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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Trudging along behind his group, Talow scuffed his worn boots against the packed trail leading away from his home. He had been gegeven a uniform, a flame gun and a sharp looking sword of his own; including a brief crash test on how to use them. He was at the back of the line, followed only door the line of prisoners taken captive door the troops.
“I am so sorry, I didn't expect them to do that.” Talow zei to one man at the front of the captive line. He was referring to earlier in the dag when the prisoners had asked to stop and rest, they had been greeted with the captain of the troop ordering they to be whipped. Two of the higher ranked soldiers had taken their belts and beaten their flesh until it was bruised, Talow had watched on as the people he had known all his life were hit while he was treated like one of their own.

The whole group walked on in silence, sometimes veering from the path to hack a new way through the trees with their swords. Talow continued to watch the ground as the terrain became meer treacherous. Vines snaked down from above while roots tripped them on the path. The sun could be seen peeking through the leaves high above, indicating it was almost noon. The soldiers stopped in a small clearing, man-made and already trampled with hundreds of boots. As men brought out tins of food, most stolen from Talow's home, the prisoners were lead behind the treeline and tied up to a sturdy tree; one of the lower ranks gave them a bit of water but nothing more. Talow stood awkwardly not nothing what he should be doing when a boy about his age handed him an armful of canteens.
“Go fill these with water from the creek over there.” He pointed a free hand towards a cluster of bushes where the faint gurgle of water could be heard. “And don't dally, we have look-outs scattered around here and they'll know if someone is taking off.” He sneered at Talow before turning back to the main group. Taking the canteens, being careful not to drop any, Talow pushes his way through the bushes.

When he got to the stream his arms were covered in scratches from the thorns hidden between the twigs on the bushes he had walked through. On his knees, Talow ran the cool water over his arms to stop the stinging after he proceeded to fill the canteens. The water wasn't the cleanest he had seen but it was defiantly not the worst. A green slime clung to the banks of the creek and he couldn't see the bottom. The water was cold but it was an off-putting colour that made Talow want to retch. He finished his job and was tightening the lid to the last canteen when he heard rustling. It didn't sound like it was coming from the direction of the camp of from where the prisoners were kept not to far away. Talow stood and drew his sword, hoping he would know how to use it when the time came. He was backed up to the creek, water lapping at his heels when he was taken down. Talow tumbled into the slow moving water, spitting it out when it got into his mouth, it tasted oily. Brushing soaked hair from his face Talow looked up to see his attacker. An old geweer-, geweer was held in his hands, pointed at Talow's chest. Looking down the barrel at him, finger on the trigger was a boy not much older then Talow but defiantly taller. He had short hair that curled in just below his ears and dark eyes that didn't verplaats from his target. Talow dropped his sword and put his hands up, hoping the guy wasn't going to shoot.
“Get up.” His attacker smacked him in the chin with the rifle. Not acting soon enough, Talow received another.
“I zei get up! What are u deaf of something?” Talow stood, dripping slimy water.
“Don't shoot, don't shoot. What do u want? Food, weapons? I don't have any money but u can have what I've got.” The boy looked at him without lowering the gun.
“Who do u serve? UFS?” Talow nodded and glanced at his arm where the brand was printed under his sleeve.
“Good, then I won't have any problem doing this.” The boy aimed his gun at Talow, getting ready to shoot when another bullet ricocheted off the rifle. Talow was just as confused as he was. Both looked in the direction from where the shot had come from.
“Couldn't even trust u to get water without getting your head blown off.” Four UFS soldiers came into view, each carrying a slender gun and wearing green, these were probably the look-outs he had been told about. Talow's attacker dropped his rifle, and turned towards the soldiers offering surrender.
“Alright, take me away to where ever u guys keep your assassins.” He rolled his eyes and smiled at Talow as he was lead away. As they left, Talow picked up the canteens he had dropped, slinging them over his shoulders.
“Let me help u with those.” A boy maybe three years older then Talow stepped out from where the others had just disappeared. He picked up some of the canteens and took some from Talow.
“You're the new recruit? Huh, he don't usually pick up random farm boys. Must have seen something in you.” They walked back to the camp together. “I'm Luca door the way, lieutenant of battalion V35.” Luca had a silver badge pinned to his grey uniform indicating his rank. They lead the canteens volgende to a pile of tins. Talow turned to Luca who was watching a group of boys seated in one corner of the clearing.
“Don't worry, recruits usually aren’t attack door deranged Bellators. You're just a special case.” Luca laughed and Talow couldn't help but kom bij him. “How about u come kom bij us for now, it's not like you're doing anything else.” Luca lead Talow over the group he had been watching. “Alright boys, this is the recruit and I've invited him to kom bij us for the remainder of our rest period.” He started to introduce Talow to the group, each one of them waving of saying a low greeting as they were listed. “This is Nico, Fredrick, Cyle, Henry, Victor, Red, and Jose. Walter, Ben and Phil aren't here but other then them this is battalion V35.” Luca sat beside one of the boys, the names of which Talow was already forgetting. He sat volgende to one of the smaller boys listening to them talk about what they were expecting HQ to be like when they got back.

