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posted by emmab13
 Commando Mike
Commando Mike
This story was inspired door a fan who sent me art work on my Facebook Page, Zoey Total Drama Revenge of the Island. Check it out if u have a Facebook. I hope u like this story. I might me rusty because I haven't written a story in so long, so enjoy. I also want to say about this story that Mike and Zoey are in college, but it's during the summer. Also, It's in short chapters
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Chapter 1
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It was just another dag at the psychiatrist. Zoey was waiting for Mike to come out through the doors of the office. There was a part of her that was always worried, but another part of her that wasn't. Mike finally came out. Zoey stood up hoping for good news. "Hey, Zoey.". "Hey, Mike. I'm hoping for some good news,"Zoey replied. "You don't have to be worried my dear. Mike is fine, like always. I want to thank u again, Zoey. Ever since that toon u and Mike were in, Mike's MPD has gotten a lot better," Lisa said. "Your welcome, doctor," Zoey responded.

The two of them walked out of the psychiatrists and went to hang out. They got into Zoey's red converteerbaar, cabriolet and drove off to the ice cream parlor. They headed in and got the town's best ice cream. They talked for about half an hour. That's when everything went berserk.

The doors slammed open and the room went quiet. A gang of guys, tall and sleek, walked in and over to Mike and Zoey. Of course, it was the one guy who got on both of their nerves. The same guy who turned the sweet, innocent girl into a choragus, wild chick, AKA Commando
Zoey."Well if it isn't the two loser, love birds,". It was Scott. Zoey almost got riled up, but Mike stopped her before she could.

"What do u want, Scott?" Mike asked angrily. "I just wanted to see my two best vrienden in the world," Scott replied. Zoey was just about to say something when Scott dumped Mike's ice cream all over her. "Oh, I'm so sorry, Zoey. Let me help u clean off," Scott zei as he dumped her water all over her. Him and his gang were laughing hard. At that point Zoey was soaking wet and super angry. She wanted to break Scott in half, but she needed Commando Zoey to do that. She hasn't been out since the show. She still wanted to know how he recovered from the haai attack, but that wasn't important right
now.

Zoey got up and looked Scott right in the eyes. To him, it looked like flames were shooting out from them, but he kept his cool. He insulted both of them any walked out. Everyone, then, just stared at Mike and Zoey. "I'll be right back," Zoey zei and walked off to the bathroom to clean off. Mike sat there feeling hatred at Scott. for the both of them, and then felt the need to go do something. Mike stood up and out of the parlor. There, he saw Scott and his gang. Mike walked straight up to Scott and punched him right in the noes. He didn't know what he just did, but now he was afraid. All he knew at that point was Scott's nose was bleeding and he should run.

He started to run away, but one of Scott's guys caught him door the collar. He stared to pray and hope for help, but nothing happened. Mike was just about to be pulverized when a miracle happened. Zoey saw Mike in trouble and that's when she snapped. Commando Zoey appeared and beat them down. "NO ONE HURTS MIKE!!!!!" exclaimed Zoey. She then punched them all hard enough to where they black out. Zoey got up, brushed herself off and turned to Mike.

"You ok?", she asked as she helped Mike up. "Yeah, I'm fine,". Mike just looked down at the group of guys then looked at his hand that turned to a fist. "Why did I do that? I've never punched a guy in my life," Mike thought.

The rest of the day, until that night, Mike's vraag rang in his head. He wanted to know why he punched Scott. He was so confused. He laid in his bed with his hands over his stomach, breathing at a steady pace. His quiet surroundings caused him to drift off to sleep.

Chapter 2
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Weeks passed. Mike gradually started
acting meer rambunctious and crazier that ever. It was as if he couldn't control it. He was like Robin kap of the Lone Ranger, only meer
dangerous. Zoey was worried and knew he
had to go to his psychiatrist. Lucky for them, today was the day.

Zoey walked over to Mike's house and rang the door bell. His roommate, Cameron answered the door. "Hey, Cameron. Is Mike here? We have to go,". Cameron responded," Yeah, he's here. Come on in". The two walked down the hall. "He's in here, but be careful. He hasn't been himself lately," Cameron informed. "Trust me. I know," Zoey replied. She walked in. "Hey, Mike. It's time to go,". "Oh. Hey, Zoey," he stood up a kissed her on the cheek. "OK. Let's go," Mike replied to her. They zei bye to Cameron as they walked out.

10 minuten later, they pulled up to Mike's physiatrist's office. They walked in and the two of them were in for a surprise. Lisa was sitting in the waiting room, seeming very worried. When she saw Mike and Zoey, she immediately stood up and walked to them. "Mike, please follow me. Zoey, your welcome to come too," zei Lisa. They started walking down the hall when Mike asked," What's the matter?". Lisa just kept walking until they stopped at a room Mike hasn't seen before. They all walked inside and saw a bunch of sciency gadgets. Zoey was instructed to walk into the room volgende to the room they were currently in. So she did.

