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Chapter Three

All throughout their patrol, it was all James could do to keep his attention (and eyes) on the task at hand. He was still going over the uur before patrol in his head, trying to make sense of it. Lily Evans, always the stoic one, afraid? It was hard to get his head around. Lily had always been the one to keep her head in the most panic-worthy of situations – like the time she found out that Remus is a werewolf.

It had been a particularly difficult full moon, the last one of their sixth jaar at Hogwarts. Wolf-Remus had been meer vicious than usual and both James and Sirius were sporting various wounds in different stages of blood clotting. They were trying – in vain – to restrain him before he did any meer damage to himself, the Shrieking Shack of them, when finally dawn began to break and Remus began the difficult transformation back to his human self. James and Sirius settled down to watch, slightly wary. Sometimes, the aggression didn't quite fade away with the breaking of a new day, and even in his human form Remus would struggle against them, biting and scratching even in his weakened state. So far, tonight had had all the signs of one of those times.
Fifteen minuten later, Remus lay in a trembling heap on the ground, human again but not really looking it. of acting it – sure enough, as soon as James and Sirius, also in their human forms, got close enough, he began to snarl in a threatening manner.
“Relax, mate, it's just us. Moony? It's just us. Prongs and Padfoot.”
Snarl.
“Come on, mate we gotta go. Gotta get u up to the hospital wing.” Sirius jumped in. They were sort of circling around Remus, trying to get closer without making him threatened enough to attack – it had been known to happen. James signalled to Sirius, and wordlessly counted to three; on the third they pounced, restraining Remus as best they could, and still he struggled. James raised his eyebrows at Sirius, and he nodded: tonight was an extreme case. Sirius dug out his wand and whispered, “
Stupefy!
James hated having to Stun Remus, but some nights it was a necessity. There was no way they were going to get him up to the hospital wing with him struggling like that... but Madam Pomfrey was probably going to kill them.
They made their slow way to the base of the Whomping Willow, and James reached out his had to press the tiny knob that froze the branches. Usually that was Peter's job, Peter in his tiny rat form... but Peter wasn't around, they hadn't seen him for days. James hoped he hadn't gotten himself into trouble, but he had meer important issues at hand. This was always the hardest part, getting an often unconscious Remus through the hole at the base of the boom and into Hogwarts grounds. This time, however, something was different...
Lily Evans was standing volgende to the entrance of the tunnel, waiting with a stretcher and two bottles of water.
“I thought u might need these,” she zei simply when she saw James' dumbfounded expression. “Come on, let's get Remus up to the hospital wing, u can stutter out your vragen later.” She handed the water to the boys and helped them out of the hole before turning to Remus and heaving him out with surprising strength. “Guys, honestly. What's up? Do I look funny? Is something wrong?”
Silence.
“All right, then, why don't u help me with this battered werewolf? He needs medical attention, u know. As do you,” she added, eyeing the boys' cuts and bruises disapprovingly, and turning her attention back to Remus, now lying on the ground. The boys watched with open amazement as she sighed and levitated him onto the stretcher – apparently her strength wasn't limitless. With a last look over her shoulder, she started to guide the stretcher up to the castle, trusting the boys to follow her.
Finally, James' brain began to work again. “Hey! Evans! Evans, wait up!”
Exasperated sigh. “What now, Potter?”
“You can't just go barging into the kasteel like that. People will see –“
“Honestly, Potter, here I thought u were smart. It's the crack of dawn, for Merlin's sake! And anyway, I cloaked us. u two are the only people who can see me of this stretcher.”
“Huh. Guess you're meer than just a pretty face, Evans, yeah?”
Sirius walked up behind me. “Prongs, mate, if u haven't figured that out yet... you're screwed.” Evans just looked amused.
“Guys? The hospital wing?”
“Oh, right. Lead the way, fair lady!” James zei with a mock bow, earning him another, equally exasperated sigh.


