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posted by para-scence
I was torn. On one hand, I really liked Foster. But, I wasn't sure if he really liked me back. He completely cut me off at school, but acted like he was totally in love with me when we were alone. It was strange. I could usually read people really well, but Foster left me speechless, and I had no clue what to think.

"Do u whatever u feel is right," Grandma said. That did not help. I had no idea what was "right." And honestly, I wasn't sure there was a right and wrong in this situation. I wasn't so sure about asking Echo. She still hated Foster no matter what.

Echo came over one dag after school. She had a little boy with her, holding her hand. I wasn't expecting it, but it was nice to have her over either way. She smiled shyly.

"Hey," she zei quietly. "Um, can we stay here for a while?"

"Uh, sure." I stepped aside, letting them in. "Is everything ok?" She shrugged. The little boy standing volgende to her pouted, and shrinked into her side.

"Um, this is my little brother, Ace," Echo introduced. I waved at him, but he buried his face in Echo's side.

"Cosette, who is it?" Grandma asked, coming in. "Oh, Echo. It's you! How are you, sweetie?"

"Good, Mrs. Hayner, thank you."

"Is it ok if they stay for a while?" I asked.

"Sure, that's fine," she smiled. She went out front to go read on the porch. Echo and I went and sat in the living room. Ace sat in Echo's lap. It was then, I realized a bruise on her cheek, somewhat in the shape of a hand.

"What happened?" I breathed. She stared at the ground, and shook her head.

"It's fine," she mumbled.

"No, it's not!" I said. "What happened?" Echo just stared at the floor, and refused to speak. Ace looked at her, then me, and back and forth.

"Mommy and Daddy hurt her," he zei shyly. Echo winced. I hugged them both tightly.

"I'm so sorry," I sighed. "You guys can come over whenever u need to. Whenever u want to."

"Thanks," Echo mumbled. I heard the door open, and someone walk in, who didn't sound like Grandma. Foster walked into the living room, and stopped.

"I, uh... Your grandmother let me in..." he zei awkwardly. Echo shifted and hugged Ace close.

"That's ok," I said. "Do u wanna--"

"I can see you're busy," he said. "I'll see u later, Cosette." He turned to leave. I looked back at Echo, and she looked at me with sad eyes.

"Just a sec," I said. I got up and walked after him. He stopped just before he got to the door. "You can stay, y'know. Echo---"

"No thanks," he said. "I'm not... I don't particularly like her," he whispered. I stood there for a second, my mouth hanging open a little.

"Do u even know her?" I asked. He sighed.

"I gotta go, Cosette. I'll see u later." He kissed my cheek before leaving. I stood there for a moment, and then rolled my eyes and went back to the living room where Echo and Ace were still sitting.

"Is everything ok?" Echo asked. I nodded.

"Fine. How're u feeling?" She shrugged.

"Come on," I said. "Let's get some ice for your cheek."

***

Echo and Ace stated for the night. Ace slept on Echo's lap, while she slept on the couch, and I slept on the floor. It wasn't the most comfortable, but at least she was. I felt so bad for her. No one should be afraid to go home.

The volgende day, Echo had to leave a little early to drop Ace off at kindergarten. She zei she'd meet me at school.

When the time came, I left for school. Then like usual, Foster rode up alongside me.

"Hey there," he smiled. I pursed my lips, and waved shyly at him. "What's wrong with you?"

"Nothing," I grumbled.

"Good," he said. "So what was Echo's problem yesterday?"

"Family issues," I said.

"Gosh," he muttered. "She's such a complainer..." That stopped me.

"Don't u dare talk about her like that," I snapped.

"Oh, come on," he said, rolling his eyes. "Let's not fight about this now--"

"Why? It's not like we're going to argue at school of anything..." I said, getting meer frustrated with every word. I couldn't even look at him. I shouted at the sidewalk.

"Cosette, you're being ridiculous," he said. I folded my arms. "Just... Just leave me alone until u stop acting so stupid." He rolled his eyes and muttered "bitch" as he rode away. I clenched my hands into fists.

***

I told Echo what happened. She was not happy at all.

"I'm gonna kick his ass!" she said, standing up. At first, I didn't think she'd really do anything. She got halfway down the hall, when I realized she was serious. I ran after her, and dragged her back.

