So, here's a story about Duncan in Juvy. It's going to be in first person. (Duncan's point of view). Enjoy.
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It was raining and cold when the cops took me away. Shoving me up against the kap of a car and hand cuffing my wrists. "Get in there, punk!" Brian, my parole officer, exclaimed at me as he threw me into the back of the car. I tried to have a conversation with him, but I could only hear him muffle and scoff under his breath. The only thing I heard him say was "Shut up, Duncan. I'm not in the mood,". This was when he was yelling at me..... again.
It was 10 at night when we reached Juvy. I only remember this place once before. I was 14. I was low on cash, so I decided to rob a convenience store. Of course, the manager caught me, even with his hurt hand. I kind of shot him and missed. The police came and took me to jail. I was a lonely punk for 2 years. When I finally was released, I vowed that I would only get into enough trouble to only go to regular jail. Unfortunately, now that I'm here, that didn't work out very well, did it?
Everything was that same the minuut I stepped into Juvy. Criminals were calling out for their release, the smell of death in every hallway. Speaking of which, the food was moldy and tasted of sweaty gym sock, but then again, that's what u deserve when u go to Juvy. Unfortunately for me, everyone who was in there were either new, the same people from last time, of dead. Either way, I was still a lonely punk in the boules of a dark, cold, damp, cage. When I was taken to my cell, I saw another guy, just sitting there. "Mal. New cell mate. Be good to this one, don't do anything like u have before," the officer told him. He threw me in and I landed on my butt. Just then the other guy stood in front of me. I look up. He was tan and looked kind of emo, the way his hair covered his eye. "Who are you?" I ask him. "People call me Mal. At your disservice,". When he spoke, his voice was deep and evil sounding. I instantly knew that I was in trouble when he told me, "You need to stay out of my way. I run this place,".
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The volgende morning, I was woken door one of the officers. He was yelling at my cell mate, Mal. Apparently he was switching cells. He was taken away. What followed was another officer who always had a megaphone with him. We were all sure that he loved his megaphone. He said," LISTEN UP PUNKS. u WILL BE EITHER CRUSHING ROCKS of STAMPING PLATES TODAY. BECAUSE I'M FEELING NICE TODAY I'LL LET u DECIDE WHICH ONE u WANT. DURING BREAKFAST u WILL FIND A CLIPBOARD AND SIGN UP FOR A JOB. THAT IS ALL,". I was both surprised and happy to have the option today. As soon as my group was let out for the disgusting slop they call breakfast, I immediately ran to the clip board. "Which one shalt I choose?" I ask myself. I end up stamping plates. One because your inside all dag and two all u do is pull a lever.
The rest of my sentence was the same. Breaking rocks. Eating slop, and sitting in a cell for a year. The only time I saw Mal was when we had to go downstairs for meals. Just like he said, he runs the place.
Now that I'm on Total Drama All- Stars I realized Mike was Mal. What am I going to do?
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SO that's all. I hoped u enjoyed that even if it was short.
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It was raining and cold when the cops took me away. Shoving me up against the kap of a car and hand cuffing my wrists. "Get in there, punk!" Brian, my parole officer, exclaimed at me as he threw me into the back of the car. I tried to have a conversation with him, but I could only hear him muffle and scoff under his breath. The only thing I heard him say was "Shut up, Duncan. I'm not in the mood,". This was when he was yelling at me..... again.
It was 10 at night when we reached Juvy. I only remember this place once before. I was 14. I was low on cash, so I decided to rob a convenience store. Of course, the manager caught me, even with his hurt hand. I kind of shot him and missed. The police came and took me to jail. I was a lonely punk for 2 years. When I finally was released, I vowed that I would only get into enough trouble to only go to regular jail. Unfortunately, now that I'm here, that didn't work out very well, did it?
Everything was that same the minuut I stepped into Juvy. Criminals were calling out for their release, the smell of death in every hallway. Speaking of which, the food was moldy and tasted of sweaty gym sock, but then again, that's what u deserve when u go to Juvy. Unfortunately for me, everyone who was in there were either new, the same people from last time, of dead. Either way, I was still a lonely punk in the boules of a dark, cold, damp, cage. When I was taken to my cell, I saw another guy, just sitting there. "Mal. New cell mate. Be good to this one, don't do anything like u have before," the officer told him. He threw me in and I landed on my butt. Just then the other guy stood in front of me. I look up. He was tan and looked kind of emo, the way his hair covered his eye. "Who are you?" I ask him. "People call me Mal. At your disservice,". When he spoke, his voice was deep and evil sounding. I instantly knew that I was in trouble when he told me, "You need to stay out of my way. I run this place,".
