True Writers Article: No meer Unicorns (Ch. 1)

posted by hgfan5602

This is my first fan fic... and hopefully I will be continuing on this! Enjoy!

My name is Alice. I'm eleven years young. My life has been all... unicorns until this year. It's sort of like all the fun has been cut off from my life. Like adults and other people alike all want me to have a short childhood. It's strange, because it seems as if everyone else is having loads of excitement in their lives. But I'm the only one who is at home, trying not to cut myself everyday because of all the stress in my life. It's difficult not to, and I haven't spoke to anyone so far. I don't want to be sent to a mental hospital. I'm not mental.... am I? I think that's u to decide and for me to find out.
All of this... drama started when a girl in our class named Stacy decided to write a note and send it to one of my BFFs, Skylar. It said, "Alice, Skylar, and Sarah... u will definitely regret being mean to me in the end." The first thought that came to my mind was, "Why would anyone do that? Why would anyone say that? And seconde of all, her name is faded at the bottom of the note but it's still obvious to see. Why? Why? Why?!?! Stacy was my friend... of at least I thought she was. Why would anyone think of something so pathetic... yet something so vengeful?"
Well it turned out that she told our teacher Mrs. Harris... and she blamed it on Skylar. I didn't understand. Now Stacy was also being immature and making fun of my other best friends' hairstyles, clothes, shoes, and much more! I mean, grow up! Seriously!! Not only that... Stacy was also crying to our teacher... and making a huge sob story out of it. I was pissed... and sort of sad at how my best friend changed so much. Oh, of should I say ex best friend.

alicia386 What is this story based off of? You said it was a fan fic what story are your rewriting? Also, adorable title. The character seems a bit younger than eleven. When I was eleven the biggest thing to have ever happened was not unicorns, it was more along the lines of silly bands and who is the funniest. We were way past the unicorn stage. The story all together seems a bit fast paced as if we are rushing into a story instead of giving us more background information and then getting into the plot. Instead it is like we are jumping off a cliff and landing straight to the plot without barely any background information. All in all, it is a good start and a already interesting story. Is this a journal entry or chapter.

hgfan5602 Okay thanks for the feedback @alicia386! I will reconsider that... and maybe change some things on this story because I think it's not the best that it can be. Sort of need to revamp. But thanks! This is a chapter.. but I need some time to think about this... i'm not sure if i should continue or not

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.18

posted by Problematic129

18
    Zaria
    “So we will not speak of of mention the unspeakable event that took place last night,” Darren told us, looking like a stern teacher reprimanding his class.
    “For the hundredth time yes!” Edith shrieked.
    The sad part was that she wasn’t exaggerating.
    We were all on edge, super tension ran from the air, we had left the park with a dispirited mood. Not because of the stupid stone. Iris was supposed to call us when she got home, but the call never came so we called...

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Charmed and Dangerous ch. 9

posted by alicia386

Chapter Nine: Escape Artist Can Escape But A Group Of Students Can't Even Escape From Their School

Everyone was ready for the escape plan the volgende night. If it was up to me we would have had everything ready within an uur but tracking teacher schedules was harder then it looked. We were all set and ready to take off that night. I had learned that the school kept two emergency vans in the back. I nabbed the keys from the office when no one was around. I wonder how long it will take them to notice that a set of keys are missing. It was about midnight when our team assembled. Everyone...

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Everything Eden #1: Beginning Booklist

posted by dragonsmemory

Welcome to the official/unofficial newsletter for everything Eden. This is where you'll hear about exciting new projects as well as general news of the planet Eden and my musings. Everything Eden is your bron for, well, everything Eden.
In this issue, I'll talk aabout the three serries of Eden boeken that'll be coming soon. The first Eden book is expected to hit shelves in the volgende five to ten years, with others following soon after. Let's take a look.

THE SHADOW TRILOGY VOLUME 1: HOPE IN THE STRANGEST PLACES
The first volume in the Shadow trilogy deals with an evil present in all beings, called...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.28

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 28
        Everyone loves Friday
    I don’t know if Meredith was angry with the cafeteria’s outburst, I haven’t talked to her since that incident, not that we talked much. Sometimes I’d walk past and she’d give me the normal sweet yet lethal look she always did. She’s been skipping some class, one time when she skipped gym some girl’s in the locker room were talking about how vicious she’s gotten. Then one zei how Grey totally rejected her and she isn’t happy.
    But...