"Liste--" I grabbed her hands, and then realized she had something in it. I opened it up, to see a rock. "Why do u have a rock?! Where'd u get it?!" I asked, incredulous. She examined it in her hands and shrugged.

"I found it on the way to school. I thought it was pretty... I figured I could use it to beat Foster in the head... It's still be pretty, even with some blood on it, I guess." She spoke so casually. My eyes widened, and I slowly took the rock from her.

"I'm gonna hold onto this for you..." I zei slowly. She sighed.

"Fine..." she grumbled. I raised an eyebrow. She looked back up at me. "What? At least u can't say I'm not there for you." I thought for a quick moment and shrugged.

"I guess." She hugged me, and I hugged her back.

"I've got your back, Cosette." I laughed.
posted by EmoKidSteven
Well u see
I'm not myself anymore
Well u can see
What I've done
Blinded myself
Lost my direction
In this times
That are getting cold
In this moment
To behold
And shine

Here's a poem
For all the loved ones
Here's a grave
For all the dead
Here's the oxygen
For all the living
Here's a tissue
For tears that are shed
I'm lost now
I'm here now
I'm lost here
door Myself
I'm gone now
I'm lost again
I'm lost
door myself

Well take your houses
Take your money
Take the things u don't need
Live the life
You've always wanted
And then burn the memories
Take the good times and the bad
Take the happy maybe the sad
And turn, turn yourself around
I'm lost in my own fairytale
Where I'm the winner
All over again
in my daydreams I've lost all hope
All ambition
Looking and losing an only friend

I'm lost now
I'm here now
I'm lost here
door Myself
I'm gone now
I'm lost again
I'm lost
door myself

I'm lost
I'm here
I'm lost here
door myself

I'm lost now
I'm here now
I'm lost here
door myself

door myself
posted by twilight-rocks9
plz tell me if u like it of if i should write more.


And his hair I love it!” my best friend Selene said. I make a gagging sound. “Oh shut up Gabs you’re going to be like this your boyfriend and I’m going to suffer.” she said. “You want to suffer then let me replay what u sound like.” I did a horrible impression of her. “Oh no I have to go bye gabby.” she said. When she got up she kicked sand on my arm. “Bye Lena” I zei a little too late. I looked at the suns verkwikking, refection on the clear blue ocean. I got up to go swimming when someone put their hands over my eyes and said...
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added by moodystuff449
Source: I made it.
A Formula For Writing A Great Story door Dr. Ken Atchity via FilmCourage.com.
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posted by flabaloobalah
CHAPTER ONE: "CARTER"

There’s one silent sensation of falling really fast and really hard. Then it’s over. Just like that. Somewhere off in the distance, a girl screams. Maybe she’s volgende to me and my damaged ears are playing tricks on me. of maybe she really is far away from here, wherever that is.
    A flame billowing over a folded up car flicks its vile tongue. The brand reflects in the pools of blood and the bodies. Five bodies, and myself, still alive. Sirens wail and rescue teams and news vans swarm the scene. I moan and grip my chest, waiting for someone to notice...
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posted by Triscia95
“Caroline I’ve tried everything to prove my self time after time that I love you, that I would do anything for you, I’d never let anyone hurt you.” Klaus paused as Caroline stood in the door looking down at the hardwood floor tears rolling down her eyes. “That I would die for you.” He finished. Klaus took one step towards Caroline but as he did she took two steps away.

Klaus’s grieved face turned zuur, zure and full of anger. Nothing he did of zei made her realize that if she asked anything he would do it with out a seconde thought. She shook her head and raced out the door.

