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posted by alicia386
Chapter 2 – Southern Belle Rule #14: Never Drink Alcohol
Jazmyn Langston stood in front of her mirror feeling defeated. Her auburn hair was braided to the side, but there were still loose strands. She wore ripped, faded skinny jeans and a tight fitting Paramore t-shirt that barely fit over her belly button with black combat boots. Nothing in her closet made her look as if she belonged. The afbeeldingen of the beautiful girl across the straat made her grit her teeth and change her outfit for the third time.
The girl across the straat wasn’t the only reason why she thought she didn’t belong in Brantley County. Everyone in the town dressed as if they were from a magazine. All the girls had perfect hair that wasn’t close to the frizzy disaster Jazmyn has to deal with every day. Their clothes were always neat and elegant. No one wore ragged skinny jeans and oversized graphic tees. When she walks down the street, she could feel scrutinizing eyes on her, judging her unkempt hair and sloppy outfits. It was awful being the odd ball from New York City.
Throwing her hands up in defeat, she settled for shorts and a low cut hemdje, hemd with a brown jas that tickled to her knees when she walked. Her hair stayed in the braid because it would be too much work to redo it.
From the kitchen, she could her sister, Macy, humming while making breakfast. She smelled her sister’s signature bosbes, blueberry muffins from her room. Her stomach growled in impatience. Hurrying down the hallway, she saw her beautiful sister with the phone in between her shoulder and her ear while eating a muffin. Her reddish brown hair was pulled into a tight bun and she wore minimal amount of makeup. Jazmyn never bothered with makeup. It seemed like a hassle. She had chaotic mornings from simply brushing her hair. There was no reason to add meer trouble to her mornings.
“No, I thought the money from the house was going to us. u didn’t say anything about relatives, Martin.” Macy was livid at the person on the other side of the phone. “Well, I don’t care what Uncle Tony says. He was never there for mom. Yeah, whatever. Goodbye.” Macy slapped her phone down on the table.
“Whoa, calm down before u break the screen,” zei Jazmyn. She sat on the counter volgende to the fridge.
Macy rolled her eyes. “As if I care,” she said. “Do u know what they want to do with mom and dad’s house? They want to give it to Uncle Tony. u know the guy from Missouri who we never met until mom and dad’s funeral.”
Jazmyn nodded her head. “Mom did leave most of her money to our uncle. She cared about him so I guess it isn’t too much of a surprise that she wanted Uncle Tony to have the profit from the house.”
It had been a couple of months since their parents died in a fire. Macy and Jazmyn were at a party and were spared from the flames. Their parents, however, were killed from the smoke in the air before the brand burnt their bodies to ash. They couldn’t tell if it was their parents. The firefighters found their parent’s goud wedding rings underneath all of their ash. Macy had cried for weeks while Jazmyn appeared unaffected. It disturbed Macy that her younger sister hadn’t shed a single tear when they heard the news. Jazmyn had wondered the same thing.
“Whatever, that scumbag isn’t getting a dime if I have anything to do with it.” Macy began dialing on her phone fiercely. She exited the room leaving Jazmyn alone with a plate full of muffins.

