I don't know how surreal this was but I knew I was in no dream world, but it took me away from everything,everything I didn't know about myself.I knew two things.One,I was called Alice.Two,I could see the future.It had only been a dag and I was sat in an empty house when......I saw a face in my eyes. He had blonde curly-ish hair that shined almost as bright as the sun,big black sphered eyes and a pale face....like me,he was a vampire.Then there was me taking his hand. We were in an empty cafee of something like that....then it finished.I liked this vision.It made me feel warm inside even though I was ice cold.
I dashed out without thinking as I wanted to see him.I was at the small building in seconden and stopped.This was it,the empty cafee.I walked into the building, waiting for him.
After the minuten passed, the door opened,I looked round.
There stood the curly blonde haired vampire of my vision. I could take my eyes of his face, it was so beautiful.
I broke the silence. "I've been waiting for you". I zei walking up to him slowly.
"I'm sorry ma'am".He zei looking a bit confused.
"What's your name". I asked. "Jasper Whitlock ma'am". He said, still confused.
I put my hand out to him and smiled. "My name's Alice". I said.
He then smiled back at me and took my hand.We walked out of the cafee,holding hands, looking at each other.
u like that one....ok......so I might do another chapter.P.S:I got the lines and storyline for Alices story out of Eclipse when Jasper tells his story about how he became a vampire and meeting Alice in a cafee of something like that. Alices story has come mainly from the Twilight book and I got some info about them and each book off a website. Gotta write sources, u know lol.
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I dashed out without thinking as I wanted to see him.I was at the small building in seconden and stopped.This was it,the empty cafee.I walked into the building, waiting for him.
After the minuten passed, the door opened,I looked round.
There stood the curly blonde haired vampire of my vision. I could take my eyes of his face, it was so beautiful.
I broke the silence. "I've been waiting for you". I zei walking up to him slowly.
"I'm sorry ma'am".He zei looking a bit confused.
"What's your name". I asked. "Jasper Whitlock ma'am". He said, still confused.
I put my hand out to him and smiled. "My name's Alice". I said.
He then smiled back at me and took my hand.We walked out of the cafee,holding hands, looking at each other.
u like that one....ok......so I might do another chapter.P.S:I got the lines and storyline for Alices story out of Eclipse when Jasper tells his story about how he became a vampire and meeting Alice in a cafee of something like that. Alices story has come mainly from the Twilight book and I got some info about them and each book off a website. Gotta write sources, u know lol.
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Hi everyone, I'm back. I just thought I would leave a little note for everyone about my story.... so ok this wasn't my best work. though I'm glad that u read it, I gives me a feeling of appreciation thank you.
Any how as I was saying I felt that I was restricted with what would be acceptable for younger readers to read, due to the fact that there are alot of parents who wouldn't appreciate the content of the story, and the availability of it online so I had to tone it down somewhat. I do apologize to the meer mature readers but.... I have written a adult version at this site link for those who really want the juicy stuff, The titel of this story is: Breaking Dawn the Honeymoon (adult version).I'm trying to redeem myself so I hope u will enjoy it and please, please leave a comment, I would really like to hear your views. Thanks again. Hope u enjoy this,see ya.
Any how as I was saying I felt that I was restricted with what would be acceptable for younger readers to read, due to the fact that there are alot of parents who wouldn't appreciate the content of the story, and the availability of it online so I had to tone it down somewhat. I do apologize to the meer mature readers but.... I have written a adult version at this site link for those who really want the juicy stuff, The titel of this story is: Breaking Dawn the Honeymoon (adult version).I'm trying to redeem myself so I hope u will enjoy it and please, please leave a comment, I would really like to hear your views. Thanks again. Hope u enjoy this,see ya.
Hi!
I just wanted to say I'm SOOOOO sorry for not updating!
I didn't think anyone was really interested in my story.
Anyways...
If u were/are interested I have news.
If u are looking for a new story to read,
I have news.
I am rewriting my story a bit and posting it on fanfiction.
It's now called Rebel.
Go to this link to read chapter one:
link
Please read chapter one,
Even if u HAVE already read it.
It is different!
The whole thing is going to be much different with a few of the same basic story lines that I had in the beginning.
Thanks for reading! :)
I just wanted to say I'm SOOOOO sorry for not updating!
I didn't think anyone was really interested in my story.
Anyways...
If u were/are interested I have news.
If u are looking for a new story to read,
I have news.
I am rewriting my story a bit and posting it on fanfiction.
It's now called Rebel.
Go to this link to read chapter one:
link
Please read chapter one,
Even if u HAVE already read it.
It is different!
The whole thing is going to be much different with a few of the same basic story lines that I had in the beginning.
Thanks for reading! :)