In the middle of the room was a tafel, tabel and they sat down. "What the matter, Lisa? And, where am I," asked Mike. "Mike, I found some startling news," responded Mike's doctor. "What is it,". "Mike," started Lisa," u have a fifth personality,".

Chapter 3
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"What?! How is this possible?" exclaimed Mike. "We're not sure how it happened, but we can tell u about him," zei Lisa, "his name is Commando Mike. He tough like Vito, agile like Svetlana, and sourceful like Manitoba. I think he came to be, because of something u either saw of did. Now we don't know how to trigger him, but we think it might be anger. But because we don't want trouble, u have to go in your subconscious. Can u do that for us?" asked Lisa.

"Yeah. I guess. Where should I lay down?" Mike asked. "Well u can lay anywhere, but I recommend the bed over there," she replied as she pointed to a nearby bed.

Mike walked over to the soft bed and laid there. He closed his eyes until he fell asleep. Lisa and her assistant Gwen (Yes. The Gwen from Total drama) walked over and stood around the bed. They took notes on what was
happening.

Zoey was very worried. She knew this room and she didn't want the same thing that happened to her, to happen to Mike.
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Flashback
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It was the before the Freshman jaar of high school started. Zoey was one of the most quiet kids at the orientation for the entire freshman class. Luckily she was with one of her best friends, Dawn. They walked around to classes together with Zoey's parents. After all of that Zoey went home pagina with them. As soon as they got into her car, Zoey instantly felt terrible. It was because of her parents. They were telling her that she was so quiet when they met her teachers and she should of been meer outgoing. She felt even meer terrible when they got home pagina and mom told her that she needs to think about her future and all that crap. What turned her is when Scott insulted her. She went crazy after that. She was never the same. That's how Commando Zoey came to be.
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Reality
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Zoey looked at herself in discomfort and sadness. Then she looked at Mike in worry. Mike was her best friend and she loved him very much. "If only I knew what was happening in his head," Zoey thought.

Chapter 4
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Back in Mike's subconscious, he was sneaking around looking for anything
suspicious. It was really quiet and really dark. Just then he saw a small light, up ahead. He grew closer and closer hoping it was one of his other personalities. He was closer than ever to the light, when it hit him. A green, slimy ball of goo hit Mike right in the back. It was pretty big about half the height of Mike and twice the width of him. He cried for help. He heard foot steps running up to him.

"I got him. This is a big one, mate. hallo guys come help me with this," exclaimed Manitoba. Two meer pairs of feet came running up to Mike and the green ball of goo. "Don't worry, Mike. We'll get u out of there," Vito told him calmly. He grabbed his wrists and pulled him out of the goo ball. "Why didn't u tell us that u were gonna get a new personality?!" exclaimed Svetlana as she struggled to hold on to the ball of goo. "I didn't know! Just like I didn't know that u would be here either!" replied Mike. "Fair," Vito said. The ball broke free and everyone backed up. The ball was right in front of them. They were terrified of what was going to
happen.

That moment the goo ball started to break open like a chick breaking from an egg. It opened, and a great light broke free along with smoke. At first they couldn't tell what the personality looked like, but once the smoke died down they could see the figure that stood before them. It looked like Mike ,only he had war paint just below his eyes and the bottom of his overhemd, shirt was ripped off an wrapped around his head. Mike walked up to him and just stared at him.

Chapter 5
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They all started to have a deep conversation and got to know Commando Mike. "So," Mike started," do u know how your triggered?". "Hm. Let me think," zei CM, "I'm pretty sure it might be anger of something based around that,". Mike replied," Well thanks. I will see u guys later. And CM...." zei Mike. "Yes?" he replied. There's someone I might be able to introduce u to,". 'Who," asked CM suspiciously. "You'll see. Well bye guys," Mike said.

Mike woke up from his sleep to see Lisa and Gwen standing near him. "So, what happened in there?," Gwen asked. Mike, still confused about what happened, said," Whoa! That was crazy. There was a ball of goo, and light, and smoke, and and and,". "Mike. Calm down," zei Lisa, "Now, can u tell me what Commando Mike's trigger is?,". He finally calmed down and told her the trigger. "But the only problem is, is that I'm not sure how to get angry. The only time I've ever felt angry is when.....". Mike stopped and remembered the one person who started all of this. "What is it Mike?", asked Gwen. He slowly looked up at them and responded,
"Scott,".

