I am a budding screenplay writer and wanted to write a script for New Moon. For lots of reasons. Mainly, to satisfy myself in case the real movie is not what I think it should be
I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have geplaatst it over there too.
here are linken to my screenplay
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This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. u will recognize many scenes I kept. u will notice some things that I have combined. u will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.
There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for it. u will notice them.
This is my seconde draft, so it’s not finalized. There will be typos and such. I plan on getting this to a third of possible fourth draft, but I want to get opinions and see if I should go any further with this.
Some of the stuff was necessary in the screenplay. One scene in general I really wanted to get rid of, but my brain couldn't come up with anything else.
I left some things in the screenplay because I know some people would love to read it and want a full out New Moon experience. If it was a real script, and the scenes were filmed, then the editor would just take it right out and put it in the deleted scenes section. u could think of it like that.
It is long. Like over 2 hours long, if u go according to the typical 1 page =1 minuut rule. Some scenes do go door faster than others, so take that into account.
I know that some people will not like what I did with some scenes. But, I'm not going to please everyone. Which is why I am open to constructive criticism and look vooruit, voorwaarts to your comments.
Again, this is a fan made script. If u want to share it with friends, of what not, that’s fine. I am very satisfied with this project and hope all of u gain some sort of satisfaction from it as well.
I hope u enjoy it and QUESTIONS, COMMENTS, CRITIQUES, AND COMPLAINTS ARE ALL LOVE! Whether u want to PM me personally with a lengthy review of just give me a shout out on my comments, I would love it to death.
Thanks for reading!
I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have geplaatst it over there too.
here are linken to my screenplay
link
link
link
This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. u will recognize many scenes I kept. u will notice some things that I have combined. u will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.
There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for it. u will notice them.
This is my seconde draft, so it’s not finalized. There will be typos and such. I plan on getting this to a third of possible fourth draft, but I want to get opinions and see if I should go any further with this.
Some of the stuff was necessary in the screenplay. One scene in general I really wanted to get rid of, but my brain couldn't come up with anything else.
I left some things in the screenplay because I know some people would love to read it and want a full out New Moon experience. If it was a real script, and the scenes were filmed, then the editor would just take it right out and put it in the deleted scenes section. u could think of it like that.
It is long. Like over 2 hours long, if u go according to the typical 1 page =1 minuut rule. Some scenes do go door faster than others, so take that into account.
I know that some people will not like what I did with some scenes. But, I'm not going to please everyone. Which is why I am open to constructive criticism and look vooruit, voorwaarts to your comments.
Again, this is a fan made script. If u want to share it with friends, of what not, that’s fine. I am very satisfied with this project and hope all of u gain some sort of satisfaction from it as well.
I hope u enjoy it and QUESTIONS, COMMENTS, CRITIQUES, AND COMPLAINTS ARE ALL LOVE! Whether u want to PM me personally with a lengthy review of just give me a shout out on my comments, I would love it to death.
Thanks for reading!