Hunter Henderson stood inside the principal’s office. The klok, bell for first period had run a couple of minuten before. He could see students scurrying to get to class before the final klok, bell rung. He remembered why he hated high school. Everyone was so desperate to fit in and to get good grades. No one cared for real issues. The things a person in Brantley County care about most is what everyone thinks of them. People here care about their image meer than anything else.
He shook his head as Principal Stewart shoveled in his office. He was a round, tall man that loved donuts and kept a stash hidden away in his desk. He had a baldhead that was covered up with a Lincoln-like top, boven hat. His wife, Justine Stewart, was a part of Women of the South committee, the ones that organize the debutante ball every year.
“I don’t want any trouble out of you, young man,” the principal zei as he handed Hunter his schedule. “You can’t act anyway u want in my school. Do one thing and I’ll kick your butt out of this school faster than a eekhoorn hopped up on caffeine.”
“Yessir,” Hunter zei mockingly. He snatched the paper out of his hand and swung the door open to the main office.
The door hit something solid and he heard a low moan when he stepped out. A redhead was lying on the ground with her hand on her head. He bent down to help her up and felt bad when he saw her eyes shut in pain.
“Are u okay?” he asked.
“No, u just rammed the door in to my head like a maniac,” she said. As he steadied her on her feet, he got a good look at her. She had a white overhemd, shirt that was low cut and shorts that reached above her mid-thigh. She had painfully bright red hair that was not dyed like most women in the south. “Do u always do this to innocent door standers?”
A smile tugged at his lips when he realized that she was not from here. Any southern women would have brushed it off and smiled, as if everything was fine. Some were brave enough to flirt with him despite the head injury. “Sorry, I didn’t see u there.
“Ha, you’re telling me.” She gathered up her bag that she slung across her shoulder. Her raggedy old bag had buttons of various band names. “Next time, watch where you’re going.” She slipped door him and out the main office to the halls.
He stood their stunned for a moment, stunned that he met a person like that. He gathered his stuff and rushed out into the halls after her. “Hey,” he greeted when he caught up to her, “I didn’t catch your name.”
“I know, that’s because I didn’t give it to you,” she said.
“I’m Hunter, if u were wondering.”
“I wasn’t,” she zei adjusting the strap on her bag. He held back a laugh as they continued walking. “I’m sorry,” she zei after a couple of minuten of silence. “I’m just having a crappy day. My name is Jazmyn.”
“Crappy day, huh? kom bij the club. Every dag in Brantley County is a crappy day,” he said.
She peered to the side to face him. He could see a smile form on her porselein pale face. “And here I was thinking Brantley was a cool place.”
“Sure, if u like royal bitches and fried everything,” he zei with a smirk.
She stopped in front of him. Her hair was unloosing from the braid she had plaited. “I have to go.” She pointed with her thumb at a door labeled Physics. “See ya around.”
“Bye,” he whispered as she closed the door behind her. For a brief moment, he could hear students growing silent as she entered.

