what do u think about this line in my story

its about a samurai in Edo japan, he is carrying a friend's broad sword when another samurai in full japanese armor stops him.

"“Your pathetic, almost an insult to samurai carrying around a sword like that. I will get rid of u now.” He said, and I can tell u I’m sure he means it. He puts his right hand on his sword ready to pull it out, I know I cat do the same because of the shape of my sword so I just pull it out as sweat runs down my face. I don’t think I can actually win with this kind of sword but as long as the Tokugawa shogun needs me I can’t let myself die."