this is my first fanfiction and it probley aint that good so could u please comment
the sun was shining through the window, i felt the heat on my back, i rapped my arms around edward we both knew we had to get up not that we wanted to. i sighed and started to get up when i felt a strong arm pull be back down on the bed "were do u think your going" he wispered as he kissed my neck.i kissed him and sighed "we have to get up" he started to shake his head and kissed me again "edward we really have to get up,nessie is gonna be awake soon" he ignored me and carried on kissing me just under my jaw, i gave in then and wrapped my arms back around his neck and started kissing him so passionatley that this time he was the one to remind me that we had to get up that our little girl was waking up in the volgende room and as always he reminded me with one word "nessie" he crowed in my ear. i was up and out of his arms in a second, nessie wasnt exactly a little girl anymore she is technacally seven years old but phisically she looks sixteen years of age,she is really smart and spends all her spear time studying of with jacob.me and edward were in our over sized wardrobe when i heard my best friend and favirote wolf running to our door,he would knock in exactly two seconds,i sighed and put my blue v-neck jumper on the walked to the door.he didnt even say high he just rushed past me still in wolf form into nessies room i ran after him what has him so worried "jake,jake" i asked i was worried now. in the living room i heard edward answer the door again i got a wiff of the scent and realised it was alice, i heard edward growl from hearing her thoughts . i turned back to jake wanting antwoorden he was in his human form now he sat down on the side of nessie's bed and started to stroke her hair i waited for him to tell me what's going on,he looked up at me and zei two words that made me frezze into place "the volturi"