First off, I, of course do not own any rights to any of the characters in this FanFic, it's merely a 'What if?' senario.
The Story: It's basicly Twilight and New Moon, up until chapter ten, The Meadow, where the 'What if?' comes in. I'm going to write a page of so from the actual chapter aswell. Try not to be harsh, I'm just bored. XP
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"Me?" I squeaked.
He shook his head and chuckled. "I know, it seems a little backward to me, too. But James was her mate, and your Edward killed him."
Even here, on the point of death, his name tore against my unhealed wounds like a serrated edge.
Laurant was oblivious to my reaction. "She thought it meer appropriate to kill u than Edward-fair turn about, mate for mate. She asked me to get the lay of the land for her, so to speak. I didn't imagine u would be so easy to get to. So maybe her plan was flawed-apparently it wouldn't be the revenge she imagined, since u must not mean very much to him if he left u here unprotected."
Another blow, another tear through my chest.
Laurant's weight shifted slightly, and I stumbled another step back.
He frowned. "I suppose she'll be angry, all the same."
"Then why not wait for her?" I choked out.
A mischievous grin rearanged his features. "Well, you've caught me at a bad time, Bella. I didn't come to this place on Victoria's mission-I was hunting. I'm quite thirsty, and u do smell...simply mouthwatering."
Laurant looked at me with approval, as if he meant it as a compliment.
"Threaten him," the beautiful delusion ordered, his voice distorted with dread.
"He'll know it was you," I whispered obediently. "You won't get away with this."
"And why not?" Laurant's smile widened. He gazed around the small opening in the trees. "The scent will wash away with the volgende rain. No one will find your body-you'll simply go missing, like so many, many other humans. There's no reason for Edward to think of me, if he cares enough to investigate. This is nothing personal, let me assure you, Bella. Just thirst."
"Beg," my hallucination begged.
"Please," I gasped.
Laurant shook his head, his face kind. "Look at it this way, Bella. You're very lucky I was the one to find you."
"Am I?" I mouthed, faltering another step back.
Laurant followed, lithe and graceful.
Why did I always have to be the victom? Why couldn't I, just once be something feared? But the only way I could do that...
"Yes," he assured me. "I'll be very quick. u won't feel a thing, I promise. Oh, I'll lie to Victoria about that later, naturally, just to placate her. But if u knew what she had planned for you, Bella..." He shook his head with a slow movement, almost as if in discust. "I swear you'd be thanking me for this."
"Don't say it Bella!" his voice ordered me. I knew I shouldn't. It wouldn't work, but I wanted it so badly, and it would all be over soon anyway...What did I have to lose? I already knew the answer to that. Because I had already lost everything I could lose.
"W-why...do u have to...kill me?" I asked, hoping that he would pause long enough to at least reject my request before killing me.
"Bella," he seemed disapointed. "Haven't we just been over this?"
I paused. I tried desperately to get out the words that might slow him, but my lips seemed frozen with fear.
"Yes...but what I mean is...why do u have to drain all of my blood? Why couldn't u just feed...but leave me alive?"
My vraag definately caught him off-guard. Confusion replaced the malace on his face. Then his expression turned slightly sarcastic.
"What?" he asked, seeming amused.
"What I mean is...-" The voice in my head was growling and snarling furiously.
Laurant cut me off.
"You want me to turn u into a vampire?" Yes he was definately amused.
"No! Bella, run!" The voice commanded, but I didn't listen to him now.
"Y-yes." I zei in a small voice.
To Be Continued...
The Story: It's basicly Twilight and New Moon, up until chapter ten, The Meadow, where the 'What if?' comes in. I'm going to write a page of so from the actual chapter aswell. Try not to be harsh, I'm just bored. XP
Page 240
"Me?" I squeaked.
He shook his head and chuckled. "I know, it seems a little backward to me, too. But James was her mate, and your Edward killed him."
Even here, on the point of death, his name tore against my unhealed wounds like a serrated edge.