Cara tilted her head to right as she surveyed the cheerleading tryout posters hanging in the gym. “Darling, they’re crooked,” she barked as a petite girl with limp brown hair scurried volgende to Cara. Cara pointed to the poster in front of her. The girl rushed over to adjust the problem. “Better. Go see if Izzy needs any help.”
Cara smiled happily. She loved bossing the rising freshman cheerleaders. Since she was head cheerleader, they listened to every word she said. It didn’t hurt the fact that her family is known for building Brantley to the booming town it is today. She was grateful for not being a freshman. Everyone considers freshman of being the lowest in the high school social ladder. Even though she spent most of her first jaar hanging out with the senior guys and making out with the handsome Biology teacher, it was still a miserable first year.
She flipped her brown curls behind her shoulder while walking towards Izzy. She held back an eye roll as she saw her best friend. It was obvious that Izzy was gaining weight. Her once thin hips were now about to burst from the ill-fitting skinny jeans she wore. She refrained from mentioning it. Cara knew how much Izzy hated the fact she was getting heavier. Like the good friend she was, she bit her tongue and smiled warmly as Izzy turned around holding a stapler and glue gun.
“Have u seen the new girl?” Izzy asked.
“More importantly, have u seen her hair, Izzy?” Cara giggled as she pictured Yankee wearing her messy hair in a braid with shorts the length of panties. It had taken all of her will power not to laugh in Yankee’s face. “Ugh, can u believe she is my neighbor now?”
Izzy smiled, “Your life must be so hard.”
Realizing Isabelle was being sarcastic, Cara gave her an amused eye roll. “Ha ha very--”
Isabelle tugged at her Cara’s arm harshly, wildly pointing at the gym entrance. “Look who it is,” Isabelle half-shrieked, half-whispered in Cara’s ear. A tall, slender boy with brown hair flopping around on his head entered the gym followed door five other boys in varsity jackets.
“Ugh, u still have that crush on Tanner Hughes?”
Tanner Hughes was a senior playing varsity football. He was every college’s dream student and every girl’s dream boyfriend. Isabelle has had a crush on him since freshman year. All the freshman girls had gushed over Tanner when the school jaar began. He had pearly blue eyes and a dimpled smile. The freshman girls melted at the sight of him and some even lost their virginity. Cara didn’t want Isabelle to end up like the ones losing their virginity. Tanner Hughes was not worth a girl’s first time.
“It is meer than just a crush. I might be in love,” Isabelle zei dreamily.
“Spare me the love story, sugar,” spat Cara. “You need to get over this guy.”
“How? It isn’t as if I have offers banging at my door.” Isabelle fiddled with the bottom of her blue tank.
“You just let me handle that,” zei Cara with as much sincerity as she could muster. “Besides, guys should be breaking u house down trying to get to.” A loud klok, bell exploded in the gym. Sighs of relief rippled through the cheerleaders as they abandoned their jobs heading for the exit. “Time for lunch, Izzy.”
“You know what, u are so right about the guys,” zei Izzy as they exited the gym with Cara’s arm resting on Isabelle’s shoulder, the perks of being tall. “If Tanner Hughes can’t realize how perfect I am for him, then he doesn’t deserve me.”
Cara nodded along. “Who cares about Tanner? He is just another douchie guy sugar.”
“You’re right,” Isabelle agreed, swallowing hard. “Expect he has the most amazing smile u have ever seen.”
“Izzy,” warned Cara once they entered the cafeteria. Students moved everywhere like ants. They were bumping into others, laughing with friends, and chattering without a care in the world. “I thought we agreed there would be no meer talk of u and Tanner together.”
They walked over to a booth against the wall. It was their usual tafel, tabel since in the beginning of high school when the other tables were filled. Cara and Isabelle didn’t bother with school lunch. Cara was able to convince one of the cafeteria ladies to bring food to their table. The woman would always cook a gourmet meal for them, which was a thousand times better than the dump they served.
Isabelle began chatting about her plans to travel once she turned 18. Cara was only half listening. Her attention was focused on Hunter Henderson who was strolling in with Yankee volgende to him. Hunter was the one reason she had wanted to become vrienden with his little sister, Savannah. Hunter had intrigued her since middle school when she saw him sketching in the back of the school volgende to the flowers. He was so peacefully and reclusive in his corner. She watched him sketch, unaware of anything around him. He interested her meer than she was willing to admit.
She whispered an excuse before walking over to Hunter’s table. He had sat at a round tafel, tabel with Yankee. She was laughing at something he said. It disgusted Cara to witness Yankee’s lame attempts at flirting. Putting on a beaming smile, she pushed the annoyance down and sat with them.
Yankee took one look at her and recognized her. She smiled, “Hey, Cara, I didn’t think I would see u here.”
“Hello, Yankee,” Cara said, ignoring her anger. Yankee stared at her confused for a moment. Cara had already adverted her attention to Hunter. “I need to talk to you.”
Hunter held back a sigh. “Go ahead.”
Cara motioned with her eyes that she couldn’t say anything with Yankee there. He got the hint and told Yankee he would be right back. They walked in silence out the cafeteria and into the halls. Cara stood across from him with her arm folded. Hunter was leaning on a locker.
“So what do u want, Cara?”
She could feel her hart-, hart quicken. For a confidence boost, she flipped her curls back. “Where is Savannah?”
“My sister,” he asked confused.
“Yeah, who else could I be talking about?”
“Sorry, I just didn’t know u knew my sister.”
“Oh, she didn’t tell you?”
“No.”
Cara didn’t realize that she was pinned against a locker and Hunter centimeters away from her face. She could smell is usual appel, apple scent and deodorant that covered the aviator’s jas he often wore. Her hart-, hart sped up quickly as he leaned in closer and closer. She could feel her head leaning up towards him. Hunter had placed one hand on her hip and the other gently on her shoulder. She had her hands around his neck. It was funny how fast they had gotten into that position.
In seconds, their lips were smashed against each other, fighting for control. That is how it was with Hunter, Cara thought. He’s constantly fighting for something of someone. She pushed those thoughts aside as he melted in the warmness of his lips. She tried pulling him closer door grabbing at his shirt. He held her head.
The kiss ended as fast as it happened. He had pulled away. His pale blue eyes were wide and shining. He had light skin. The kind u get when u mama was white and u daddy was black. She had never seen blue eyes on someone with light brown skin. On him, it looked hot. Tendrils of dark brown hair bounced in his eyes. She carefully brushed it away.
“We can’t repeat last summer,” he whispered. He started to back away. “I am not letting u suck me in, again.”
“No,” Cara began. He was nearing the entrance of the cafeteria, “it won’t be like last summer, I swear.”
He shook his head as if he didn’t believe her entered the cafeteria letting the swinging doors schommel, swing wildly behind him. Cara stood their paralyzed in spot. She didn’t know what to think. She didn’t know to do. Not liking the feeling of cluelessness, she shook herself until the image of them subsided, but it never truly went away.