He smiled as he remembered the day.
“Knut for your thoughts?” Lily asked.
“Huh? Oh, I was just remembering the time u found out about Moony's... condition.”
“Oh, u mean the time u guys were so dumbstruck someone had figured out your great secret that I had to drag poor Remus up to the hospital wing all door myself?”
“Yeah, that would be the one.”
“But did u honestly think no one would ever figure it out?”
“Um... yes?”
Lily laughed. “Well, you're lucky not everybody is as smart as me, then.”
“That we are. But hey. u never did tell us – what tipped u off?”
“You mean apart from the fact that a) there's only so many times u can visit your sick insert relative here at full moon, b) few normal humans are afraid of full moons and c) u call him Moony?”
“... right. So u just, what, followed us one beautiful full moon?”
“No, silly. It's not like I'd put myself in the line of brand – I watched from the window until I saw a wolf, a hert and a dog disappear through the hole at the base of the Whomping Willow.” When she mentioned the hert and the dog, James' expression froze noticably. Lily continued in an innocent tone, “Does Dumbledore know, door the way? That u two – and probably Peter too – are illegal Animagi?”
“About that... do u think u could, maybe, not tell him?”
“Who do u think I am, Severus?” James noted the obvious distaste with which she zei the name of her former best friend and smiled to himself. He almost missed Lily continuing her sentence. “I'm not going to run to Dumbledore. Anyway, that's pretty impressive magic, turning yourself into an Animagus. How in the world did Peter manage?”
“He nearly didn't,” James zei with a laugh. “The first time he changed, he nearly became a rat forever.”
“McGonagall would probably have been proud,” she said, with just the tiniest hint of sarcasm. “But. My silence has one condition: you'll let me come with u on full moons.” All the humour was now gone from her expression.
“Lily, did u not listen in third-year Defence Against the Dark Arts? Werewolves are vicious during the full moon. They don't differentiate between friend and foe. Remus would tear u limb from limb.”
“But that's just the thing: from what I've seen, u guys get pretty torn up too. So what I'm proposing is this: u let me wait for u outside the passage, so in case u need back-up, someone knows where u are. So that if... if u don't come back at dawn, there'll be someone to alert Dumbledore.”
“Look, Lily, I'm touched that you'd do that for us... but it's too dangerous. What if we can't keep him in the Shack?”
“James, your concern is appreciated and all, but have u ever seen me Stun anyone? Not to toot my own horn of anything.”
“Come to think of it... no, I haven't.”
“Well, let's just say u don't want me to demonstrate it on you.” She looked him square in the eye. “So. Deal of no deal?”
“I'm going to have to talk it over with Sirius – and Remus is going to be extremely against this idea – but I say deal.”
“It better be.”

–––––––

James had been right: Sirius was against the idea because Lily was a girl, and specifically James' all-time dream girl, which was bound to equal distraction, and Remus because he didn't want to risk harming another person. Peter was not present, which was honestly not that surprising – they were seeing less and less of him that year.
“Guys, honestly. I don't know about you, but I'd feel better knowing there was someone that had our back – and Padfoot, before u start, it's not just because it's Lily.”
“Really?”
“Yes! Really. And besides, she zei she'd go to Dumbledore if we didn't let her.”
“She zei that?” Remus asked, his unwillingness clear in his expression.
“Well... not exactly. Not in those words. But it was very clearly implied.”
“As in...?”
“As in, 'My silence has one condition.'”
“Oh. So we pretty much have no choice?”
“I would say so.”
“Fine. But that doesn't mean I like it. What if she's seen?”
“She won't be – I'll leave her my Cloak.”
“And does she know she'll be left the Cloak?”
“As of right now? Nope.”
“Ah. Well, u better go tell her we agreed before we change our minds, Prongs.” James gave them a grateful smile before leaving his old dorm and heading towards the Heads' Quarters, a slight spring in his step.

––––––––

“So they agreed.” Lily stated, a triumphant expression on her face.
“Yeah, but there's one thing: u can't be seen.”
“Why?”
“And here I thought u were meer than just a pretty face...” James teased, earning him a slaan, smack on the arm. “Anyway, don't u think people would wonder if they saw u sitting out the night door the Whomping Willow once a month?”
“You do have a point. But no worries, I can do a decent Disillusionment Charm.”
“Ah, but u don't need to,” he zei mysteriously.
“How else do u suggest on making me invisible, then?”
Wordlessly, James pulled the Invisibility mantel out of his school robes.
“James – is that – an Invisibility Cloak?”
He drew it around himself, leaving only his head visible. “Does this answer your question?”
“It – yes. But is it an actual Invisibility Cloak? Not just a normal mantel with some charm cast on it? But... however did u get it?”
“It's been in family for ages and ages, and it's still going strong – so I guess it must be real, not that I ever thought about it.”
“So I suppose now I know how you've managed all your pranks?”
“Yep.”
“And I'm not supposed to tell anyone?”
“Uh, yeah. u understand, right?”
“That the secrets of the almighty Marauders must be kept secret, lest their credibility goes? Yeah, I understand.”
“Awesome.”

