((on a train))
(in the front)
Hydra : *sitting on her suitcases* *sighs* Bro, I don't even know why I'm going on this train ride. After buying that ticket, I'm broke. And I'm jobless, so HOW AM I GONNA GET SOME D*MN MONEY?!? I'm so broke and jobless, I'm talking to the ground. WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU, GUMMI (<Her nickname)?!? I wish there was some way I could get some money. -O-"
(in the volgende cable car)
Adrianna : *playing her violin*
Scarlette : *sitting door her* Um.... Ma'am....? Could u please play a little quieter.....? I'm trying to finish my book........
Adrianna : Oh! Sorry. I didn't know I was distracting you. D:
Scarlette : *mutters* Well u did, moron...
Adrianna : Wait, what? ._.?
Scarlette : Oh nothing.... <:)
Adrianna : Okaaay. e_e I'm just going to stop playing and I'll..... Listen to my iPod. *puts down her violin* *pulls out her iPod and earphones* *puts on her earphone and starts listening to classical muziek on her iPod*
Scarlette : *continues reading*
(in the volgende cable car)
Allan : *chewing on gum all lazy-like*
Tokyo : *sitting really close to Allan* *U*
Allan : Wait, man. I got one. *clears his throat* So, like, if the wind flows.... We should, too. -U-
Tokyo : THAT'S F*CKIN' HAWT, MAN!!!!!!! *U*
Allan : If u mean 'hot', as in, like, a scrambled egg, on, like, a skillet..... I agree, man. I rock at, like, poetry, man.
Ryker : *sitting across from them* Bro, that's what u call poetry? /:T
Allan : No, man. That's, like, a whole nother level of, like, poetry, man.
Tokyo : Yeah! He calls it 'Yrteop'. -U-
Ryker : First of all, that's just 'poetry' zei backwards. seconde of all, how did u even pronounce that? o_O
Tokyo : Practice. -U-
Ryker : Third of all, that's not even real poetry. Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance, as Carl Sandburg use to say. Poetry is all that is worth remembering in life, as quoted from William Hazlitt. Poetry is-
Allan : Okay, man. I'm to the point, like, I don't even give a d*mn on, like, what you're saying, so, like, be quiet, and, like, just let your lips, like, relax and stuff, man. That's what my, like, mom use to tell me, man. vUv
Ryker : *sighs* *goes back to reading his book*
(in the volgende cable car)
Riley, Tom, Jamie, Victoria, Raymond, Yuki, Layla, Bradley, and Silvy : *dancing to muziek on Yuki's iPod*
Tom and Jamie : *dancing together* ^U^
Victoria : *slides into Jamie*
Jamie : EEEEKKKK!!!!!! *falls across the room*
Tom: Uhhhhh..... ._."
Victoria : Shhhhh. *puts her finger on Tom's lips*
Tom : .3.
Victoria : Just let it happen. vUv
Tom : *shrugs*
Tom and Victoria : *start dancing together*
Jamie : *notices* That little runt. e_e *runs over to Victoria and punches her in the face*
Tom : o_o"
Jamie and Victoria : *continue fighting over Tom*
(in the volgende cable car)
Geo : *hears their music* They're partying without me?- Oh, I don't give a f*ck. T_T
Tim : Geo, u just wasted 10 words on just that, when u could of kept it to yourself. u could of used 10 words before u die. Those 10 words could of fried your vocal cords. T-T
Geo : o_o" *covers his mouth*
mannetjeseend, drake : Dude, try not to be such a negative about things and think of the positive things. Like...... At least he's using his voice and his vocal cords aren't fried, or..... At least he'll die peacefully and not have to talk, of something like that. >_>"
Tim : Oh, sorry, Positive Polly. Now I feel like an *sshole today, so I'm gonna go to sleep. Deal with it, b*tches. *curls up in a ball and tries to go to sleep*
(in the volgende cable car)
Lila : *filing her nails*
KiKi : *eating a raw potato* THIS POTATO IS THE BEST POTATO EVER!!!!! *throws it out the window* *pulls out another raw potato and starts eating it* THIS POTATO IS THE BEST POTATO EVER!!!!! *throws it out the window*
Lila : *notices her* What the h*ll?
KiKi : WHAT'S THAT, PABLO?! u WANT A POTATO, TOO?!?! THEN COME AND GET ONE, YA CRAZY GOOSE!!!!!!
