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posted by babina
hey! everyone who is kind enough to read my story! this is my first time so please commentaar and tell what u think about it.thank u! hope u like it!

I was walking down the hallway, going to my third class and grateful for all the posters they had put up for the upcoming dance because now no one noticed me as i sneaked through the kids in the hall to my class. Usually i and a few other kids,"the outsiders" they called us, were the aim of all the bulling which was so bad this jaar because of the new gang in the school"the Qsix". The school was bad enough without them, but when they came things became worse. As i walked down the hall i saw a kid being bulled door the Qsix just because she had tripped on one of their book bags and they were telling her to carry their boeken to the volgende class on her knees as punishment for damaging their books.When i looked around to the people nearby i saw that no one was paying any attention to what was happening of maybe they were just afraid to say anything cause they new that the Qsix would turn their attention to them, which wasn't a very good thing because their attention on u possibly meant one of the worst moments in your life. I didn't know the girl on the floor but i new that she was new so that meant that she didn't yet have a group she belonged to and that meant that she didn't have anyone to stand up for her.I felt so bad for her that i couldn't walk away and leave her like that, so helpless with those people.I knew that i couldn't do much either if i stayed but get myself in trouble, i also new that no one was going to help me because:first of all i was in the outsiders category which was the lowest category and consisted of the downcast people in the school. And seconde of all no one wanted to go against the Qsix who were the most populair kids in the school. I stood there for a sec trying to figure out what i should do/say to stop them but nothing really came up, but anyway i started walking over to where they were. I knew it wasn't a good idea and they were six of them so i had no chance against them but i knew that if i could just destruct them for a little bit they would forget about her and she could sneak away.As i approached them i saw a few heads of the people nearby turning in my direction,it wasn't a usual thing for one of the outsiders to walk over to the Qsix because u brought nothing else but trouble to yourself.But yet here i was walking over to them alone to help someone i didn't even know with absolutely no idea of what to do of say.When some of the kids who belonged to the "knowitall" category(which was for those people who thought they knew everything and were the ones to first get news of everything new and were responsible for starting any gossip)saw me, they surely got something new to talk about and started pointing at me.As the Qsix turned around to see what was causing all the noise they saw me walking to them about ten ft from them and i saw surprise written all over their faces which then turned into smirks,i knew they were happy to find their volgende victim and i was the one taking myself to them this time,and i also knew that they wouldn't want to miss a chance to make someone like me miserable of u might say meer miserable cause i was already miserable.A small voice was screaming in my head to turn around and walk away but another told me not to be a chicken.All the kids were gathering around us now trying to see what was going to happen and it didn't look like it was going to turn out good.As i stood there i knew i had three options of what to do then:I could walk away,which would be hard to go through all the people around us now,i could change my mind about what i was going to do/say and maybe offer to do something which wouldn't turn out so bad of i could keep up what i wanted to do in the first place. At that point i decided to follow my instincts which wasn't a good idea because every time i did it, they always got me into trouble and i never noticed until it was over.And then as always with my instincts, i chose to keep going with the first plan.
She watched them as they moved down her street.
They never saw her, took great care in looking away before she noticed their shamelessly wide eyes were glued to her body... or, meer importantly what she embodied: this world they lived in wasn't perfect.
Her presence there seemed to pollute their pretty city and just like the odd bier can of stray McDonalds bag, they ignored her. She wasn't stupid though... she knew she was just as much an ornament as the ribbons that decorated the streetlights at this time of year, that she in fact blended in with the rest of the pavement and she herself was...
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This is the other version I thought of. Honestly I like the other one better but it's good to think of two versions for a chapter. I think this version is shorter because I didn't want them to have the same dialogue.

I drag Elliot outside with such great force that he almost ran into me outside. I stop and let go with his arm
"What the hell was that all about? What is wrong with you?" I demand glaring at him
"Wrong with me? What is wrong with you?" he damands
"What do u mean?"
"I saw u in there drooling over serge like he was a plate of nachos,"
"Yeah so? I like him and he likes me....
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Max’s p.o.v