Laurant was oblivious to my reaction. "She thought it meer appropriate to kill u than Edward-fair turn about, mate for mate. She asked me to get the lay of the land for her, so to speak. I didn't imagine u would be so easy to get to. So maybe her plan was flawed-apparently it wouldn't be the revenge she imagined, since u must not mean very much to him if he left u here unprotected."
Another blow, another tear through my chest.
Laurant's weight shifted slightly, and I stumbled another step back.
He frowned. "I suppose she'll be angry, all the same."
"Then why not wait for her?" I choked out.
A mischievous grin rearanged his features. "Well, you've caught me at a bad time, Bella. I didn't come to this place on Victoria's mission-I was hunting. I'm quite thirsty, and u do smell...simply mouthwatering."
Laurant looked at me with approval, as if he meant it as a compliment.
"Threaten him," the beautiful delusion ordered, his voice distorted with dread.
"He'll know it was you," I whispered obediently. "You won't get away with this."
"And why not?" Laurant's smile widened. He gazed around the small opening in the trees. "The scent will wash away with the volgende rain. No one will find your body-you'll simply go missing, like so many, many other humans. There's no reason for Edward to think of me, if he cares enough to investigate. This is nothing personal, let me assure you, Bella. Just thirst."
"Beg," my hallucination begged.
"Please," I gasped.
Laurant shook his head, his face kind. "Look at it this way, Bella. You're very lucky I was the one to find you."
"Am I?" I mouthed, faltering another step back.
Laurant followed, lithe and graceful.
Why did I always have to be the victom? Why couldn't I, just once be something feared? But the only way I could do that...
"Yes," he assured me. "I'll be very quick. u won't feel a thing, I promise. Oh, I'll lie to Victoria about that later, naturally, just to placate her. But if u knew what she had planned for you, Bella..." He shook his head with a slow movement, almost as if in discust. "I swear you'd be thanking me for this."
"Don't say it Bella!" his voice ordered me. I knew I shouldn't. It wouldn't work, but I wanted it so badly, and it would all be over soon anyway...What did I have to lose? I already knew the answer to that. Because I had already lost everything I could lose.
"W-why...do u have to...kill me?" I asked, hoping that he would pause long enough to at least reject my request before killing me.
"Bella," he seemed disapointed. "Haven't we just been over this?"
I paused. I tried desperately to get out the words that might slow him, but my lips seemed frozen with fear.
"Yes...but what I mean is...why do u have to drain all of my blood? Why couldn't u just feed...but leave me alive?"
My vraag definately caught him off-guard. Confusion replaced the malace on his face. Then his expression turned slightly sarcastic.
"What?" he asked, seeming amused.
"What I mean is...-" The voice in my head was growling and snarling furiously.
Laurant cut me off.
"You want me to turn u into a vampire?" Yes he was definately amused.
"No! Bella, run!" The voice commanded, but I didn't listen to him now.
"Y-yes." I zei in a small voice.
To Be Continued...
10. Never use English around him – instead, bark.
9. Call him a space heater.
8. Tell him that dogs make good pets, not good partners.
7. Ask him if he has RSVPed to the wedding yet.
6. Inform him that real men sparkle.
5. Walk up to him and claim u have imprinted. Say u love him and demand his paw in marriage.
4. Tell him that even though he may run at a boiling 108.9 degrees, Bella doesn’t find him hot.
3. Inquire as to how Leah is… and if he dreams about Sam the way Leah dreams about Bella.
2. Ask him if he likes to do things… doggy style.
And the Number One way to annoy Jacob Black?
1. Make him a day-by-day flip calendar, counting down the amount of time Bella will remain human.
Source: link
9. Call him a space heater.
8. Tell him that dogs make good pets, not good partners.
7. Ask him if he has RSVPed to the wedding yet.
6. Inform him that real men sparkle.
5. Walk up to him and claim u have imprinted. Say u love him and demand his paw in marriage.
4. Tell him that even though he may run at a boiling 108.9 degrees, Bella doesn’t find him hot.
3. Inquire as to how Leah is… and if he dreams about Sam the way Leah dreams about Bella.
2. Ask him if he likes to do things… doggy style.
And the Number One way to annoy Jacob Black?