Lila : Did this b*tch miss out on her meds of some sh*t like that? o_O
KiKi : GAAAAHHHSBWJWBQ!!!! THIS POTATOES ARE MAKING ME CONFUUUSSSEEEDDD!!! DX I HATE POTATOES!!!!! D:<
Soda : *sitting door KiKi* I'm sure the potatoes taste gooooooddd!!!!! Lemme try one! :D
KiKi : Okay, but don't kill me and Pablo when u don't like 'em. :U *hands Soda a raw potato*
Soda : *about to eat it*
Veto : Lemme at dat potato!!! >:D *grabs it from Soda*
Soda : D:
Veto : *bites a big piece out of it* *chews* Mhmmm.... This is a good potato!!! :D *continues eating it*
KiKi : LEMME TASTE SOME!!!! *bites a piece off of Veto's potato* *chews* DUDE!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST. POTATO. EVER!!!!! :D
Soda : Care to share the potato with me? <:D
Veto and KiKi : NO. e-e
Soda : o-o"
Veto and KiKi : *continue eating the potato*
Lila : Why do I have to be here with a whole bunch of f*ckin' nutcases? -O-"
(in the volgende cable car)
Brooklyn : *taking a whole bunch of pictures and putting them on Instagram*
Daemon : *sitting door her* *does a stank face at her*
Brooklyn : Ooh!!!! How u like this pose, Daemon? :D *does the eend lips and takes a picture*
Daemon : Even meer disturbing. e_e
Brooklyn : *puts her phone down* *does the finger crawly thingy on his chest* *sounding all sexy and junk* There's nothing disturbing about me, babe. ;) (Fail. XD I, for one, would get straight to the point. I'd be like, "Hey. You. Yeah. Fuck me. Now." XD)
Daemon : Get your crusty, radioactive, acidic, wilting, wrinkling, skanky, indolent, abhorrent, crude, lousy fingers off of my chest, b*tch. e_e
Brooklyn : Why u gotta be so serious? It's just a simple touch. ;) *caressing his cheek*
Daemon : *slaps her*
Brooklyn : EEK!!!! *falls on the ground with a red hand mark on her cheek*
Michael : Uh...... Yeah.. Can I ask you- WHY THE H*LL DID u JUST slaan, smack THAT GIRL?!??!? THAT'S ILLEGAL!!!!!
Daemon : I told the b*tch to get the f*ck off me, and she didn't listen, so I had to slaan, smack a h*e.
Matt : *helps Brook up*
Brooklyn : Thanks, Matt, because SOME PEOPLE don't know how to treat a lady right. >:T
Daemon : Lady? meer like a wh*re.
Brooklyn : >:O
(in the locomotive)
Conductor : *says on the intercom (<I had to ask my sister what that was called. XD)* The food is ready, everyone. It's in the last cable car.
(in the last cable car)
Hydra, Adrianna, Scarlette, Allan, Tokyo, Ryker, Riley, Tom, Jamie, Victoria, Raymond, Yuki, Layla, Bradley, Silvy, Geo, Tim, Drake, Lila, KiKi, Soda, Veto, Brooklyn, Daemon, Michael, and Matt : *come into the room* *get their food and start eating*
All the Lights : *turn off*
Tom : *screams like a little girl*
Jamie : TOMMY, BABY! u OKAY?!
Victoria : YEAH, TOM! ARE u OKAY?!
Tom : Yeah. >_>"
Soda : *screams*
All the Lights : *turn back on*
Soda : *on the ground* *eyes look lifeless* *stabbed in the back with a butcher knife*
Adrianna, Scarlette, Allan, Tokyo, Ryker, Riley, Tom, Jamie, Victoria, Raymond, Yuki, Layla, Bradley, Silvy, Geo, Tim, Drake, Lila, KiKi, Soda, Veto, Brooklyn, Daemon, Michael, and Matt : *scream*
Yuki : SHE'S DEAD!!!!!! SHE'S F*CKIN' DEAD!!!!!!! D:
Adrianna : Okay, now let's be logical, people. We aren't sure if she's really dead; She could possibly just have a minor injury.