We saw James come in. He looked at us and rolled his eyes. “Fighting again” he asked, Billy smiled. I snickered. “Billy has a bit of a temper” I joked. I heard Billy snicker. “Both of u need to shut up. We all need to talk” He said, Billy and I looked at one another. “What is it?’ Billy asked. James let out a deep sigh. “Living room, now” he ordered. We both nodded and went downstairs. Once we got there, all the hunters were there, but no slayers. “What’s going on?” Caleb asked. James took a zitplaats, stoel volgende to him, we followed. “Billy and Lilly’s family...
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posted by TheHiddenCane
Selfless acts were uncommon in her universe... all human contact she'd gotten the last few months were Japanese tourists that wanted to capture the bad side of the city on their nice little holiday, door means of escaping the shopping malls, crowded museums and crammed amusement parks that were drowning in bliss and manic happiness.
Yeah, she was the bad side of the city... she was the part that was better left unseen and little people actually saw it. Some of them actually asked for her permission! Why? What would she do? Sue them? She was a stain on the face of society, something like a pimple...
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posted by khfan12
Chapter One
A discovery
Two years later
"Come on, u three, hurry up! We have to get this project done fast!" zei Lori. "Lori! Slow down! We aren't as fast as you!" zei Jesse. Lori Lopez, Jesse Martin, Nina Boyce, and straal, ray Martinez are four best freinds who are all 14, and have superpowers. "Finally! We're here!" zei Nina. For their summer project, they were going to explore the old factory on the top, boven of Higgins hill. Once they were inside, they found a room labled 'freeze room' they looked inside the window. "There are people in here!" zei Ray. Lori pushed the 'defrost' button. They could...
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Okay I should very careful. If I mess up I could get very hurt I think.
I sigh and I raise my hands. A sand storm starts forming. So far so good My hands control the speed of the sand. When I wiggle my fingers it controls where it will go. It starts going to my right.
It sounds like a horrible hurricane. I wiggle my left fingers and it moves towards my house.
Oh crap! That's not good. verplaats your fingers Sam! MOVE!
My sandstorm picks up my house and it starts spinning around.
I hear screaming coming from my house. It's probably my mother.
I raise my hand. To stop it which is impossible because I'm...
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posted by dragonrider
Alex froze up as his hunter came near him with his bag. Alex started crying again but silently. His thoughts were raging out of control Should I tell him? Nah then he'll just kill me and my family Alex looked up in time to get slapped again.
"Tell me where your family is Alex! of else," Alex's hunter roared raising his hand again
Alex started to shake bad.
"N..No I will not Dude just kill me now so at least I can be in a happy place," he zei looking down his tears dripping onto the hard wooden floor
The hunter laughed a big belly laugh. Alex looked up in time to get slapped again. Alex glared...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
We both stood there in awe. I closed my eyes and then opened them again to check if he was real. He looked just as shocked as I was. He moved closer but I moved back. “Sadie, please” he begged, I shook my head. “You’re not dead” I stated, he nodded. I know it was a stupid thing to say, but at this moment it was the first thing that went through my mind. “Please, let me explain” he pleaded. I didn’t answer, I just stood there. “But, Dawn” I said, he nodded. “Dawn saw what I wanted her to” he simply said. I looked up at him with disgust. “What do u mean?” I asked...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
Dawn’s p.o.v

“What?’ I asked, closing my mouth. He smiled, sending a shiver down my spine. “I need to speak to my new slayer to be” he told us. Rebecca eyed him. “Why, we have taught her the basic and the rules” she said, he now looked annoyed. Why was he doing this? I thought to myself. “Now, young ladies I would like to talk to her in private” he said, but before we could go Billy had walked in. “Derek” he simply said. My father turned to him. “Billy, how have u been?” he asked. Billy snickered. “Just great, now what do u want with Lilly?” he asked, my father...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I Wake up. I see nothing but my pale white ceiling, I want to stay here, but then I hear my name. I rush up and go to the door but then I look down and see what I am wearing nothing but my under wear and a white singlet. I get my dressing japon, jurk and put my arms through the sleeves. I walk down the stairs and see my sister, her face is filled with anger I suddenly regret coming down. I stop walking once I reach the bottom of the stairs she walks up to me and smiled. I am confused until I realise that Georgia is here. Georgia is the goddess of music, hundreds of years geleden she was the outcast, her...
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posted by funnyshawna
Life is an iPod. The different melodies, the ups and the downs, the changes in tempo, every song, and every experience differs a little from the next. Start with the tinkling bells, meaningless lyrics, and soothing sounds of early childhood. Everything is simple; repetition, a song meant for young ears, nothing to think about, nothing to ponder, just to breathe and to live. One song flows into the next, changing subtly, barely noticed. Then the words begin to gather meer depth; the beat becomes a little faster, a little louder. The muziek plays, slow and monotonous during the school day, dragging...
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Who is Mary Sue, u ask?