"Scott?!" replied Gwen. "Yes. Scott,". "Scott!" Zoey zei over the intercom. Mike put a thumbs up. "Who's Scott?" Lisa asked. That's when Zoey finally walked into the room where everyone was. "Who is Scott? I'll tell u who Scott is. He is the one caused all of this. He's the one that turned me. He has gotten on my nerves since 9th grade. Because of him I'll never be the same," she zei as she slammed her fist on a tafel, tabel nearby. Mike got up, walked over to her and put his hand on her back to calm her down.

"Then we have to go and find him. Where ever he is," Gwen responded. "But we don't know where he is. He could be anywhere. He could be in France for all we know," Mike said. *beep* *beep* Mike's phone got a text. He looked at his phone and realized it was Cameron. Mike open the message. "Oh no," cried Mike. "What is it?" everyone asked in unison. "I know where Scott is,".

Chapter 6
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They all drove off to where Scott was. "What did the text say again," asked Zoey. "It zei *MIKE. HELP!!!!!!!!!!! Scott is at our house. I'm hiding in a closet so he can't find me. Please come soon,". "We better hurry then," zei Gwen.

10 minuten later, they arrived at the house. They all walked in and there, stood Scott. "Why are u here, Scott?" Mike asked. "I like to walk in to people's homes and terrorize them. u guys are next," replied Scott. "How? There's two of us and one of you," responded Zoey. "Wrong,". Scott snapped his fingers and three of his gang members appeared. "Come on Mike. We can take him," Zoey told him. "Yeah. Sure u can. Face it Zoey your boyfriend is a weakling. He couldn't fight if his life depended on it,". Scott laughed. Zoey snapped. Once she turned back into Commando Zoey, she tried to get Mike to fight. "I-I can't." Mike zei in shame. "That's right. u cant fight, because your a weakling. Just like that Cameron guy who I have tied up over in your very ugly living room. I mean come on. Get some paint on your walls of something," Scott said.

Mike got angry. Like really angry. "No one can tie up Cameron. And no one make's fun of my living room," Mike responded angrily. Mike turned into Commando Mike. He ripped his clothes and had war paint. Everything got graphic all of a sudden. Everyone was bloody and Scott and his gang were knocked out on the floor. Gwen called an ambulance and got the blood cleaned up.

After the ambulance came and picked up Scott and the others, Lisa and Gwen left. CM and CZ were left alone in the house,other than Cameron who was still tied up. The two of them just stood there staring at each other. "So, u must be the one Mike wanted to introduce to me," zei CM. "So. What are u gonna do about it," CZ zei with a smirk on her face. "This,". CM kissed her. They both turned back into their regular selves. They looked at each other. Mike then said," I should probably go and untie Cameron," Mike zei quietly.

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1 jaar later
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Everything was back to normal. Mike and Zoey didn't get any meer trouble from Scott. They decided to protect anyone who was in trouble (not like super heroes). They lived happily ever after.

The End
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Finally finished!!!!!!!!!! I really hope u guys enjoy it. I'll have another story out soon. Peace out, guys (and gals).
 Commando Zoey and Commando Mike
Commando Zoey and Commando Mike
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Source: Me
posted by nocofangirl218
Yep, I'm doing a Mike story! :D

Alright, so, in episode 9, when Mike was battling his other personalities in his mind, at a certain time, u could see a dark shadow of him appear for a brief seconde before it disappears. I thought about it, and, bing bang, this story was born! ((I always had this story for him in the back of my mind though...)) Anyway, here's my story! :D


“Something doesn't feel right.” I think as I gaze into the elimination ceremonies fire.

Despite the crappy parts of having to do whatever Scott zei so he wouldn't tell Zoey – the now and forever love of my life – that...
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 Mike
Mike
Chapter number 5. This one's going to be cool because Mike finds meer about his MPD. My writing process is a lot harder than it looks. First, I have to write it. Then, I have to reread and check it on a different computer. Also, I have to find pictures. It takes me about 2-3 days, maybe longer. I'm off topic. Let's see what happens in the story next.
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Mike's mom rushed to the phone while his dad spoke to Mike. "We think u have a something wrong with you". "What do u mean, daddy?" asked the worried boy. "You have just told us that u were...
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 Mike
Mike
Here's the volgende chapter. Hope u like it. : )
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Headache

Tired

Groggy

This is how Mike felt when he woke up. He was in the nurse's office. And there was someone volgende to him. That's right, Zoey. She looked and him smiled then zei " Hey, Mike. How u feeling?". "I don't know. I'm tired and groggy. Also, I have a headache. What happened?"asked Mike, tiredly. The nurse came over to Mike. "Here, take this". The nurse handed Mike an aspirin and a glass of water. He took it then looked back at Zoey. "Well, u were about to climb the rope and door the way u looked...
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TDBB1

Tear drops on my balance beam

Chapter 1: 

-Don't want to leave- 


Everything was fine during that day, until the factories started closing down in Russia. The societies started to crumble due to the lack of supplies and help from  countries. Penelope and Svetlana were very depressed. And had no choice but to leave. 