Tom : I'm pretty f*ckin' sure no one looks like that when they just have a 'minor injury.' o_o"
Adrianna : I'm sure she's alive, guys. Just keep calm. Veto, care to check her pulse to prove to everyone she is alive? vUv
Veto : Uhh..... Sure. *kneels down* *checks Soda's pulse* *silent for a second* F*ck me in the *ss and call me Sue. She is dead! :O
Tim : And we're all going to die along with her. Woopdy doo. T_T
Tokyo : Okay. Me and a lot of other people here are going to freak out now. ._. AAAAAHHHGSHHA!!!! DX *starts running around screaming*
Tokyo, Yuki, Riley, Silvy, Victoria, Veto, Tom, KiKi, and Layla : *start running around screaming*
Adrianna : Stop, guys! Stop!!!
Tokyo, Yuki, Riley, Silvy, Victoria, Veto, Tom, KiKi, and Layla : *instantly stop* ._.
Adrianna : I'm sure the conductor knows all about this. I say we spleet, split up, and half of us will check out the conductor, and the other half can stay with Soda.
Michael : Yeah. Just in case the killer tries to take the body if we were all gone and we went to the locomotive.
Adrianna : Plus, I'm sure no one wants to touch a dead person, getting all the blood on them, and messing with evidence door putting out fingerprints on her.
Hydra : *stands on the counter*
Tim : *looks down at Hydra's feet* *looks back up at her* u have your foot in my macaroni. Lovely. T_T
Hydra : Never mind about your macaroni, Tim!!!! Everyone, I need u undivided attention!!!!! This is important!!!!!!
Adrianna, Scarlette, Allan, Tokyo, Ryker, Riley, Tom, Jamie, Victoria, Raymond, Yuki, Layla, Bradley, Silvy, Geo, Tim, Drake, Lila, KiKi, Soda, Veto, Brooklyn, Daemon, Michael, and Matt : *turn and look at Gummi*
Hydra : One of us in this very cable car is the killer. Of course a killer won't come clean, so I know how to figure out this murder mystery AND make me big bucks!!!! We could make a TV toon on this!!!!! 'Total Drama Mystery!!!!!!' Like, the bathroom's the confessional, u guys break into teams, I'm the host, I already brung a camera crew for my volgende stop that's was watching your every verplaats earlier and still is now,-
Raymond : Yeah yeah yeah. I'm sure we all watched Total Drama Insanity.
Daemon : So this 'Total Drama Mystery' idea isn't original? Way to go on being creative, wise guy.
Hydra : *points at Daemon* u shut your mouth, Yorkie. This is the way we make money around here on these streets. e_e
Lila : Blah blah blah. Just put us on the teams, would ya? T_T"
Hydra : Patience, my friend. *hops down off of the counter* *clears her throat* Lila, Yuki, Tokyo, Kiki, Allan, Daemon, Tim, and Bradley, you'll be on the team called 'The Investigating Igloos'.
Allan : I'm not, like, the brightest crayon in the box, man, but I'm pretty sure igloos don't have mouths, man, and when u don't have a mouth.... Bro..... u can't even talk... And when u can't talk, man..... u can't, like, investigate, man...... I don't know what you're smoking, man, but I want some, bro. -U-
Hydra : I DON'T SMOKE!!!! I just needed a noun that started with an 'i' to go with 'investigating', and that was the first thing that popped in my head!!!! DON'T JUDGE MEEEE!!!! DX *clears her throat again* Anyway, Victoria, Jamie, Riley, Brook, Tom, Veto, Drake, and Geo, you'll be on the team called 'The Clue-Seeking Snakes'. The rest of you, which is Adrianna, Layla, Scarlette, Silvy, Ryker, Matt, Michael, and Tim, will be on the team called 'The Code-Cracking Cubs'. The first challenge will be announced AFTER DIS BREAK!!!!! :D
(OMG, this fanfic's gonna be so fun to dooooooo!!! :D Also, the volgende part's going right to "A Teagen Fanfic" Part 5 because I didn't get 7 commentaren for the part 4 of it, so I'm not doing the "Total Drama Insanity" part. :D Do u really love "Total Drama Insanity"? THEN FUCKIN' commentaar ON MY SHIT, BRO!!!!! D:< I only got 2 commentaren on part 4, and those were from my usual readers!!!! Come on, people!!!! D:< Anyway, how'd u like it? Did I express your character well? Do I need to improve on anything? Leave your commentaren in the commentaar boxy thingy. The volgende part will come soon hopefully. :P)
(in the front)
Hydra : *sitting on her suitcases* *sighs* Bro, I don't even know why I'm going on this train ride. After buying that ticket, I'm broke. And I'm jobless, so HOW AM I GONNA GET SOME D*MN MONEY?!? I'm so broke and jobless, I'm talking to the ground. WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU, GUMMI (<Her nickname)?!? I wish there was some way I could get some money. -O-"
(in the volgende cable car)
Adrianna : *playing her violin*
Scarlette : *sitting door her* Um.... Ma'am....? Could u please play a little quieter.....? I'm trying to finish my book........