When the klok, bell signaling the end of the school dag rung, Hunter climbed into his car and sat there. He ran his fingers through his brown curls and tried to focus. Going home pagina was out of the question. He had accidently gotten Savannah drunk last night at the party. His parents were pissed beyond comprehension. It wasn’t his fault that he had lost track of her. He had apologized a thousand times as he held Savannah’s hair while he threw up in the toilet. She had forgiven him and reassured him that it wasn’t his fault. He still felt bad.
He decided to drive around Brantley. Brantley didn’t offer much, which was good since he wanted to focus on his thoughts. The first week he got back, he had already gotten his little sister drunk and kissed Cara VanDere. He groaned at the thought of Cara. He remembered everything about her and that small week they had before he left. It was the most chaotic week of his life. During that first week of summer, he had loved Cara just as much as he had hated her. He most definitely did not want a repeat.
This was why he had wanted to stay away from Cara. She was a mess, but a beautiful mess that intoxicated him. If he was being honest with himself, he was a mess, too. That was why they had worked. They were both messes that were looking for a clutch. It had worked for a while before things turned ugly.
He shook his head. He didn’t want to think about Cara and him. He just wanted to drive away and leave his worries dangling on a cliff.
posted by AlOoOosh
I am that one who sleeps away
I am the one who spends the night …
reaching his dreams door counting the stars…
I am that one who carries his sadness on his back

I’m not sad…
but inside of me there’s a country crying
There’s a thirsty land
And there’s a fear of losing what I’ve never had…

Every night I talk to the sky …
hope I find u up there someday…

call my name once
and see what will I do

I am here in the mess alone
Trying to find the pieces of my mind
I’ve lost everything
And now I am losing myself

I want u to come and protect me from that loss
You are the one who can find me…...
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I held my breath. I adjusted my goggles. I tightened my black swim cap. I got onto the diving board, slowly and cautiously. I loosened my body before my big dive.
The timers got their stopwatches. A voice came over the speakers.
"Swimmers, get ready," I shook my body. "Set," I relaxed and thought of the pure heaven as I would dive, and break the surface. The moment I was waiting for would soon come. And...it did. "GO!!!"
The crowd roared. We were off to a quick start, I supposed. I thought of nothing but fire, fire, and only fire. I moved my arms in blind fury. I kicked my feet like I was...
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posted by para-scence
If someone wouldn't mind reading and commenting, I'm kind of in need of feedback. Thanks in advance.

"Evangeline! It's time to get up!" Mom called from the hallway. I grumbled and pulled the blanket over my head. Just five meer minutes... five meer hours would be nice...

"Evan," my older brother Joshua poked his head into my room. "Didn't u hear Mom? u need to get up." I growled at him.

"Get out," I squeezed my eyes shut tighter.

