I have a story im writting and i want some advise on it.

The name of the main charicter is Tala. She is half white wolf demon and half vampire. She grue up in a village of humans and demons, that live in peace together. Her dad, a demon hunter, finds the village and kills all the demons and human. There were survivers, but all of them were human. except for tala. Know, several years later she finds out were her father might be. she meats several other demons good and bad.But when she finds her father...
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