geoff

Hello everyone. I'm going to rewrite TDR because i don't like how they are adding so many new characters. well anyways since we don't know where TDR will take place i decided to have it take place at a Roller coaster/fair/circus type thing called Mclain Land. The returning cast will be
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"

also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if u can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please commentaar with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if u like to write commentaar me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank u and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would love it if one of u could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK u SOOOO MUCH!

(at the grave yared)

chirs:frist bone go's toooo jakki andrea mallory
samantha samantha rollings sara ashley suna dustin rose lynn anacpriana sara kristing amy kenya the last one go's to blaze im sorry chelsea

chelsea:thats ok

tak:bye chelsea (and gives her a hug)

chelsea:bye tak

(after the show)

lucas:i have no idea u sing good

tak:thanxs

chirs:will tak and lucas be meer than friends

both:HEY

chirs:and will everyone die on this toon find out volgende time on total drama goth vs emo

"And whats your talent Duncan?" The Prep asks. "Carving my skull into a tree." I say with a grin. "Ugh, thats useless." After saying that she walked away. Wow, shes always so uptight. "Hey." a voice says behind me. I look behind myself to see Gwen standing there. "Oh hallo gwen." I say. I sit down and look up at gwen. "Wanna sit volgende to me,only if u want to." I say. "Sure." She replys with a smile. "So hows your team going with the challange?" I ask. "Why should i tell you, your on the oppisite team." She says. "Oh okay." I say while putting my arm around her. I turn to her face to see that she is blushing. I lean my head in but quickly i dodge her face and kiss her cheek. "You missed." She says. "I missed?" I say. "Well ill try again." I lean in and kiss her on the lips softly.

The End

I loved Total Drama Island when it first came on "Cartoon Network", I loved how everyone had a unique personality, how Chris was cruel to the campers, and I thought the toon had good character and relationship development.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the toon all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.