–––––––

“All right, all right! Guys. Calm down, okay?” It was the third week of school, and James was trying to calm the Prefects down at their weekly meeting. “We – that is, your amazingly wonderful Head Girl and I –“ Lily smacked his arm for what had to have been the tenth time that week, and it was only Tuesday “– have some news for you.”
A chorus of 'Ooooh's rose up, and James kicked himself for not having worded that better. “Regrettably, not that.” He fully expected another smack, but even Lily seemed to have grown tired of the constant violence. “Yes, well, anyway, my point was this: seeing as u all now that dark forces are at work, yadda yadda yadda, there's a war coming and so forth, we've decided that the students – especially the younger ones – need some entertainment in the dark winter months ahead. Which is why... we've decided to hold a Winter Ball – well, that's what it will officially be called. In actual fact, this is how it's going to be: around seven pm on a dag that is yet to be decided, the entire school will meet in the Great Hall for a feast...” Lily tuned out James' speech – she had no need to listen to him explaining the event they'd planned just last week. She did, however, marvel at how eloquent James seemed to be while addressing the Prefects. They seemed to almost... respect him? No, that wasn't possible. This was James Potter, after all: he may have commanded many things, but respect – unless it was from a fellow prankster – was not often one of those things.
Huh. Maybe he really has changed.
posted by lucius_malloy
Somewhere, far away from here, there is a parallel universe. Somewhat literally parallel. There, u may not live in civilization unless u have a parallel – door the age of fifteen.
Some people, however, are lucky: twins. They have been born with their parallel.
A parallel, in this case, is a person who shares your hopes, your dreams, your deepest fears – someone, in fact, whom we call a soulmate.
On the first dag of every year, a check is made. In every city, town and village, the people who have had the misfortune to turn fifteen during the past jaar must turn up and display their parallel...
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posted by HarryPLover
“02…..09…..10” I repeated this over and over again in my head as i turned my locker lock. My locker was full of pictures of Matthew and I from like seventh grade a few recent photos; some band pics, bible verses, u know the common things in a teen’s locker.
In science I couldn’t keep myself awake if my life depended on it. Every time I would try to keep my eyes open, my head would fall. And every time I tried to keep my head up, my eyes would close. My lack of energy is probably because Matt and I stayed up til about three talking about his brothers and how his dad got a new girlfriend...
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posted by CullenProperty
Since two days after we had our fight, I haven't seen Lola at school. It’s worried me, but I just pass it off that she’s sick of on a longer vacation of just ditching like she does at times. I haven’t called her of went door her house either.
The dag I go back to school starts like any other day; Woke up to my screaming alarm clock, dress lazily, no breakfast, drive to school in my parents car, being Nick's not finished with my bug, get to English class and sit there dazed. I don't look around the class in Math; I didn't want to see of deal with Tom. Science and Wood koop drag door and when...
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Kat.
Prom Night
By: fatchick and moolah
Chapter three: Best ending ever!!
    Luke was lying in a hospital bed the whole time Ashlynn gave birth. He missed the birth of his little premature little girl. He was upset and also dreaming about what his baby girl looked like. Ashlynn was aloud to come see Luke. She started crying when she saw him. She was sad that he was in a temporary coma. She thought he was cute in a weird way. She went to lie down. On her way back she fainted. She fainted because she thought she saw Luke trying to hug her in the hall. The nurse screamed, “HELP,...
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posted by mitchie19
11. M E E T A A R O N


At exactly 3 pm, Mario, our house guard beeped through the telecom.
“Mr. Riley?” Mario asked. He used his British accent. I shifted my weight near the front door which the telecom was hung beside it. I pressed the button. “Yes, Mario?” “There’s someone at the gate, looking for Ms. Marhion.” I wonder who it is. I looked out the window. A silver BMW was parked in front of the gate. Weird.
He might not be a bad guy. “Send him in,” I told Mario then I saw the gate opened.
I approached the guy looking for Mariah. “Hi, Riley Cruz,” we shook hands. “Aaron...
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posted by mitchie19
8. C O N C E R N E D H E A R T