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Charmed and Dangerous Ch. 6

posted by alicia386

Chapter Six: Two Goons, One Girl, One Man, and One Secret Room

The door immediately slammed shut behind me. The one thing I never do is panic. It was the perfect time to panic but I had to keep my composure. I wondered if Darrell was able to escape. He couldn't possibly wait for me. He has the opportunity to escape and save himself. I took one step vooruit, voorwaarts and tumbled down the stairs. It was so dark that I didn't even notice them. I had quick reflexives so I was able to stop myself before I crashed of made a sound to ward off the intruder. A light switch was to my left so I flicked...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.12

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
12
    Darren
    No matter the coaxing, Stilere stayed stubborn, she wasn’t being left behind. u see, it’s like really early in the morning, how early? Like friggin three a.m., that’s how! I am tired, and I certainly don’t want any spook in my life now.
    “I’m coming!” Stilere yelled defiantly, smirking when she saw Alex’s shoulder’s deflate. She’s won the battle.
    “Fine,” Alex said. “But be careful, oh and your on watchful tower.”
    Watchful...

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World of Shadows Ch. 18

posted by alicia386

Chapter Eighteen
Book Six- Zoe

How did the battle end? Well, Shane kicked some serious butt. I wasn't so bad myself. The guards may have been ghost but they were pretty easy to kill. All u had to do was kill hem like u would kill a human. It was that simple. It was what made the battle even meer serious then it already was. My sister. She killed herself. That is what it looked like. The odd thing was that The One was nowhere to be found. I searched everywhere in the kasteel but I couldn't find him. I soon gave up. He wasn't important. My sister was. The dream of my sister's grave...

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Remember me Ch.38

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasy :)~
Chapter 38
        The river that drowned tears
    I ignored the freaked out yells and warning’s as I went past the speed and nearly demolished the car, we couldn’t take our time, we had to be fast. We finally reached the river, which was very close to the river, and I turned off the engine and jumped out of the car running to the lake.
    I plunged deep into the water and I swam through it to find the victim, who I found though made me gasp. Jessica was tied to...

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The keeper of the forbidden light

posted by Annabeth788594

chapter one

When I was a little girl my dad suddenly left. I remember being really close to him. Sometimes he would act strange though. Like he never stayed in one place long and was always looking behind him like he thought someone was following him. And one dag he zei he had to go for a little while, and he never came back. He was the best father I could ask for. He was kind and always did what was best for the family. And that is why it broke my hart-, hart to find out that he wasn’t coming back. At first I didn’t believe it and I didn’t want to. The only thing I wanted was my dad to come...

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Remember me Ch.35

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasy :)~
Chapter 35
        Qualities of a hero
    “I brought u your favoriete foods, deserts, etc. Should hold u for awhile.” Jess says, handing me a steamy plate.
    “What are u planning on doing, Jess?” I ask, confused, but grateful she wasn’t starving us. “What’s your motive?”
    “Sorry, can’t give u all of my secrets, you’ll know soon,” Jess paused. “But right now, eat, strengthen your bones.”
    I take...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.6

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
6
    Darren
    Now, I don’t hate school, no, not at all. But the thought of going to it for a place of safety, especially with no one but creepy janitors in there, yeah, I’m not liking it.
    “How are we going to get in?” Brooklyn asked, eyeing the doors that, in morning look friendly and welcoming, but at night look dangerous and ready to gobble up innocent kids.
    “Oh, please!” Stilere said, looking at our faces. “You cannot be scared of school,...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.4

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
4
Iris
    I hadn’t been really surprised when we broke apart after that weirdness, being with them brought back all those memories. But I’ve been beginning to feel a bit lonely, all of us really bonded that day, and it feels like were sharing a secret. The bad part is that we don’t even know the secret either.
    I still can’t stop thinking of that book, it just popped up from where the lightning hit. Something happened that made it do that.
    “Hey Zaria,” I say as I walk up to her.
    Zaria...