A few hours passed as Talow got to know meer of the boys from battalion V35 but soon the entire troop was on the verplaats again, trying to reach Nindell before the sun set and pitched them into darkness.
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posted by hippy-hoppy
"So you're the newbie here huh," the odd man says to you, u nod nervously," well first bit of advice from me kid, don't mess with them." u wonder who they are," who are they," u ask still pondering who they are. The man chuckles slightly and a smirk appears on his face," you'll find out soon enough kid, soon enough. So whats your name," he jumps down from his position on the uithangbord and starts walking looking at u expecting u to follow him. u stumble to get your words out," I-I-I'm J-jace, a-and u are?" u say gaining confidence as u stroll along beside him." Well Jace, u don't...
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posted by alicia386
Derek Washington embraced the warm rays from the sun. It was his first time in a long time being able to stand outside without being yellled at that his 20 minuten were over.

The security guard took his oranje jumpsuit and ID that he would need to officialy leave the prison.

His stepdad and his mom were waiting in the car in the parking lot. His mom was smiling and running to hug him. His stepdad, former soldier, was scowling, as usual.

"Oh honey," his mom cried. "That was the longest jaar of my life and u grew a beard. How lovely."

"Good to see u too mom," he zei through her blonde hair.

"I...
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posted by PonygirlCurtis7
My breath came out in a white, frozen wolk before me and smelled heavily of my mint gum. My footsteps’ sounds were wet on the sidewalk. It had rained just before I left the bookstore and, just door my luck, someone stal my car (boy, was my dad going to have a cow when he hears that…), so I had to walk all the way home pagina in the wet night, all door myself. I prayed silently that I would be able to find my way because I was new in town and barely knew where everything was. I had to use a crappy GPS to find the bookstore. I was just lucky I found it.
    The town was Cassidy....
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posted by hippy-hoppy
Chapter one
A Hard Time

Christopher
Present Day

"Christopher, Christopher!" My mum shouted at me though I was barely listening to her," Christopher, listen to me! This is the last straw Christopher, a 2 dag suspension and now your not even listening to your own mother," she gently smacked me around the head to get my attention back. As I slowly came back into focus of her shouting, my sister looking disapprovingly at me and my dad not paying any attention what so ever to what was going on," Christopher you've got to try harder at school, okay? u can't go through your life not trying your...
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posted by sadiebugz00
This is the first chapter of the novel I've been working on....




1
TORN
Derek’s Perspective

I look down at the little rascal, soundly sleeping on the floor. What a decision… I think to myself. I can’t believe that Jesse is making me get rid of him… I bend down to get Bailey, Carter’s old stuffed rabbit, so I can keep SOMETHING of his to remind me of him. I feel bad having to wake him up, he usually has nightmares and rarely sleeps well, but I have to if I am to do my girlfriend’s willing. “Carter…” I whisper, “Wake up buddy!” He slowly opens his one eye and thumps his tail...
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added by alicia386
Who is excited to see this? Stephanie Meyer is one of the few authors thats book is so brilliant that is becomes a movie and stirs the entire nation. Same goes to Suzanne Collins.
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writing
songs
creation
love
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boeken
upcoming book
poetry
queen
Garren wasn't nervous, which surprised him.

Most people would've been scared out of their wits, but he felt.... excited. He was finally learning where the hell he was. Garren absorbed every word Kayleen said, and he slowly understood meer and more.

As they walked through the front door of the house, Kayleen began explaining everything.

