed his shoulders and licked his bare chest as his abs clenched. “ohh Annabeth you don’t need to do this.” I put my finger to his lip and he flipped me up and threw my cowgirl boots off and flipped my dress up. “Oh Percy …” He started sucking on my neck and I moaned incredibly loud. He took his jeans off leaving him half naked in his underwear and t shirt. I rubbed his boxers and he grew bit by bit. “Percy I need you inside me.” He sucked my neck one last time as I moaned and pushed into me as I gasped. He made love to me all night and morning.

* * *

Thalia

I was doing some patrol when a heard screaming and moaning. I went down the cabins and found Percy’s bunker door unlatched. I went in and saw him fucking Annabeth like there was no tomorrow. I pulled out my camera and started recording them. I left the footage on the doorstep. -From your best wishes Thalia

^jesus christ! why god! whyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

why did u read it somisista??????????????????????!

LOL interesting.

Huh this is still going even after the reviews that the writer got. I am going to say what everyone else has been saying. THIS IS SHIT. Not because of the perverting crap, which wasn't really perverted. (I've read and seen so much worse.) I say it because the writing is terrible. My little sister can do better.

its a joke you idiot you have no creative brains at all.

Lol i've read joking perverted fanfics, and let me say this. You failed epically bro:. Lol and no creative brains? I'm currently writing a wizards101 fanfic -_-

wow look if you dont have anything nice to say get the fuck off and idgad what your writing.

Somisista.... I wanna hug.....

lol ill hug your i bet you guys jaws dropped whenyou saw ricks name.

Thanks for the hug aqualad lol! Yea I read that like 5 times when I saw his name.... then I skipped the last 2 paragraphs.....

idk mere, if i was u i would not want a hug from a pervert. Also u guys are actually reading this? I just skimmed through the angry replies once i got to line 6 of ch1

im not a pervert maybe you should go read its meaning in a dictionary its called comedy for me and having some fun if you dont like it pupster get the fuck off.

Look I'll give aqualad as many hugs I want to! He isn't a perv! Its just a story! C I'll give him another hug! *hugs aqualad again* c nothing happened! Just gave him a hug!

hah... eh *whispers* still a perv. Also meredog, if hes not a perv the y dont u write a porno? huh?

ITS NOT A PORNO ITS JUST COMEDY TO FUCK WITH YOUR BRAINS hugs meredog back.

OK what does him not being a perv have to do with me writing porno? Aqualad is fine! He is not a perv so quite messing with him asshole! Rly! Its just a story! *hugs aqualad again* o no! O wait... nothing happened! He isn't a perv!

And sry for all the hugs.. lol!

............ sigh, i was expecting u 2 say no im not a perv im not writing 1! then i would say ha so u admit is XXX. but sadly no u didnt say that. Also aqua bitch u got a VERY BAD image in my brain... it refers 2 u saying FUCK WITH YOUR BRAIN. thats prolly the worst image ive ever had in my head. som 1 screwing into my brain.. gawd please just leave fanpop.

ok pupster skank get the fuck off my forum now if you dont like it dumbass dont read it.

Lt if anyone should leave its u! Everyone hates u! Fuck! I love everyone but u! And I like people easy! Everyone wants u to leave not aqualad! At least some people like him unlike u! Get the FUCK off this forum! No one wants u around weirdo! And btw only pervs would think like that asshole! I love aqualad! I love everyone on fanpop but u! And that's not a good thing! Cause I normally like people the first time I talk to them.

i agree with meredog

Thank u aqualad!

no problemo

I get it now aqua is jason. Bye 4 ever

Lt what? U mean my jason?

^damn Lt is smart! I ever would have thought of that! It makes sense now!

yea i am smart-ish i hav 136.9 iq though actually, iq donesn't mean much it's only potential. but well yea i guess im kinda smart i usually get As and Bs. ha BS ah o yea so, i think aqualad is jason from REAL LIFE!!!! well i guess this is also real life but, well on a computer ugh. whatever u get my point. if u dont u should check ur IQ

OMG I FOUND OUT THE BEST NAME FOR AN ASIAN RAPPER!!!!!
TuChinks! get it, its like a combination of TuPac and 2chains cept its asian.
^ the previous sentence may be found 'offencive' to some readers, if u read this line before the one above you, good. Though if u do read the line thats ^ u may have some issues with reading down 2 up not up to down like most of us. I assume meredog reads down 2 up cause she always adresses my 2nd statement first. For example when i said bye 4 ever she was prolly like what! no LT I WILL MISS U!!!! Or she was like WHAT HELL YEA. whichever way she said u mean my jaon 2nd when i said jason 1st.

i dont giv a damn

Ok what? And aqualad isn't Jason! Wtf! Hahaha!! That's funny!! If aqualad was my boyfriend trust me u would have known!!! And when u said by 4 ever my eyes light up and I was like "YES!! THE ASSHOLE IS GONE!!!" There is no way I would ever be upset if u left! I would have a fucking party!!! And I was confused for a sec when u said aqualad was Jason.... I was like "wait... is he talking about my Jason?"

aww i can be the niceist person of fanpop, if u went back in time (omg back in time was the best fanfic) and u went to like november/december people would say i was the nicest person on fanpop.

just wow

Haha! Yea right Lt!! Ill believe it when I c it!! Hahaha!!

OMG universal left whats her cell #

yea well outside the internet things turned me evil like i became rlly good friends with some kid who is amazing at basket ball and he lit a toilet on fire (he used toilet paper put it all around it). Its also rumored that he brought a bullet and a knife. Another thing o yea forget.. yea he got expelled.

o yea i also started listening to rap like... really 'offencive' rap.. like faded, its my favorite song right now... u shouldn't look it up.

ya know what i find annoying is when people say whatever u do don't do this. Just saying dont do something is going 2 make people wanna do it.

hmmmmmmmmmmmm

wait u searched it aqua? lol im hoping your not a girl