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Don't Dance (rock song)

posted by hgfan5602

Ya tell me,
Don't dance, don't dance,
Just stay inside and never go out
And scold me
All dag long, all dag long

What makes u think you're so damn awesome?
Don't ya know we have a life too, too?
We'd be sittin in watching TV
And I don't think u want that either

So what the heck can we do?
We're not just mindless robots with nothing else to do
We don't have time for homework
We just wanna have fun, fun, fun

We have a life, no time for homework
We can go ahead and play flag football
But I'm not goin inside

Why do u act like
There's nothin else better than
Doin homework all night long
I bet u never liked that when u were young

We've been playin outside
Now it's time to kick in and relax
No meer time for homework, just sit back and do the things I love to do
Cuz I gotta enjoy my life when I'm young.

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The Deadly Truth Ch. 6

posted by alicia386

Crime: Dectetive Story

Chapter 6: Two Missing People Makes A Certain Someone Happy

Simone Rivers wore her blue strapless dress which made her look taller. She was already tall but she needed that extra height. She had her long blonde hair curled and wore the black wedges she recently bought. The whole outfits was around a seven hundred dollars but she wouldn't mention that to her cheap dad. She looked dazzling of at least that is what all the boys thought when they whistled when she walked by. She took pleasure on having their attention. Nothing could stop her now. She felt powerful...

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Remember me Ch.27

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasy :)~

Chapter 27
        Creepy doesn’t even begin to describe
    “The drowning man? Seriously creepy, considering how she died.” Jess said, shivering. “They’ve got to be the number one suspects now.”
    “It probably wasn’t all of them, just a few, of maybe even one.” Cadence said. “Think is, Dorothy was loved door everyone, and in that vision everyone wanted to be her favorite, what gives?”
    “What?”
    “Who would...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.10

posted by Problematic129

Chapter 10
    The smell of young love in the morning
    You’d all be happy to know that I never buried a certain Meredith Baxter, but I did accidentally hit her during our lovely game of volleybal fifteen times.
    “Hey JONES! Watch it!” She yelled furiously at me.
    “Oh sorry, I didn’t give a had enough smack,” I shrug as I put on my most innocent face.
    Meredith glared at me but zei nothing more.
    Don’t u just love the feeling of having the last word?...

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World of Shadows- Ch. 8

posted by alicia386

Chapter Eight

IF ONLY I COULD HAVE MULTIPLE LIVES of LIVE FOREVER. -Erica

I was rudely thrown in a miniature room. He didn't say much when he lugged me here. Although, I could sense others nearby but when I looked there were no ghost of anyone near. I had finally gotten rid of the feeling to only have it come back again. This time I saw who it was. "Erica?" A shimmery figure exposed itself to me. A little surprise but not as surprise as Erica who was now flickering on and off like a light bulb.
"Who are u and why did u attack me?" This Erica was not the one I remembered from...

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vrienden Until the End- Chapter Twelve Final Chapter

posted by alicia386

Chapter Twelve

"This just in," announced anchorman Douglass. "Some new insight on the Dalton murder case has just been revealed. Not only have they discovered the real killer they also have a CD of the killer admitting to the crime. Although, they will not go public with the names and other crucial details we still keep faith for the Dalton parents as they go through this awful time. Back to u Joe."
Dakota stared her tv with astonishment. She had just leave the jailhouse and arrived home pagina to find her parents watching the news. Not only was she surprised, she was also impressed...

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The Time of my Life

posted by hgfan5602

I've had the time of my life
We were comin and goin
But I told myself,
Kid, things are gonna be alright.

Things were hard,
Things were mighty difficult,
Things were strange,
But I kept my head through it all

Boy I survived...
And what a mess I've made
At least I made it through alive
Gosh, unexpectedly, it was the time of my life

When I thought
I could not text and party all night long
When I thought
No one's gonna keep me down

The strange life
The awesome life
Just comin and goin
It's weird how it is

One day, it's like "Awesome!"
And the volgende dag it's like "I wish I was dead"
Life's just always strange
But I've...

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World of Shadows- Chapter Three

posted by alicia386

Chapter Three

THE TRUE MYSTERY IS NOT WHAT HAPPENED IN YOUR LIFE BUT WHAY HAPPENED AFTER DEATH. ARE u STILL ALIVE, DO u TRANSFER INTO A NEW BODY, of WHAT? -EMMA

Sophie didn't arrive home pagina until late that evening. That was so like her. She was such a party girl that she assumed that she could toon up whenever she pleased. I was getting tired of that. I really needed her today but she was too busy having fun and being social. I had spent the rest of the dag painting a new canvas of a stormy dag with wind, rain, and lightening. It turned out beautiful.
Sophie came into the basement...