"Why don't u try and make me?" he taunted. I grabbed my hoofdkussen, kussen and flung it across the room at him. He laughed and ran out of the room. Not having anything to...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the commentaren and fans :) Probably tomorrow I'll post the stories later than usual, so your forewarned. Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 18
    A sleepless night
    I spent the rest of the vision following Dorothy and I, smiling at the good ole times. door the time the vision was done it was dark outside and I was exhausted. I called the doctor to notify him that I was okay, and after a few minuten I had hung up, finished showering, and was ready for bed.
    But I couldn’t sleep, I kept thinking back to those...
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posted by alicia386
Dear Sam,
I've been see my therapist - never thought I would be saying those words - for a while now. She zei that I was making a major break through. I do not know why she believes that since u barely say a word during the sessions, I barely do anything during the sessions.

I had to miss a few days from work so right how my boss is on the verge of killing me. His birthday is coming yo so I will try to throw him a surprise party. Ha, can u imagine my boss at a party?!

My boss is about as all as a 13 jaar old . He has a tangled beard and beady green eyes, he use to have a full head of brown...
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Source: Google
I was trying to reach the sky
I was trying to fly
That was my dream
And u made it my fault

It has taken all my life…
Staying away from you…
Thought I then can survive without you
Nothing has helped me to forget
Everything I love reminds me in you
And to act like I’ve never known you…
There’s no way
………………………

How would I ignore your smile?!
How can I forget who has created me?!
The one who has changed my life
The one who has been always beside me…

Don’t ask me to verplaats on
Because you’ve never taught me how to do that
………………………

Nothing I need when you’re beside...
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posted by Problematic129
Part 8! I don't own any of these pictures! Most come from Alegrias.me Hope u feel inspired! Down here is a song I wrote called Breathe, hope u enjoy it.

Breathe
    Verse 1:
    I wake up today with a smile on my face, and I return back disappointments are made. Where did I go wrong? Did I even try? This world is gonna bring me down, bring tears to my eyes.
    What’s this weird feeling? I want it to go. I can’t believe that life can a cruel black hole. Time just seems to fade away, days become weeks, and I’m still, yes I’m...
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*Thanks for all the commentaren and fans :) Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 17
    Happy times
    “How can u not be happy, this is our first sister-sister tradition in like…ever?” My eleven jaar old self asked my sister, giving her a look like I thought she was mental.
    Dorothy laughed, a huge smile on her face. “Your such a loser Des, we hang out all the time.”
    “Not all the time,” I insisted. “And this is the first time we planned this to do and do again every year.”
    Dorothy...
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posted by rory2011
so I see u guys writing alot of wonderful poems
so I just want to share this with u
I saw alot of u writing in the new poetry style and no one have ever wrote in the old style ,maybe cause it's only populair in where I live ,but here's a part of my fav poem ,it won't be easy to read it for the first time ,I hope I can translate it right ,it called "be panacea " :

1-weak your feeling of love when it fall in sleep without people senses they would be like dolls

2-love ,the hut became a bright kasteel hate,the world became a dark prison

3- the life gave u all her treasures don't hold it back...
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posted by alicia386
September 1

Blair was almost out the door of her grandma's apartment. She was dressed and all set for today's activities. As soon as she opened the door her dad was sitting in his car. He was debating whether of not to go in. He had unfortunately heard the door click open and was out his car in a second. Blair had no choice but to continue walking to her car.
"Blair," called her dad. "Just listen to me. I can explain."
Anger filled her. "Explain what? That u cheated on my mom with her sister? What could u possibly say that could change everything? I bet the volgende words that will come out...
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posted by rory2011
I was in my house waiting my father and my brother
I heard something ,it's calling me since I was a kid ,and it always say "weak up" even If I'm not sleeping
I want to leave my house ,I opened the door and felt the air touching my hair ,the sun was cold in my cheeks ,it was summer ,and I feel the cold winter coming and escaping autumn
I walked away from my house , this is the first time I feel my house is very hunting that way ,while I was walking there ,I realized one thing and it was the most important thing I should realized in my dark life
I'm now a real human ,I were always close to live...
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