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New Moon came out the 20th. Since then, I've seen it 5 times. Each time, I noticed a few things I didn't catch the first time.

I'll start off with the things that were the same everytime I watched it.

-Taylor's Acting: I tried to give him the benefit of the doubt, but he did a terrible job. Not necessarily as Jacob, but as an actor. I may sound harsh, but he went over the top, boven in many scenes. I'm not saying Kristen of Rob's acting was extraordinary, but Taylor's was extremely blatant and noticeable. Scene in particular:
- the movie theatre scene: "Do u want me to put u in the hospital?!" I understand Jacob's character has dramatic changes, and he feels out of control all the time, spontaneous mood swings, but this was over the top.
- but what I did like: when Jacob went to Bella's room. Taylor's acting was still terrible. But his facial expression when he looked at the dream catcher on her headboard, it translated as sadness. I could feel his sadness that it wasn't the same as before. I thought he translated that well in that one look.

- Victoria. I felt Victoria's storyline wasn't closed in New Moon. In Twilight, at the end of the movie, we see her leaving their prom, with a rageful, plotting look. In New Moon, the last glimpse we see of Victoria is in the water. This ties in with the cliff hanger. I didn't have a problem with it, but I thought they could have done it differently. They could have stayed closer to the book. In the book, the proposal, Bella actually answered yes. In the movie, when it cuts off to before she answered, it can be interpretted as doubt and reluctance. That's not at all how it was in the book. She is shocked that he would ask that of her. She doesn't know if he's serious. I know the idea of a cliff hanger is to keep the audience guessing, but that particular cliff hanger strayed from the book. A different way to end it could have been Bella saying yes. Then the cliff hanger would be with Victoria. In the script draft, they had Victoria driving to Seattle in a taxi. There was a New Moon still with Rachelle as Victoria in a taxi driving. That means, they did shoot that scene. Chris Weitz, in a recent interview, zei it would be on the dvd. Why not have it in the movie? it would have nicely tied up Victoria's whereabouts.

If Summit wouldn't allow that to be in the movie because of Rachelle not being in Eclipse, therefore refusing to have Rachelle have meer screentime, then they need to suck it up. The fans all hate their douchebagish decision, but not doing the movie right because they don't want the fans to be too attatched to Rachelle as Victoria is wrong. I'm impartial to the ending, but I would have ended it with Victoria going to Seattle, just like they had it in the script. Leaving the cliffhanger to Bella and Edward's engagement, Eclipse should have romance. But, with the recent news about Eclipse, it doesn't sound that way, and now, I am very nervous for the third installment.

Little things I noticed that had an big impact:

- during Bella's depression, the 4 maand spin around of her in the chair, if u notice her room, with each passing month, her room becomes meer empty. The pictures on the uithangbord vanish.
- when Bella sets out to find their meadow, when she arrives, she falls on her knees. Like in the book, she clutches herself, trying to keep her insides from falling out.

As for the rest of the movie: I thought they stuck very close to the book. I particularly liked how they incorporated Bella's quotes from the book in emails [to Alice]. Even though that [the emails] didn't happen in the book, I thought it showed how much she missed the Cullens.

The Italy scene, even though I wished it were longer, particularly Edward and Bella's reunion kiss, it was still good. I liked how they had some of the quotes from Chapter 24: Truth in there.

Their post Italy talk was a little disappointing. I wished it were longer as well. Even though there were some great quotes in there such as "He won't forgive me so easily. Can you? Because honestly, I don't know how to live without you." I wish the famous "Before u Bella, my life was like a moonless night..." quote was in there.

But, I was very pleased with this movie. The always shirtless wolfpack was unnecessary though. My friend asked me why they were always shirtless and she thought it was unnecessary as well. Did I like it better than Twilight? I think so. It follows closely with the book, and the look and the feel of the movie is meer cinematical and professional. The middle of the movie without Edward was slow moving to me. But, maybe that's how it's supposed to be.

Hope u liked this review. It's not as complex as I thought it would be and it didn't go into very much detail. But please commentaar if you'd like :)
Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Seven
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    Later that day, I went down to the secret basement with Tabra and the others to train. Jerek went down to sit with Verona, and with Shropee went down to do her medicle stuff on Verona.
    "Alright, listen up." Shropee said, clapping her hands three times, drawing their attention. "Cyd and Tabra are in charge here. If u don't follow, well...let's just say your punishment is harsh."
    She smiled, and walked into Verona's room with Jerek tailing...
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    "I don't know." Tabra zei after five minuten of silence.
    "Did I poke a nerve I shouldn't have?" I asked him.
    "No. I just haven't thought of her lately, and when u zei Olivia as if u knew her, it...it just made me think of something."
    "Can I ask what that something is?"
    "Unless u can carry the burden of a long story before someone interrupts, then yes. But, I need to douche so...I'll see ya'."...
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posted by uniquezandy
Edwards POV