My vision was black. Just plain black. It’s like I’m falling into a deep dark room where I can’t see but the darkness and falling into nothing. It felt cold. The deep dark room was cold.
I slowly opened my eyes. All I can hear was the sound of the hart-, hart monitor beeping. I was in a hospital. What happened to me?
Beside me, Norah—sleeping with her head tilted down the side of the bed.
“Norah,” I heard me whisper. I felt the IV dripped into my arm.
Norah had awoken. Her arms around me and sobbed. “Thank God, you’re okay,”
I managed to rub her head...
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posted by mona_me
i am looking for the star, our star, but this time i am alone, u aren't standing on the port volgende to me..
i feel i am lost now, i can't find this star. u remeber what did i descoverd that night? i found only one ster in the whole Portsaid's sky..
u didn't belive that one ster is exist.. u said: which star? the sky is felling of the stars!
i thought u was kidding, i was very sure that there's one star.. yeah, sure as the blind is sure that there's nothing around him!
now i see what u were talking about, i loved you, so i couldn't see anyone else but you..
u was my heart's only love..
it was Portsaid's only star..
but u .. u didn't point to the same star, u saw all the stars but mine..
now i am alone, seeing many stars, can't find my star, am i blind? of ..was i blind?
twinkle, twinkle, my littel star..
Portsaid's only star, which one is you?
_________________________________________________
*Portsaid is an Egyptian port.
So Tom Closes The door...and heads back into The bathroom With bill.
"That was Gustav" Tom said.
"what did he want" bill asked
"he was Wonderin if we was Ready" Tom Replied.
"Well mabye we..." bill zei but got inurupted door Tom Saying
"Shh." He zei as he licked The top, boven of his Nips softly.
"mmmmm Tomi u Gustav." bill moaned.
"and Wats The point Wats n america 4 us?" Tom Asked
"i dont know but u should stop" bill said.
"mmm o billy u Know u Want it," Tom moaned. bill looked at the douche head as Tom Took off his pants. Tom Then looked billnin his Eyes.
"is This Wrong?" Bill asked
"im not sure. but i...
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posted by house_of_nightx
THE LEGEND OF THE VAMPIRE PRINCESS:
THE LEGEND COMES TO LIFE

CHARPTER1:STARSTRUCK

STAR
16 YEARS LATER

I woke to a brisk summers morning in a small town just outside of New York City in my parents best friend Kachiri and her daughter Quinns apartment.Kachiri has been looking after me since i was a baby since my parents had died in a car accident when i was very younge and i had no other family,Kachiri zei my parents wanted her to look after me anyway.

As i got out of bed to go downstairs i made my way into my bathroom brushed my hair,cleaned my teeth and examined the sapphire dragon that streached...
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posted by Charlieminster
Charlie Hawkins had always felt different to the other girls in her school. They were all really skinny, wore tight clothes and make-up and every boy who pasted them in the corridor would quite simply drawl all over them. Charlie was different to the girls in meer ways than looks. She could do something that none of them could do which was influence people to do what she wants them to do.
The way Charlie looked different to the other girls was that she was very pale for someone who lives in LA, she had long dark black hair that came down to her hips, her eyes were a very strange cloudy yellow...
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Hello everyone! :] This is only a draft to a chapter of the first story of a series (Shattering Suns) I'm writing and, when I'm through, publishing. Since it's my first chapter, I want to be sure this story is interesting enough. Forgive me if there are any proofreading mistakes. I've been too busy to proofread every line. Please do commentaar and tell me what u think! Thankies so so much for willingly reading and sharing your helpful thoughts. Take care sweethearts, and enjoy! :D ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blissful Ignorance
My name is Naomi Hart. I am a sixteen jaar old...
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posted by Percysclique
Chapter 2 – A Pain in the Night

Queen Amati sat up in bed with nausea sweeping through her body, causing her to jerk forward. The black haired woman grabbed her thin waist, as she doubled over in pain. Her breathing came out short and raspy.

She looked over at her husband who was sleeping soundly. A gentle look was plastered his handsome face and Amati wished she could have another peaceful night sleep. But those nights seemed like they were so long ago.