Adrianna : Oh! Sorry. I didn't know I was distracting you. D:
Scarlette : *mutters* Well u did, moron...
Adrianna : Wait, what? ._.?
Scarlette : Oh nothing.... <:)
Adrianna : Okaaay. e_e I'm just going to stop playing and I'll..... Listen to my iPod. *puts down her violin* *pulls out her iPod and earphones* *puts on her earphone and starts listening to classical muziek on her iPod*
Scarlette : *continues reading*
(in the volgende cable car)
Allan : *chewing on gum all lazy-like*
Tokyo : *sitting really close to Allan* *U*
Allan : Wait, man. I got one. *clears his throat* So, like, if the wind flows.... We should, too. -U-
Tokyo : THAT'S F*CKIN' HAWT, MAN!!!!!!! *U*
Allan : If u mean 'hot', as in, like, a scrambled egg, on, like, a skillet..... I agree, man. I rock at, like, poetry, man.
Ryker : *sitting across from them* Bro, that's what u call poetry? /:T
Allan : No, man. That's, like, a whole nother level of, like, poetry, man.
Tokyo : Yeah! He calls it 'Yrteop'. -U-
Ryker : First of all, that's just 'poetry' zei backwards. seconde of all, how did u even pronounce that? o_O
Tokyo : Practice. -U-
Ryker : Third of all, that's not even real poetry. Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance, as Carl Sandburg use to say. Poetry is all that is worth remembering in life, as quoted from William Hazlitt. Poetry is-
Allan : Okay, man. I'm to the point, like, I don't even give a d*mn on, like, what you're saying, so, like, be quiet, and, like, just let your lips, like, relax and stuff, man. That's what my, like, mom use to tell me, man. vUv
Ryker : *sighs* *goes back to reading his book*
(in the volgende cable car)
Riley, Tom, Jamie, Victoria, Raymond, Yuki, Layla, Bradley, and Silvy : *dancing to muziek on Yuki's iPod*
Tom and Jamie : *dancing together* ^U^
Victoria : *slides into Jamie*
Jamie : EEEEKKKK!!!!!! *falls across the room*
Tom: Uhhhhh..... ._."
Victoria : Shhhhh. *puts her finger on Tom's lips*
Tom : .3.
Victoria : Just let it happen. vUv
Tom : *shrugs*
Tom and Victoria : *start dancing together*
Jamie : *notices* That little runt. e_e *runs over to Victoria and punches her in the face*
Tom : o_o"
Jamie and Victoria : *continue fighting over Tom*
(in the volgende cable car)
Geo : *hears their music* They're partying without me?- Oh, I don't give a f*ck. T_T
Tim : Geo, u just wasted 10 words on just that, when u could of kept it to yourself. u could of used 10 words before u die. Those 10 words could of fried your vocal cords. T-T
Geo : o_o" *covers his mouth*
mannetjeseend, drake : Dude, try not to be such a negative about things and think of the positive things. Like...... At least he's using his voice and his vocal cords aren't fried, or..... At least he'll die peacefully and not have to talk, of something like that. >_>"
Tim : Oh, sorry, Positive Polly. Now I feel like an *sshole today, so I'm gonna go to sleep. Deal with it, b*tches. *curls up in a ball and tries to go to sleep*
(in the volgende cable car)
Lila : *filing her nails*
KiKi : *eating a raw potato* THIS POTATO IS THE BEST POTATO EVER!!!!! *throws it out the window* *pulls out another raw potato and starts eating it* THIS POTATO IS THE BEST POTATO EVER!!!!! *throws it out the window*
Lila : *notices her* What the h*ll?
KiKi : WHAT'S THAT, PABLO?! u WANT A POTATO, TOO?!?! THEN COME AND GET ONE, YA CRAZY GOOSE!!!!!!
