All right guys, as u all have probably noticed my last chapter was a bit of a dozer, but don't worry my volgende chapter will be right. And just incase that u have not figured it out yet. Most was the chapter is correct except for the bit about going into the car. That bit will be coming up in the volgende chapter. Also don't be afraid to give me any advice on how I can make my writing Better any critasim is welcome.
On another note this whole story will only be klok, bell as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs