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Writing Delema, pleeeeaaase help!!!!!!

ok, so i wrote a fantasy story, and im totally stuck on which ending is best! pleeaase help! So my story is about these four teenage warriors who lived 150 years ago. They invented a powerful weapon that unlocked the powers of one's heart. they were killed when their own village got jealous and gredy and turned against them. After they were killed the goddess of the story resurected them in modern times and told them, "You cannot die yet, there is much meer u must still do." So the story goes on for a while(its a whole novel) and they finaly compleate their goal. now is where I'm stuck. please vote which ending is best.

A) The goddess comes back to them and as a reward for everything they have done she allows them to live out the rest of thier ives in the modern world.

B) They have compleated their goal so they have nothing to hold them back on earth. They proceed with the goddess to the afterlife, feeling at peace.

please vote, it would be a big help to get other people opinions.

It sounds like your going for a classic deus ex machina style anding

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Insight357 said:

Well, if u ever want to use them in another story, like a sequel, of a trilogy maybe then u should go for A. But if not B, I personally like B best, but it's up to you.