This is my new fanfic.
I hope u like it.
Please comment.
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Edwards POV
I’d just turned seventeen, so my whole life now was about getting a wife. I didn’t want to get married, I was happy single. All the girls adore me which I’m sick of. What was wrong with all the other men in this town? “Edward get up” My mother called from downstairs. I got out and got dressed and went downstairs. “Do u have any idea what time it is Edward?”
“Sorry father”
“Sorry isn’t good enough. We need to go find u a wife”
“I don’t want a wife”
“I don’t care you’re having one”
“You can’t make my choices for me”
“THAT IS ENOUGH. u SHALL BE GETTING MARRIED WHETHER u LIKE IT OF NOT” I’d had enough of all this. So I walked out the house leaving my mother and father speechless. I ran faster and faster. “GET BACK HERE NOW” My father shouted after me. I turned around to see him running towards me. So I ran faster. I ran into the woods, which everyone had been banned from lately because of murders. I didn’t care though. I would never see them again. I hated my father. He always makes decisions for me because he thinks he’s the choice master, but he’s not. My mother was ok, but she was always on my father’s side. My father made choices for her too. She couldn’t go anywhere without him. Even if she was going out with people he knew. He’s so irritating.
Elizabeth’s POV/ Edward’s mother
“He’ll be back I’m sure”
“HE BETTER COME BACK”
“Calm down”
“DIDN’T u JUST SEE THE WAY HE TALKED TO ME?”
“Yes I did. He’s only seventeen maybe u should lay off of him a bit”
“NO HE NEEDS A WIFE WHETHER HE LIKES IT of NOT”
“I know but just give him time”
“HE’S HAD ENOUGH TIME”
“No he hasn’t we’ve only just told him that he needs a wife and it’s probably frightened him”
“Why would it frighten him?”
“Taking care of a woman is a big responsibility”
“Hardly”
“You’re used to it”
“That’s not the point” He walked off to find Edward. I’m not surprised he doesn’t agree to this whole thing about getting married but he will eventually I’m sure. I cleaned up the keuken-, keuken and went to tidy Edward’s room which was always a mess.
Edward’s POV/ Edward’s farther
Damn child running away. He is going to get married and I shall choose his wife. He needs a good wife to control and look after. If he runs away again he will be punished worse than I am about to punish him when I find him. If he ran into the woods and gets murdered then that’s his fault not mine and I certainly am not risking my life for his. I knew Elizabeth would but I wouldn’t tell her that he ran into the woods anyway. I doubt he did, he’s a smart child. But if he was stupid like most children in this town then he would run into the woods.
I hope u like it.
Please comment.
xxx
Edwards POV
I’d just turned seventeen, so my whole life now was about getting a wife. I didn’t want to get married, I was happy single. All the girls adore me which I’m sick of. What was wrong with all the other men in this town? “Edward get up” My mother called from downstairs. I got out and got dressed and went downstairs. “Do u have any idea what time it is Edward?”
“Sorry father”
“Sorry isn’t good enough. We need to go find u a wife”
“I don’t want a wife”
“I don’t care you’re having one”
“You can’t make my choices for me”
“THAT IS ENOUGH. u SHALL BE GETTING MARRIED WHETHER u LIKE IT OF NOT” I’d had enough of all this. So I walked out the house leaving my mother and father speechless. I ran faster and faster. “GET BACK HERE NOW” My father shouted after me. I turned around to see him running towards me. So I ran faster. I ran into the woods, which everyone had been banned from lately because of murders. I didn’t care though. I would never see them again. I hated my father. He always makes decisions for me because he thinks he’s the choice master, but he’s not. My mother was ok, but she was always on my father’s side. My father made choices for her too. She couldn’t go anywhere without him. Even if she was going out with people he knew. He’s so irritating.
Elizabeth’s POV/ Edward’s mother
“He’ll be back I’m sure”
“HE BETTER COME BACK”
“Calm down”
“DIDN’T u JUST SEE THE WAY HE TALKED TO ME?”
“Yes I did. He’s only seventeen maybe u should lay off of him a bit”
“NO HE NEEDS A WIFE WHETHER HE LIKES IT of NOT”
“I know but just give him time”
“HE’S HAD ENOUGH TIME”
“No he hasn’t we’ve only just told him that he needs a wife and it’s probably frightened him”
“Why would it frighten him?”
“Taking care of a woman is a big responsibility”
“Hardly”
“You’re used to it”
“That’s not the point” He walked off to find Edward. I’m not surprised he doesn’t agree to this whole thing about getting married but he will eventually I’m sure. I cleaned up the keuken-, keuken and went to tidy Edward’s room which was always a mess.
Edward’s POV/ Edward’s farther
Damn child running away. He is going to get married and I shall choose his wife. He needs a good wife to control and look after. If he runs away again he will be punished worse than I am about to punish him when I find him. If he ran into the woods and gets murdered then that’s his fault not mine and I certainly am not risking my life for his. I knew Elizabeth would but I wouldn’t tell her that he ran into the woods anyway. I doubt he did, he’s a smart child. But if he was stupid like most children in this town then he would run into the woods.
Hi everyone, I'm back. I just thought I would leave a little note for everyone about my story.... so ok this wasn't my best work. though I'm glad that u read it, I gives me a feeling of appreciation thank you.
Any how as I was saying I felt that I was restricted with what would be acceptable for younger readers to read, due to the fact that there are alot of parents who wouldn't appreciate the content of the story, and the availability of it online so I had to tone it down somewhat. I do apologize to the meer mature readers but.... I have written a adult version at this site link for those who really want the juicy stuff, The titel of this story is: Breaking Dawn the Honeymoon (adult version).I'm trying to redeem myself so I hope u will enjoy it and please, please leave a comment, I would really like to hear your views. Thanks again. Hope u enjoy this,see ya.
Any how as I was saying I felt that I was restricted with what would be acceptable for younger readers to read, due to the fact that there are alot of parents who wouldn't appreciate the content of the story, and the availability of it online so I had to tone it down somewhat. I do apologize to the meer mature readers but.... I have written a adult version at this site link for those who really want the juicy stuff, The titel of this story is: Breaking Dawn the Honeymoon (adult version).I'm trying to redeem myself so I hope u will enjoy it and please, please leave a comment, I would really like to hear your views. Thanks again. Hope u enjoy this,see ya.