COMIC-CON 2012- BD!

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Chapter 1 Moving.


I sat on the hard blue rocks on the beach, I squished my toes into the sand. I never got bored coming down to the strand when the sun was shining and u could hear the birds singing. It was hard to think that this was my last dag on this beautiful strand i took a deep breath sucking in the salty air, my parents have came to a desicion to verplaats to shine Island it was a beautiful island, u had to travel door boat. Shine Island was 23 miles away from New York. I guess the strand at the island would be preety but nothing was as breath taking...

Carlisle: (snoring)

Esme: Wake up!

Carlisle: I was making fake snore.

Esme: Oh....

Carlisle: Heh...you thought I was asleep?

Esme:Kinda of.

Carlisle: Mmm....

Esme: I'm bored.

Carlisle: Not me. It was kinda fun to make fake snore.

Esme: No, it bothers me.

Carlisle: Oh just try it.

Esme: Okay...(snoring)

Carlisle: Like it?

Esme: YES! (snoring) It was fun!

Carlisle: Shh...Bella's sleeping.

Bella: Haha nope.

Carlisle: WHAT?!

Bella: Edward wanted to watch u both so we came here to watch.

Esme: Oh that's sweet.

Carlisle:....

Edward: Sorry.

Bella: (snoring) (giggle)

Carlisle: Edward...is Bella asleep?...