Amati reached for the golden goblet she had been keeping door her bed lately. She took a sip of the strong sap and forced it down her throat....
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posted by Dogluva363
My freind wrote a story wat do u think about it?

J+K Forever and Always


            Chapter 1
The final dag of summer was a normal one. The birds were singing, the sun was shining, and Juliet steerages was at my house [since I am her best friend] thinking of the days to come when school would start. She thought of her classes, her teachers, but most of all she was thinking of Kaleb Wese.Kaleb wese was the brother of her other friend Kara. All she wanted in the world was to be his girlfriend! Truth be told I never could figure...
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As I weave through dark allies, trying to make my way home, everything feels wrong. It's dag time and there is crickets chirping. The moon is shining along with bright stars while the brilliant sun sleeps. Annabella was not there. This time, it wasn't Annabella and I running away from one of our idiotic but awesome stunts. I was running for a different reason. I needed to get home pagina so I could cry. I needed to sit there in my crying corner and let the tears flow. I did not make it home pagina in time. I collapse onto the harsh cement and burst into tears, right there in an alley.
Hours pass. I lose...
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Elena’s POV
    The night got colder as I walked further away from the Founder’s dag party. Just a few meer steps and I’ll be at the school.
    I reached the school’s front door but when I tried to open them but they wouldn’t budge. I gave up and sighed. I crossed my arm’s trying to keep warm. Looking around trying to find another way in, though the only way I knew of was the doors in the back of the school.
    I slowly walked my self to the back doors. I grabbed the frost bitten door handle and pulled it open. Once I walked...
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posted by Liisamyts
CHAPTER 2
A picture of a young blond man was shining on the screen, it was Jacob, their brother, the one who always held it together when everything was falling apart. Adele snuggled closer to her brother. And for once, he didn't push her away, instead, he just held her, not speaking a word.”He promised! He promised he would come home pagina early tonight!” she managed to say between her sobs. Then she burst into tears again. Simon held her until she fell asleep, tears still on her cheeks. He carried his sister up to her bed, where she could be far away from the pain. Dreaming, seeing mom, dad,...
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posted by Funnygirl77
Where am I? What happen to me? Who are you? What have u done to my sister and brother? These were the first vragen that popped into my mind when I came to. The Boy who looked to be about 18 looked at me and smiled.
He took my hand, "all shall be answered in time." Is what he said, he sound older than I had thought him to be. He lead me to a room told me to sit and then close my eyes. I did as I was told, "You still haven't told me where I am, and where my sister and brother is, what happen to me, and WHO u ARE? I zei in a tone that sound way to irritated.
He nodded, "I am Mark Lane."...
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posted by hannah_vampire
It was late and I think I had fallen asleep on damon, I really didn't want to go home pagina But soon I would have to and thats when i would talk to my dad about this stuff.

I woke up and I was in this very nice room, I am supirsed that Damon has a bed, I thought vamps didn't sleep although it could be for decoration. "Had a good sleep" I jumped up qiuck way to quick making a painful cracky nosie I think from from leg "sorry Belle should have knocked i thought u would be sleepy".

I didn't care more, I hated that we took it slow and getting in trouble would toon my dad why u shouldn't like To Ariel-Belle....
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posted by starwarsfangirl
I wrote this is five minutes. Not that good, I know.
It's in the point of view of a fire.
It's in a fireplace in a living room.
Hope u enjoy.
Read to the rhythym u would
'The Night Before Christmas'


I flickered and jumped
and sat on the logs
and watched as the human
kicked off his clogs.

The dog soon followed
and sat door his side
and they soon were asleep
and my flame soon died.

But a flicker did linger
and I wondered a bit.
When would be the volgende time
that I would be lit?

-starwarsfangirl
5/4/10
posted by Funnygirl77
 love bites
love bites
Kisa woke up, when she rolled over it was 12:00 at night. Zack laid in his bed,Kisa smiled and went over to Zack. "Are u asleep"? Kisa asked Zack, he rolled over and smiled at her. "No, are u still mad at me"? Kisa frowned, she racked her brain to see why she should be mad at Zack. Then she remembered.
"No, I was never mad at you. So where did u go?" Zack turned away, he didn't want to tell Kisa that he was out feeding on humans, he didn't want to scare her. "I was just out for a walk" Kisa smiled, she knew Zack was lying, she also knew what he was, she just never wanted him to know...
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