Lila : Did this b*tch miss out on her meds of some sh*t like that? o_O
KiKi : GAAAAHHHSBWJWBQ!!!! THIS POTATOES ARE MAKING ME CONFUUUSSSEEEDDD!!! DX I HATE POTATOES!!!!! D:<
Soda : *sitting door KiKi* I'm sure the potatoes taste gooooooddd!!!!! Lemme try one! :D
KiKi : Okay, but don't kill me and Pablo when u don't like 'em. :U *hands Soda a raw potato*
Soda : *about to eat it*
Veto : Lemme at dat potato!!! >:D *grabs it from Soda*
Soda : D:
Veto : *bites a big piece out of it* *chews* Mhmmm.... This is a good potato!!! :D *continues eating it*
KiKi : LEMME TASTE SOME!!!! *bites a piece off of Veto's potato* *chews* DUDE!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST. POTATO. EVER!!!!! :D
Soda : Care to share the potato with me? <:D
Veto and KiKi : NO. e-e
Soda : o-o"
Veto and KiKi : *continue eating the potato*
Lila : Why do I have to be here with a whole bunch of f*ckin' nutcases? -O-"
(in the volgende cable car)
Brooklyn : *taking a whole bunch of pictures and putting them on Instagram*
Daemon : *sitting door her* *does a stank face at her*
Brooklyn : Ooh!!!! How u like this pose, Daemon? :D *does the eend lips and takes a picture*
Daemon : Even meer disturbing. e_e
Brooklyn : *puts her phone down* *does the finger crawly thingy on his chest* *sounding all sexy and junk* There's nothing disturbing about me, babe. ;) (Fail. XD I, for one, would get straight to the point. I'd be like, "Hey. You. Yeah. Fuck me. Now." XD)
Daemon : Get your crusty, radioactive, acidic, wilting, wrinkling, skanky, indolent, abhorrent, crude, lousy fingers off of my chest, b*tch. e_e
Brooklyn : Why u gotta be so serious? It's just a simple touch. ;) *caressing his cheek*
Daemon : *slaps her*
Brooklyn : EEK!!!! *falls on the ground with a red hand mark on her cheek*
Michael : Uh...... Yeah.. Can I ask you- WHY THE H*LL DID u JUST slaan, smack THAT GIRL?!??!? THAT'S ILLEGAL!!!!!
Daemon : I told the b*tch to get the f*ck off me, and she didn't listen, so I had to slaan, smack a h*e.
Matt : *helps Brook up*
Brooklyn : Thanks, Matt, because SOME PEOPLE don't know how to treat a lady right. >:T
Daemon : Lady? meer like a wh*re.
Brooklyn : >:O
(in the locomotive)
Conductor : *says on the intercom (<I had to ask my sister what that was called. XD)* The food is ready, everyone. It's in the last cable car.
(in the last cable car)
Hydra, Adrianna, Scarlette, Allan, Tokyo, Ryker, Riley, Tom, Jamie, Victoria, Raymond, Yuki, Layla, Bradley, Silvy, Geo, Tim, Drake, Lila, KiKi, Soda, Veto, Brooklyn, Daemon, Michael, and Matt : *come into the room* *get their food and start eating*
All the Lights : *turn off*
Tom : *screams like a little girl*
Jamie : TOMMY, BABY! u OKAY?!
Victoria : YEAH, TOM! ARE u OKAY?!
Tom : Yeah. >_>"
Soda : *screams*
All the Lights : *turn back on*
Soda : *on the ground* *eyes look lifeless* *stabbed in the back with a butcher knife*
Adrianna, Scarlette, Allan, Tokyo, Ryker, Riley, Tom, Jamie, Victoria, Raymond, Yuki, Layla, Bradley, Silvy, Geo, Tim, Drake, Lila, KiKi, Soda, Veto, Brooklyn, Daemon, Michael, and Matt : *scream*
Yuki : SHE'S DEAD!!!!!! SHE'S F*CKIN' DEAD!!!!!!! D:
Adrianna : Okay, now let's be logical, people. We aren't sure if she's really dead; She could possibly just have a minor injury.