As weeks drawn on, we got started rehersing. All my loyal brothers and sisters were there to support me (eventhough they were going to burst out laughing!) But I couldn't take my eyes off Bella, she was wearing a beautiful costume that made me stop and smile. She gave me a weak smile and a quick kiss and whispered "I can do this. Please help me." I replied in a whisper; " will do my love." That made her giggle, if she was happy, I was happy. So we started rehersing the lines "but soft through light, yonder window breaks, it is the east and Juilet is the sun." That made her have a...
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posted by karpach_13
 nessie's outfit for meeting Ivan's parents
nessie's outfit for meeting Ivan's parents
Chapter 21
“who invited him?” I asked in a rude voice.
“Carlisle incsited the whole family came over” Emmett told me and I rolled my eyes. I got out of the car and wondered what was waiting on me.
“lets get Ivan out and in the house” I told uncle Emmett. He nodded. Uncle Emmett took Ivan and dragged him to my room. I was still in the car and was getting my stuff. I locked the car and put the keys in my portemonnee and hrld my left hand close so it wont verplaats an inch. I was walcking towards the house hiding my left arm so my father wouldn’t see it. But it was impossible. I walked to the...
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posted by NeeNee14
When we got off the plane in Seattle Sue was there to pick us up. I was still holding Tala, who was asleep in my arms. Seth looked at me.
"Do u want me to take her?" He asked. I shook my head no. I haven't talked the whole way becaus I knew if I opened my mouth the cries would come out. Seth took her out my arms anyway and I hugged my self. I sat in the front, Sue was going to take Tala and Seth home pagina and Seth would come back to pick me up.
I ran into the hospital to the nurses station. A young woman looked at me and smiled.
"Hi, I'm here to see Johnathan Johnson." I told the nurse.
"I'm sorry...
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"Ughhh. Damn it!" I yelled and threw the phone against the wall. Why would everything go wrong when things were going right. I heard my dad enter, and foot steps into the kitchen. I looked at him and he saw my face. He rushed to my side.
"Bells,What's wrong??"My dad said."Did he do this to you?" He asked. Charlie hasn't been able to refer to Edward as his name since he left,but I always knew who he was talking about. I shook my head no.
"Dad, u remember that job I was telling u about in New York?" I asked him. He shook his head, so he knew what I was talking about."Well they called and Offered...
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posted by groovychicklisa
When I got home, Charlie, Renée and Phil were just sitting down to have dinner, and I joined them.

"Hey dad, I wanted to talk to u about something." I zei as I put some salade on my plate. Charlie insisted that I have vegetables with every meal. He was the one who told me what I could and couldn't eat, and also made sure I followed the "rules". Which was why I always went to Angela's for ice cream. Nowhere had I found anything to indicate that I shouldn't eat ice cream – I'd even asked Doctor Jamieson, who had zei that it was fine – but Charlie insisted that too much sugar wasn't good....
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posted by LexisFaith
In case u didn't notice, these two are the first artikel in Edward's pov insted of Bella's. Sorry, I forgot to mention that.
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"I found her." I smiled back.
"I know." Alice, bounced on her toes.
"Wait, u knew she was here?"
"Yes." She admitted. "I wanted it to be a surprise. Why do u think I was able to talk everyone into moving down here?" She giggled and I looked up to Jasper.
"You knew too?" I asked him.
"She told us not to think about it around you. Sorry." He half smiled.
I shook my head. "I don't have words to think u right now." I told...
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posted by groovychicklisa
Chapter 10
B|POV

There he was standing there the burning man quickly consuming him. I walked over and grabbed a bottle of beer, I would be needing something to get through this night! As I took a swig someone grabbed my arm from behind me I was spun round. There he was he looked like he was in physical torment. (B)Can I help you? (B) I grunted. He was looking through me, not at me and I didn’t know why. (E) What are u doing back? (E) he asked evidently in pain. (B) That’s none of your business! (B) I very nearly screamed at him. Now he looked pissed. Before he could say anything I had...
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    Hi, my name is Cyd, short for Cydnee, and one dag while I was grocery shopping, a former member of the Death Clan of the Fallen threw a mes at my head. I ducked behind my cart, and ran out of the store once I saw the mes fly into a bunch of egg cartons. I went home, told my friend Tabra about it, and he came rushing over. He helped me get out of the aftershock feeling, and when we were eating chicken sandwhiches, mine was coated in poison. We then went to his apartment, knowing...
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Chapter 6.

Ok I just wanted to say that since its a teef to highlight the colors and that on this computer (my) Everything is just going to be black from now on. Back to the story.