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The volgende morning, I was woken door one of the officers. He was yelling at my cell mate, Mal. Apparently he was switching cells. He was taken away. What followed was another officer who always had a megaphone with him. We were all sure that he loved his megaphone. He said," LISTEN UP PUNKS. u WILL BE EITHER CRUSHING ROCKS of STAMPING PLATES TODAY. BECAUSE I'M FEELING NICE TODAY I'LL LET u DECIDE WHICH ONE u WANT. DURING BREAKFAST u WILL FIND A CLIPBOARD AND SIGN UP FOR A JOB. THAT IS ALL,". I was both surprised and happy to have the option today. As soon as my group was let out for the disgusting slop they call breakfast, I immediately ran to the clip board. "Which one shalt I choose?" I ask myself. I end up stamping plates. One because your inside all dag and two all u do is pull a lever.
The rest of my sentence was the same. Breaking rocks. Eating slop, and sitting in a cell for a year. The only time I saw Mal was when we had to go downstairs for meals. Just like he said, he runs the place.
Now that I'm on Total Drama All- Stars I realized Mike was Mal. What am I going to do?
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SO that's all. I hoped u enjoyed that even if it was short.
Alright,so here it goes.
Mal and Al (haha) are trying to eliminate each other, Al thinks he is a big threat, while Mal doesn't want his cover blown. Mike found Svetlana, who Mal did use to beat up Al on the "Snapping Bars". I think Courtney, Scott, and Gwen are all ok for now after arguing over Courtney and Cameron kissing. Scourtney did in fact get back together.
In the end, Mal stopped Al from winning invincibility and instead, Zoey rode to victory! And yes, Alejandro took the flush, with a vote count of 5-1.
I thought this episode was kind of rushed, with Mike being seen again and Mal finding out Mike is trying to stop him.
Finally, Zoey is on to Mal! She says she'll be keeping a close eye on him for now, so let's hope she can figure out Mal and try to help Mike.
Eliminated: Alejandro
Winner: Zoey
Boney Island: Gwen (for refusing to stay with Chris in the spa hotel)
Thoughts?
Mal and Al (haha) are trying to eliminate each other, Al thinks he is a big threat, while Mal doesn't want his cover blown. Mike found Svetlana, who Mal did use to beat up Al on the "Snapping Bars". I think Courtney, Scott, and Gwen are all ok for now after arguing over Courtney and Cameron kissing. Scourtney did in fact get back together.
In the end, Mal stopped Al from winning invincibility and instead, Zoey rode to victory! And yes, Alejandro took the flush, with a vote count of 5-1.
I thought this episode was kind of rushed, with Mike being seen again and Mal finding out Mike is trying to stop him.
Finally, Zoey is on to Mal! She says she'll be keeping a close eye on him for now, so let's hope she can figure out Mal and try to help Mike.
Eliminated: Alejandro
Winner: Zoey
Boney Island: Gwen (for refusing to stay with Chris in the spa hotel)
Thoughts?
Great episode!
So, the challenge, like many people thought, was to face their fears. But who cares? IZZY CAMEOED!!!! She was the spin that was Mike's fear. And boy did Mike/Mal beat the crap out of her. Oh well. Courtney and Gwen were getting along the whole episode until, yep, they had to fight. When they refused, Chris showed a montage of Gwuncan moments (-__-) and Courtney started fighting. They ended up tieing, Gwen admitting to Courtney she came back to make things better with her and Courtney admitted she doesn't miss Duncan, but missed their friendship. So Chris gives them 2 points and the Vultures win! I'm happy Courtney wasn't just playing Gwen either.
As a twist for elimination, the Vultures picked who gets voted off. If u follow me a lot, you'll know I was screaming, "VOTE DUNCAN OFF!!!". But nope,
SIERRA!
Because Cameron wanted Sierra to go home pagina and be with Cody and not Cameron. So Sierra got flushed.
Thoughts?
So, the challenge, like many people thought, was to face their fears. But who cares? IZZY CAMEOED!!!! She was the spin that was Mike's fear. And boy did Mike/Mal beat the crap out of her. Oh well. Courtney and Gwen were getting along the whole episode until, yep, they had to fight. When they refused, Chris showed a montage of Gwuncan moments (-__-) and Courtney started fighting. They ended up tieing, Gwen admitting to Courtney she came back to make things better with her and Courtney admitted she doesn't miss Duncan, but missed their friendship. So Chris gives them 2 points and the Vultures win! I'm happy Courtney wasn't just playing Gwen either.
As a twist for elimination, the Vultures picked who gets voted off. If u follow me a lot, you'll know I was screaming, "VOTE DUNCAN OFF!!!". But nope,
SIERRA!
Because Cameron wanted Sierra to go home pagina and be with Cody and not Cameron. So Sierra got flushed.
Thoughts?