Tom : I'm pretty f*ckin' sure no one looks like that when they just have a 'minor injury.' o_o"
Adrianna : I'm sure she's alive, guys. Just keep calm. Veto, care to check her pulse to prove to everyone she is alive? vUv
Veto : Uhh..... Sure. *kneels down* *checks Soda's pulse* *silent for a second* F*ck me in the *ss and call me Sue. She is dead! :O
Tim : And we're all going to die along with her. Woopdy doo. T_T
Tokyo : Okay. Me and a lot of other people here are going to freak out now. ._. AAAAAHHHGSHHA!!!! DX *starts running around screaming*
Tokyo, Yuki, Riley, Silvy, Victoria, Veto, Tom, KiKi, and Layla : *start running around screaming*
Adrianna : Stop, guys! Stop!!!
Tokyo, Yuki, Riley, Silvy, Victoria, Veto, Tom, KiKi, and Layla : *instantly stop* ._.
Adrianna : I'm sure the conductor knows all about this. I say we spleet, split up, and half of us will check out the conductor, and the other half can stay with Soda.
Michael : Yeah. Just in case the killer tries to take the body if we were all gone and we went to the locomotive.
Adrianna : Plus, I'm sure no one wants to touch a dead person, getting all the blood on them, and messing with evidence door putting out fingerprints on her.
Hydra : *stands on the counter*
Tim : *looks down at Hydra's feet* *looks back up at her* u have your foot in my macaroni. Lovely. T_T
Hydra : Never mind about your macaroni, Tim!!!! Everyone, I need u undivided attention!!!!! This is important!!!!!!
Adrianna, Scarlette, Allan, Tokyo, Ryker, Riley, Tom, Jamie, Victoria, Raymond, Yuki, Layla, Bradley, Silvy, Geo, Tim, Drake, Lila, KiKi, Soda, Veto, Brooklyn, Daemon, Michael, and Matt : *turn and look at Gummi*
Hydra : One of us in this very cable car is the killer. Of course a killer won't come clean, so I know how to figure out this murder mystery AND make me big bucks!!!! We could make a TV toon on this!!!!! 'Total Drama Mystery!!!!!!' Like, the bathroom's the confessional, u guys break into teams, I'm the host, I already brung a camera crew for my volgende stop that's was watching your every verplaats earlier and still is now,-
Raymond : Yeah yeah yeah. I'm sure we all watched Total Drama Insanity.
Daemon : So this 'Total Drama Mystery' idea isn't original? Way to go on being creative, wise guy.
Hydra : *points at Daemon* u shut your mouth, Yorkie. This is the way we make money around here on these streets. e_e
Lila : Blah blah blah. Just put us on the teams, would ya? T_T"
Hydra : Patience, my friend. *hops down off of the counter* *clears her throat* Lila, Yuki, Tokyo, Kiki, Allan, Daemon, Tim, and Bradley, you'll be on the team called 'The Investigating Igloos'.
Allan : I'm not, like, the brightest crayon in the box, man, but I'm pretty sure igloos don't have mouths, man, and when u don't have a mouth.... Bro..... u can't even talk... And when u can't talk, man..... u can't, like, investigate, man...... I don't know what you're smoking, man, but I want some, bro. -U-
Hydra : I DON'T SMOKE!!!! I just needed a noun that started with an 'i' to go with 'investigating', and that was the first thing that popped in my head!!!! DON'T JUDGE MEEEE!!!! DX *clears her throat again* Anyway, Victoria, Jamie, Riley, Brook, Tom, Veto, Drake, and Geo, you'll be on the team called 'The Clue-Seeking Snakes'. The rest of you, which is Adrianna, Layla, Scarlette, Silvy, Ryker, Matt, Michael, and Tim, will be on the team called 'The Code-Cracking Cubs'. The first challenge will be announced AFTER DIS BREAK!!!!! :D
(OMG, this fanfic's gonna be so fun to dooooooo!!! :D Also, the volgende part's going right to "A Teagen Fanfic" Part 5 because I didn't get 7 commentaren for the part 4 of it, so I'm not doing the "Total Drama Insanity" part. :D Do u really love "Total Drama Insanity"? THEN FUCKIN' commentaar ON MY SHIT, BRO!!!!! D:< I only got 2 commentaren on part 4, and those were from my usual readers!!!! Come on, people!!!! D:< Anyway, how'd u like it? Did I express your character well? Do I need to improve on anything? Leave your commentaren in the commentaar boxy thingy. The volgende part will come soon hopefully. :P)
