The son of neptune Article: My first Fanfic-The son of neptune

posted by XxRoyTheCoolxX

Title: The son of neptune

Rating:Umm something like K

Type:Suspence, Adventure, friendship a bit romance,mystery

Characters: Percy Jackson, Reyna, Bobby, Dakota, Hazel, Gwen, annabeth Chase, Jason Grace, Piper, Leo some other OC and maybe a bit chars from PJO and of course Mrs.o'leary

Synopsis: this story is about percy In the roman camp it will includ a little of annabeth looking for percy its a bit about nico too

Disclamer:I do not own any of the chars that arent my OC And again i do not own everything!!!

A/N: i dont really have any now so i will right this. please do not write rude comment, if u dont like this A) Correct me and give advices of B) dont write commentaar at all...

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mikeceki Yay kick ass dude

theonlyexeption ITS AWESOME! i would just work on your grammar. 'he looked confused so much...' i would do, he looked immensely confused, or he looked deep in confusion, or he looked very confused. 'I felt they were wrong and i don't know why but they are wrong' I felt they were wrong, but i couldn't understand why

XxRoyTheCoolxX nice ty ill use ur advices

XxRoyTheCoolxX sorry people i didnt post(i waited for a few comments). i promise ill post 3 or 4 chapters at least

XxRoyTheCoolxX but tomorow cuz im going to sleep now, Good night.

theonlyexeption when are you going to post?

SoNightflames good but its completely like the lost hero with percy

theonlyexeption I think that's what he was trying to do through. And it is possible that Rick Riordan will do that too.

SoNightflames i think that rick riordan will probably not give percy a girlfriend but thats my theory. nice comedy pieces

PersesJr com on man plz post.your story is AWESOME

theonlyexeption When are you going to post? *worried face*

jake-the-snake its good but too much like the other book ( and the horeses usaly call percy lord not master)

3rdCj2ndCJR nice story. you are good writer. you should keep it up.

sweetbluesea I think your chapters are awesome plezzzzzzz post more fast

percabeth97 WRITE LAAAAA!!!!! ...it's awesome

dezzypoo that was TOTALLY AWESOME plzzzzzzz post soon

cro0010 It's a little bit similiar to TLO but it's good.

p1st0l SWEEET add more

paigemeable Great

PJrules great story but try to change it not to be like ricks i really like though

mars1038 WELL.............continue that was great even though rainbow is a hippocammi and it is very much like ricks

cApsLock1 hello? is this abandoned? hello? *echo* yep i guess so!

craterlake12 oh come on!you did not even finish!!!!!!!!! it has been a month and you have not writtin yet! it is like you just dropped off the face of the earth!!!!!!!!!!!!

craterlake12 rephrase that-----IT HAS BEEN ALMOST A YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Icyspatan um it was o.k. but u could have done a little bit more work on it