Emmett grabbed your hand a waked u inside, luckily Esme and Carlise where sitting back on the couch. Esme turned around because she heard u crying. "___, is everything ok?" u just started crying even harder. "umm, Carlisle, Esme, can I talk to u in the keuken-, keuken for a minute." "Absolutely Emmett." Carlisle says while him and Esme rush to the kitchen. Emmett follows behind. u just sit down on the divan, bank with...
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[FOUR]
    "Let's see who we lost." I said, and we went over to the battle's remnants.
    "We won!" Shropee said, and I was happy to see her.
    "Yay! Haus is dead!" I zei and everyone cheered. "Where's Tabra?"
    "He's over there." Pattsy zei as she passed me to talk to Jerek.
    I walked over to Tabra as he pulled an arrow out of his leg. Ew. Ow. He saw me and we hugged. "Nice fighting." I zei and he smiled.
    "Thanks,...
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"now i know" he mutted
"know what" i was curious.
"where u got u looks from" i smiled while he blushed.

we arived at the house it was a pretty house not something i was use too as it was a little small.
"what?" i hadnt realised that he was looking at me ontil he had spoken.
"you house. its its beautiful isnt it?"i didnt realise ontil i zei it that this was true his house was beautiful. i could see my self living in it.
"its allright nothing compared to your though" he smiled but i could see he felt emivious.
i didnt like the hurt in his eyes it somehow caused me pain.
"so are we just going...
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posted by Tatti
So I've decided to continue, hope you'll like it. Please leave a commentaar and thanks for reading.

After 5 months

New York

I was exhausted. And I looked terrible. Of course I have many reasons to be happy : first, I've just arrested one of the biggest dealers in the state, second, I am alive and not even injured after that. I shouldn't worry about my appearance right now - I was working undercover. But few guys on the other side of the road whistled and I felt bad again. I wasn't used to walking on straat dressed like girl who probably sleeps at night clubs. I stopped to look at my reflection in...
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posted by Tatti
Esme made me avondmaal and since Jake has already gone I was eating alone. It was good that no one bothered me - I had too many thoughts. Bella's vraag pulled out some dark memories I was struggling to forget. It was a bit like Nessie's touch, I could feel something pulsing in my head. Maybe they were right about the shield? of it was just another headache?
When I finnished I asked Esme if I can go sleep and she lead to the same bedroom. I lied on bed for a long uur trying to fall asleep but nothing. I sighed angrily and changed my position. I hated doing nothing. And then someone knocked on...
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posted by CarlislesLover
Sorry for the delay.
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I woke up on the plane with Jacob sat volgende to me. “Where are we going Jake?”

“Dubai”

“Wow. That must have been really expensive”

“I stal Carlisle’s wallet and somehow figured out his pin number”

“Is Carlisle the doctor?”

“Yes”

“I guess he has loads of money then”

“He defiantly does”

“What if the credit card gets tracked down?”

“Oh don’t worry we’re going to put the money on to a different credit card and then burn this one”

“Ok”

2 Years later


I’m twenty now and Jacob was eighteen. I’m married to him and we live in Dubai together,...
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posted by CarlislesLover
I'm sorry u had to wai a while for this one.
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I stepped through looking around, it was pitch black and I couldn’t see anything. Then the door slammed behind me. I ran at it pulling the handle down but it wouldn’t open. I heard laughter echoing in the room of whatever it was I was in. I walked vooruit, voorwaarts putting my hands in front of me feeling around to see if anything was here. I found another door which I opened. It lead me into another pitch black room. I ran my hands up the walls searching for lights but I didn’t find anything. I found yet again a door which opened. Every door I opened...
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posted by CarlislesLover
I'm sorry u had to wait long for this
Hope u like it
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I didn’t know what to do. I loved her so much I couldn’t lose her. I went up to my bedroom thinking of ways to get around this. How do make her remember me. I just wanted to have her in my arms one last time knowing who I am. Surely Carlisle could give her an operation of something. What was the last thing she remembered? Would she be staying in forks? I went downstairs. Everyone was still sat where they were sat when I left. “Carlisle what was the last thing Bella remembered?”

“She remembered being with her mum”

“Does...
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It was after I heard her scream that I started running. There wasn't a part of my body that didn't sting and burn. I saw her laying on the ground, Seth kneeling over her.
"What happened?!" I yelled. I scooped her up in my arms as she screamed in pain. The blood was dripping off her heel and onto my shoe.
"Paul got mad, really mad. We told her to back away but he phased sooner than we thought he would. He caught her leg." Seth took off his overhemd, shirt and started to dab at her wounds.
"I got to get her to the Cullen's." I told him.
"Let me have her untill u phase." He reached out her arms where...
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posted by kiwi12
part 13

I made it to LA eventually. My cash supply was severely reduced due to transportation so I had to do a lot of odd jobs. In a few years I would have to either win the lottery, find a buried treasure of verplaats somewhere other than America where a "fourteen jaar old" could get a full time job. I loved LA. I missed vrienden from years geleden though. I wouldn't be able to handle LA for four of five years. It was better in small doses. I felt emptier than I had in a long time.

The emails had slowed but not ceased. I usually took several days to respond but I checked almost every day. Two months...
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