1. Make him a day-by-day flip calendar, counting down the amount of time Bella will remain human.
Source: link
10. Tell him he looks like a creepy stalker rapist.
9. Inform him, as politely as possible, that he has grizzly in his teeth.
8. Ask who wears the pants in his relationship.
7. Try to stab him through the hart-, hart with a stake.
6. Tell him brawn is out, scrawn is in.
5. Inquires as to how he feels to be the least-liked Cullen male.
4. When he is around, wonder aloud what Rosalie calls him in bed.
3. Ask if he is overcompensating for something with that Jeep.
2. Ask if he is overcompensating for something with those muscles..
And the Number One way to annoy Emmett Cullen?
1. When he denies the above two claims, respond with “That’s not what Rosalie saaaaaid!”
Source: link
9. Inform him, as politely as possible, that he has grizzly in his teeth.
8. Ask who wears the pants in his relationship.
7. Try to stab him through the hart-, hart with a stake.
6. Tell him brawn is out, scrawn is in.
5. Inquires as to how he feels to be the least-liked Cullen male.
4. When he is around, wonder aloud what Rosalie calls him in bed.
3. Ask if he is overcompensating for something with that Jeep.
2. Ask if he is overcompensating for something with those muscles..
And the Number One way to annoy Emmett Cullen?
1. When he denies the above two claims, respond with “That’s not what Rosalie saaaaaid!”
Source: link
The antwoorden Feature is meant for FACTUAL vragen only. I have seen other spots and it seems to me that the Twilight Spot is a perfect example for wrongly placed questions.
I'm just stating a concern and hope that i helped a small bit. Here is a great artikel door Cinders, from the Fanpop Etiquette spot that does a great job explaining the antwoorden Feature.
link
Thanks for listening to me rant :p
I think we love it because its romantic and we all wish we had some one like Edward Cullen to swoop over and take us away that would be great,right? Personally I like the REAL Robert Pattinson meer than the charecter and would love to meet him I mean who wouldnt but I dont know about u but I for one beleive in what most people dont beleive in, such as vampires,faries,mermaids u know stuff such as that,call me crazy but I really do even I cant explain why I love that Stephanie Meyers created this story I love this story like no other why I love it so much is a mystery to me.
Bigger than the latest Indiana Jones. Bigger than the biggest James Bond. That's how big Twilight was yesterday.
The $37 million vampire flick, expected to have a killer opening day, had a monster opening day, grossing an estimated $35 million, Exhibitor Relations reported. One-fifth of that gross, of $7 million, came from Friday midnight screenings.
The box-office tracking firm zei a $75 million Friday-Sunday gross was now a possibility. Going into Friday, $60 million was considered the movie's best-case scenario.
When the counting's done, Twilight's Friday take may rank as the 14th of 15th biggest opener of all time, having surpassed the debuts of Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull ($25 million) and Quantum of Solace ($27 million), to name two recent blockbusters.
Bolt, the animated talking-dog movie, was curbed door Twilight, grossing $7 million on Friday, Exhibitor Relations said.
I've been fanpopping since september if I am correct. At first I was a stranger to this site, and spot. But, soon enough I have grown fond u ladies here. I think it is awesome that I found girls who are exactly like me. OBESSESED with the Twilight Series! Everyone gets exciting when the thought, of mentioned anything that has to do with the series! I love it, and it makes me happy that I am not alone when it comes to being obssesd with these series of books, being I've been reading the series since 2005 it was hard to find girls like me. Everyone one of u ladies are amazing, smart, funny, and just really neat to talk about Twilight because u girls are awesome, and wouldn't trade any other fans on any other fansite for u ladies! I just love u all! you're awesome!
sometimes it can get a little cold hearted, but then again everyone is no great and nice!
u ladies are great!!!
love u all!!!
Gileygirl =D
sometimes it can get a little cold hearted, but then again everyone is no great and nice!
u ladies are great!!!
love u all!!!
Gileygirl =D