"But momma!" Svetlana shrieked with tears running down her cheeks and Mr.snuggles resting in her arm. "I don't want to leave Russia! This is our home!"

Penelope was grasping her daughter's hand and dragging her into the airport.

"I'm sorry sweet heart, but we have to leave." She...
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posted by SuperGwen
Brick's a Bronie?! Part 2

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Part 2 of Brick's a Bronie! Enjoy

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Another dag came to pass in Vancouver. Well, not just any day! It's Brick's birthday! And Jo had a special surprise for him. She had woke up early that morning, packed everything they Would need, and slowly tied a black blindfold around her Boyfriends eyes.

Brick was silently snoring and snuggled meer into his blanket. Jo slowly leaned down and kissed his lips. 
He sprawled around like a vis out of water, and gasped for air.

"Huh? Where am I?! toon yourselves creatins!" Brick raised his fists...
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posted by iPsychic
This is my seconde written fanfic, my first using the new cast. It's about Mike and Zoey :) BTW, Mike is telling the story. Please tell me if I need any improvements of anything else! Enjoy :)

'Loser!'

'You're such a freak!'

'You don't deserve to live!'

'Who'd want to be vrienden with a guy who changes personalities?'

Those words stung my heart, but not as much as what these people were doing to me. They kicked me in the chest, pushing me to the ground and yelled in my face. Just because I have a multiple personality disorder.

Why was I born with this curse? I ask myself that vraag every day.

Why...
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JO
JO : oh u guys don't u see when I was alittle kiddy and the sun was going dooowwwnnnn ....
annemaria ; tell me she not
jo ;the darkness and the shadows would always make me frooowwwnnnn
camron; she is
jo ; id hide under my hoofdkussen, kussen from what I though I saw but granny may zei that wasn't the way to deal with fears at all
brick ; THEN WHAT IS ????
jo; she zei : " joey , u gotta stand up tall learn to face your fears you'll see that they wont hurt u just laugh and make them disappear " "HA HA HA " ( mutan disappears )
brick,anne,zoey,mike,and Cameron ; (gasp)
jo and mike ; SOOOOO !!!! , giggle at the ghostly guffaw at the grossly crack up at the creepy whoop it up with the funly chortle at the kooky snortle at the spooky
and tell that big dumb creepy face to take a hike and leave u alone and if it think it can scare ou its got something else coming and the very though of such a thing makes u wanna .... HAHA HAHA ... HEH ....LLLLAAAAAUUUUGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
posted by cannibalZoey
AnneMaria :
Type unicorn mane : puffy and purple coat: violet cutiemark : hairspray can eyes : purple
B :
Type : unicorn mane : black jas : green cutiemark : a rinch eyes: blue
Brick (prince ) :
Type : anticorn mane black jas : green cutiemark : dog tags eyes : red
Cameron :
Type earth mane red jas yellow cutiemark a book eyes glasses with brown
Dakota :
Type unicorn mane roze jas roze cutiemark camera eyes green
Dawn (1 of princess Jo's faithful students )
Type peagus mane blonde jas green cutiemark a leaf eyes blue
Jo ( princess ) :
Type anticorn/ zebra mane looks like Luna's jas dark...
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Source: not me
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Source: me
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Source: Picture from the Coolbluebox on YT. Edited door me on Picnik :)
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posted by Tkomastersay
Hello vrienden , it's me again writing all of u something of mike's life. This is a view of mike mind of his own life, telling u every little thing about him.
Thanks for all for all the help, if u read this it going to be awesome.
Now on to the story. :)
My name is mike,this my first time on Total drama island revenge of the island. As am in the boot i start wondering what is going to be on the island. I have problems i have mulitple pearsonlities.

Sometimes i try to control them but, i can't. In the miror i always talk to my pearsonlities but they won't listen.Some of my pearsonlities are...
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added by cannibalZoey
TDBB9

Early birds

So sorry I haven't updated all week! I usually do it frequently, but evidently, I  lost it. So here it is!
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Sun shining.

Birds chirping

It was morning. The best time of the day. The sun was rising in a shield of gold, the morning dew was just starting to set, and certain alarm clocks were chirping on other floors. But this morning was a little meer early than planned.

It was about 2am. The teens in Red Valley were still asleep. The dew hasn't even set, and the sun wouldn't dare to come out on this hour.

Manitoba was fast asleep in bed. Snoring and laying limply in his sheets....
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