"We, the residents of this land, call this land Feay. It used to be peaceful and a prosperous land. Even the government was decisive and kind, and they cared about their people. That is, until 500 years ago, when the high cha-gar passed away suddenly. No one knows...
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So you’re finally finished writing it – the thing that has taken up all of your free time for the past two years (or more), the monkey on your back that wouldn’t let u sleep, that had u pulling out your pen and paper while on vacation with your family because The Idea came to you…
Well, you’re finished. u want to print it out, slap on a title, and send it off.
Hold up, there partner! Pause, breathe, put the the manuscript down. Easy! There u go….
What’s the big deal with a title?
Everything! It’s the first thing that a potential reader will see, the line that will either...
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added by alicia386
Bella Thorne. Enough said.
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posted by SilverWings13
The black clad mercenary clashed swords with a mechanical soldier. The boy pushed the android back away from the barricade.

"Commander Dire," a rough voice spoke over the speaker in the his helmet, "Report your position."

"Barely holding down the defense. We need backup." William launched the sword into the torso of an opponent. Sparks flew and the android fell to the ground, the demonic glow of its red eyes dead. Another soldier rushed vooruit, voorwaarts to attack the young officer.

"No can do, Dire," the voice said. "We have all our other troops defendin' the Greater Tower. u will need to secure the...
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posted by 1999jacko
Rick stood awkwardly outside the co-op bruises causing him to lean meer on his left leg than his right and making him old one arm in his pocket to stop it from getting very painful. As Alli came round the corner he out down the phone he was holding between each arm trying to text someone. Alli shouted out to Rick," hallo I'm here, so what did u call me over here for." Rick looked up and Alli saw his completely bruised face as he started to speak she cried out in sympathy for him," I called u here to call a stand still in this, war u could say, fight so I can rcover from my," he choked up...
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posted by alicia386
August 31

Chloe Sanders was in a wheel chair being wheeled door a handsome stranger. She was really confused about everything and couldn't remember much about why she was in the hospital. She couldn't remember much. She knew that her name was Chloe and from what the handsome stranger has told her over the days is that she had a very traumatic accident. He zei the doctors would be letting her out today. She was enjoying the time she had with the stranger. She wish she knew his name. She knows she saw him before but she just couldn't remember.
"Okay Chloe," zei the stranger as he wheeled her...
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posted by Dhampires
Life. . .it's painful, sick, twisted, cruel, anxious and exciting.

You never know what's waiting for u two dag from now nor two hours, u can predict but will it be correct? Maybe it will and maybe it wil not.

Life is like game bt one that's backwards and has no rules. Even though u play your cards right your outcome could be still be terrible. For example u bought a brand new Charger fresh off the lot, one you've been saving up for for years, yet when your down the straat your pulled over. And the cops say that the vehicle your driving is stolen and your the one who stal it so u go...
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posted by Problematic129
It's meer smaller than the other ones, because I'm in a rush, but don't worry meer to come. I'm also working on my other projects and will post soon. This Inspired today is a special edition because I'm going to give u some of the pictures that I technically made and the others are not mine, I don't own the others, the ones that are kind of mine I made from microsoft word and what-not, and I made up some of these fabolouso quotes. So I kind of own some of this pics, of maybe not, who cares? And the others are obviosuly not mine, duh, you'll tell the difference. So I don't own most things...
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*Inspired from the awesome book door Jessica Warman, Between, u should totally check it out

Popularity, I was so known
Money, I was very spoiled
Boyfriend, how I loved him so much
Betrayer, how they betrayed my trust
Beauty, why the girls had loathed me
Parents, I don't think they ever did see
Friends, how I kept so much inside
Death, which is why I had died

Popularity, how could u poison me?
Money, was that really all I'd ever seen?
Boyfriend, did u really love me at all?
Betrayer, why didn't u save me from that fall?
Beauty, why'd u make me so cold and mean?
Parents, did u try to save me?
Friends,...
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posted by alicia386
August 31

Chloe Sanders was in a wheel chair being wheeled door a handsome stranger. She was really confused about everything and couldn't remember much about why she was in the hospital. She couldn't remember much. She knew that her name was Chloe and from what the handsome stranger has told her over the days is that she had a very traumatic accident. He zei the doctors would be letting her out today. She was enjoying the time she had with the stranger. She wish she knew his name. She knows she saw him before but she just couldn't remember.
"Okay Chloe," zei the stranger as he wheeled her...
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