He wasn’t...
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posted by Nesrino
Once upon a time, there was a 15 jaar old boy named Will who loved sports as if they were his whole life. From the beginning of his first dag at school, Will tried out for the soccer team and they were amazed how talented this boy was at sports at such a young age. When Will became 12 years of age, he had won the scool over 20 awards for each soccer, basketbal and tennis competition they entered. He has also become very fit and well-built from all his exercising and sports, and seems to think that being fit was one of the most important things a person should accomplish in life. Will has always...
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posted by mars15
I need you
from the first moment i saw you
I need you
because you're the air i breathe
I need you
because you're the water i drink
I need you
because just the thought of seeing u makes me want to get out of bed
I need you
because u can with just one smile make my whole world starts to turning again
I need you
because u make me wake up from my the most horrible nightmare without fear
I need you
because u can give me hope when i don't have one
I need you
because even if I'm at the bottom,you're always there to help me stand up
I need you
because in this cruel world u keep me alive
I need you
because i know that you'll never give up from me
I need you
because when no one believed in me u were there to stand up for me
I need you
because you're everything for me
But the most important thing why i need u is
because I'll always love you!


This was in my head so i just thought to write it
posted by nimone
Let's be honest we have all at least once in our lives experienced the misfortune that is the power cut.

The power cut it'self may not be as intolerable depending on the circumstance. If u live in a place where it is sunny and there is a lot to do outside then u don't have much to worry about.
I for one do live in this kind of climate usually. This however was not the case yesterday!

Not only was it the only dag of the week where everything is closed as it was a Sunday, oh no it was also pouring down raining!

I was forced indoors with nothing to do and it was really dark inside due to the...
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posted by irena83
Life,
priceless and important,
gives u the roads
and leaves u choices
of which your luck depends on.


This is your life
and u live it
wrapped door sadness
of happiness.
Who cares?


This is your life,
invisible for others.


u pick the road
and pray that the choice
is right,
but life loves u not,
that's u who love
the joy of life.


Life,
priceless and important,
gives u choices,
unpredictable events,
grays and hope,
and life is all yours.


But, the vraag is
will u remain sane
even though your life
is cruel to your dreams,
will u remain sane
even when your life
is dying in your eyes.
posted by irena83
Chapter 5: News

Suddenly, she felt weird.
She went quickly at the bathroom
and laved herself.
She looked pale and was feeling sick.
She closed her eyes and tried to
take a deep breath.
Now she felt little better.
She took a phone and called a neighbor,
telling her that she must see a doctor
and someone should take care of Gwenny.
Joanna zei that there were no reason
to be worried about and she would
look after baby.
Dana, thankful and scared the same time,
got dressed quickly and immediately
called a cab.
While she was waiting for a cab,
she was so confused and tense.
The cab came soon.
She barely could...
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their are six technique(originally theirs eight but i only know six)


technigue one:Start with a short,effective sentence(4-5 words max): Her hair shone gold.

technique two:Start with an interesting metaphor of simile: The wolf was like a tornado,changing the lives of all who crossed his path.

technique three:Start with a literary device(ex.onomatopoeia,alliteration,etc):Gobbling Grandma and her grandchild was his plan all along.

technique four:Start with a prepositional phrase: ALong the spooky road to Grandma's house,Red skipped with an air of confidence.

technique five:Start with a riddle and...
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posted by sweetpea92
    Everyday at lunch for all of high school so far I would stand in line and wait to get up to the front to tell the lunch lady that “I need a to-go tray please.” Then once I had gotten my tray, I would scan my lunch card and dash down the hallway to my favoriete teacher’s room to kom bij “the lunch bunch” on everyday except Wednesday, and Friday. On those days the beginning of this routine is relatively the same, but instead of heading off to another meeting of the lunch bunch, I would take a detour at the bibliotheek to kom bij my vrienden at our usual table, for either...
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posted by Firewriter
There was once a boy
Who loved a girl
A very distant girl- haunted door her demons that no one else could see
The boy- lonely and afraid of pursuing his passions
The heat of the mid-July sun beating on their backs
On a little dirt road volgende to a vine-covered wall
That little boy handed the little girl a limoen, kalk green envelope
Her name printed on that envelope in his fine pen writing

Their cheeks red and hearts pounding
The two continued their days apart
Both afraid their darkness will come over
And destroy what they tried to break
The dag to follow, that little broken girl
Smiling a real smile for the first...
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First Step In Writing A Screenplay door Richard Walter
video
richard walter
ucla
screenplay
script
writer
auteur
how to write a screenplay
added by vampiress015
Also very funny, don't u just wish u could do these things yourself?
video
kaleb nation
writing
auteur
bran hambric
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added by HarryPLover