She is a pest, a scourge, a CURSE upon the world of fiction; a dull, cliche character who mostly invades the fan fiction universe (especially in fandoms like Lord of the Rings of Harry Potter), but can also be found in original work, TV shows, books, movies, etc. In fan fiction, she's usually the fangirl's way of inserting herself in the story and pairing herself up with the cutest/hottest character. This infamous evil can be identified door the following traits:

1: She is stunningly/unusually beautiful. Oh she may deny it, claiming to be a "plain Jane" and modestly deflecting...
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posted by VampirePrinsess
I read this and had to pass it on.
my name is sarah
i am three
my eyes are swollen
i cannot see
i must be stupid
i must be bad
what else could have made
my daddy so mad
i wish i were better
i wish i werent ugly
then maybe my mommy
would still wanna hug me
i cant do a wrong
i can't speak at all
or else i locked up
all dag long
when i wake up
im all alone
the house is dark
my folks arent home
when my mommy does come home
i try to be nice
so maybe i'll just get
one wipping tonight
i just heard a car
my daddy is back
from charlie's bar
i heard him curse
my name is called
i press myself
against the wall
i try to hide
from his...
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posted by BiteMeCullen107
“Ouch!” last night I was out to long and door the time I came home pagina I was exhausted so I just slept on my mattress that laid on the floor.
    I woke to the waves crashing onto the kust-, oever and the sun light touching my eyes. Not realizing I was on the edge of my bed, I stretched and landed on the cold floor to my two room apartment.
    I got off the floor grabbing my silk badjas that was sitting on top, boven of the box volgende to my mattress. I walked over to my living room windows and opened the shades up to reveal a beautiful ocean. The sky was clear all for...
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HEY,
I DID NOT WRITE THIS STORY MY BRO DID, HOPE u LIKE IT


15 years ago, mankind found that there was meer than the world showed us. There was another world where creatures of all appearances were hiding, the creatures made a deal with the humans that if they let them live in the human world as normal citizens they would help the humans deal with deceases and technology. They agreed but the humans decreed that all monsters must hid in a human form, this was no shock to the creatures and it was agreed that man and monster would live as one, as long as the monsters keep their true form a secret....
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I loved her.

As much as I hated her now I had loved her then.
But I had a problem now. The hate was getting in the way of my whole life. It was like this shadow that was always two steps behind me waiting to lash out. I did what I thought would help. Ignored it. And guess what? It just got worse. It got to the point where I was cold to everyone. My vrienden tiptoed around me of avoided me altogether. My hatred and anger were controling my life. I should have asked for help but I was way to stubborn for that. Why would I need to talk to a shrink? They were for crazy people. So, after a few weeks...
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posted by BiteMeCullen107
It was only a couple minuten after the reception and Aunt Alice was practically jumping out of her skin. “Esme can we toon them please, please, please?” Aunt Alice begged. “Ok but calm done Alice we don’t want to give it away.” Grandma told Aunt Alice. They tied a peace of cloth around Jacob and my eyes. We walked a mile and Grandma and Aunt Alice took of the blindfolds. Jacob and I stood in front of a beautiful three story house. “Grandma, Aunt Alice its beautiful. Thank u so much.” I zei turning back to them giving them both the biggest hug I’ve ever gegeven any one. They...
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This is my take on love,it came to me about two years ago,then it was just a phrase,i came up with the poem later on.:)I hope u like it,please Review it.Critisism is welcome-but no Flames pls.thanks bye!


Love Is A Tortured Soul

Love is a tortured soul.
Drenched in the bearing of it’s kind, and the lost.
For it gets lost quite easily; it’s naïve and foolish-desperate.
Love is a tortured soul.
It’s always there, waiting for u to find it in it’s dark dim home, longing for another of it’s kind to relate and confide to.
They come sometimes, of so it thinks.
It’s always being teased by...
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After eating breakfast Jacob and I went up to our room to get dressed. Finding the closet was pretty easy because there are only two doors in our room, the bathroom and the closet. “Oh. My. Gosh. Alice went way over board with this.” Jacob zei in a normal tone. I walked over and looked in the closet and she did. It was the size of my parents bedroom back at there house. Jacob and I had our own sides. Aunt Alice hadn’t put any of Jake’s of my clothes in the closet she bought all new clothes for us. We walked in to find something simple to wear but that was impossible with Aunt Alice...
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slowly climbing

inch door inch

bringing me closer

to my doom

butterflies of

anticipation

flutter nervously

in my stomach

knuckles whiten

jaws clench

what have I

gotten myself into

the suspense

is killing me

I'm going to hate it

I'm going to love it

I might lose my lunch

but I don't care

heaven help me

here it comes...

...

I hold my breath...

...

and then
I scream
my stomach
drops
my breath
is stolen
my heart
is pounding
adrenaline
courses
through
my veins
amid screams
of sweet terror
I fling up
my hands
and ride on
the wings
of Thrill!