Writing Article: Divorce it should be a cuss word Pt. 2

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posted by iluvtheshow

I woke up that morning exhausted and numb. I had no idea where I was, and for a spleet, split seconde I panicked. Then, like floodgates opening, it all came back. The hurt, the tears, the anger; my newest scar. Suddenly I had an idea. What if this was all just a terrible nightmare? What if Lyn was waiting for me in the keuken-, keuken like always? I hurried out of bad, pausing to only make sure I was decent for my cousins. I stepped out of the room onto the cold tile. The house had an eerie morning silence, so with every step I took I hesitated. I hadn't prayed in a long time but I did then. "Please, pretty please, let this all be a bad dream. Tell me Lyn will be just around the corner." I was two steps away from the kitchen. I held my breath and stepped in.

She really was gone.
Really.
Never coming back.

I think that was when I decided to hate her. Before, I had decided I would just cut her out but now, I would loathe her with a brand that could burn anything. Hate her with a passion. She had left my dad while he was SICK! What self respecting woman leaves her husband when he is SICK!?!? I don't mean with a cold, OH NO. He has a tube sticking out of his side GOD DAMN IT!!!! So now I would hate her.

H- Heinous
A- Acidic
T- Traitor
E- Enmity

HATE. A life consuming emotions.

EvanlovesAzula, maryooma009 and 34 others like this

JACOBLOVR45 wow that was so deep!!!!!! Me lik,me lik

thirteen_times I liked it

1-2vampire its gret, relly deep

danceerina ur a really graet writer! but i don't think u needed to cuss.

dylin1 Kewl! Is it based on a true story?

iluvtheshow Yea, this is the story of how I felt when my step mom and dad got divorced. It's all real, just with some name changes :) Thanks for reading!

ellie_bellie135 I don't if you've actually been through this or if your just awesome at writing but this is BRILLIANT! This is an awesome example of good use of 5 stages of grief! Do you mind if I use this as an example in my article on good use of grief? I Loved it. Awesome.

ellie_bellie135 http://www.fanpop.com/spots/writing/articles/70565/title/grief

iluvtheshow I would be honored to let you use this! There are three parts to this whole thing if you want to use them all, and yes it actually happened to me. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

ellie_bellie135 Thanx, It's brilliantly written.

iluvtheshow Thanks! :) This was a really tough time for me and writing helped me get through it.

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Fanpop Poetry Contest!

posted by Cinders

Photo by Steve McAlister

hallo there, everyone! It's the start of a brand new year, and I know we all have brand new ideas for our lives. That is why I want to open this jaar up with the first ever Fanpop poetry contest! It's basic and simple, because everyone can write poetry, and it's short which means everyone can read all of the submissions in a brief period of time, whereas stories may take longer. However, if you're a story-writer (I sympathize), never fear! If this contest goes well, I may sponsor a Fanpop Short Story Contest afterwards.

Established Rules
1) Any piece of poetry is accepted, so long as it is not...

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Beautiful

posted by Dearheart

For Kay, my dear sister in Jesus. May this small tale help to remind u how beautifully and wonderfully made u are in the eyes of the Great Artist.

~~ Beautiful ~~

Once upon a time, not long geleden and not far away, there lived a wise and skillful artist who loved to paint. He delighted in making magic with color and bringing all the afbeeldingen he saw in his head to life in his pictures.

One day, he was painting something extra special. His brush dipped in and out of the swirling colors and flew across the canvas in expert strokes; dabbing here, blending there, moving swiftly in a joyful, marvelous...

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Vialo: proligue

posted by khfan12

Vialo By: Josie Mahre

Prolige
"Run, Ella, run!" zei Vialo. "I'm running as fast as I can!" Ella said. Vialo is a 14-year-old girl with the unique name Vialo Tarah Wilson, also, she has superpowers and the ability to take over / rule the universe / save the universe. Her friend, Ella Newbie, also has superpowers. "Ella, we can hide here." zei Vialo. "Vialo, go on without me. I'll catch up." zei Ella. "No. I'll just telaport us out." zei Vialo. "No! Vialo, they'll find u easier!" zei Ella. All of a sudden, some people walked up to them. "You two aren't out yet?" asked one. "No Jasper....

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poem, A wanderer, a dreamer

posted by whitelion

i always thought, and i always knew
i would end up here with you
i was a restless wanderer on a distant path
u were a lonely dreamer with a broken laugh

i would go anywhere the road would lead
my hopes and dreams is all that i would need
i don't need a house of fancy cars
i would rather sleep underneath the stars

u did'nt have much to call your own
but what a lovely smile on your face shown
u zei your chance at love had past u door
i told i'm here so dont u cry

our lives were like the pieces of a broken heart
now that we're together what a life could start
there was magic in the air that night
everything was moving at the speed of light

u were like my juliet and i your romeo
u love me i love u thats all i need to know
no longer will u dream of love thats true
no longer will i wander my zoek has led to you

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A poem

posted by DietCokeGirl

I wrote this about my (now ex) boyfriend, but still felt something about the poem, if not him. I'd love some criticism on it (hopefully constructive) :).

Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
u are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows

That we are one. And as u lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are hart-, hart at name.

u may notice that only the seconde verse rhymes, this is an attempt to toon the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.

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Divorce it should be a cuss word Pt. 2

posted by iluvtheshow

I woke up that morning exhausted and numb. I had no idea where I was, and for a spleet, split seconde I panicked. Then, like floodgates opening, it all came back. The hurt, the tears, the anger; my newest scar. Suddenly I had an idea. What if this was all just a terrible nightmare? What if Lyn was waiting for me in the keuken-, keuken like always? I hurried out of bad, pausing to only make sure I was decent for my cousins. I stepped out of the room onto the cold tile. The house had an eerie morning silence, so with every step I took I hesitated. I hadn't prayed in a long time but I did then. "Please, pretty...

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iluvtheshow I would be honored to let you use this! There are three parts to this whole thing if you want to use them all, and yes it actually happened to me. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

ellie_bellie135 Thanx, It's brilliantly written.

iluvtheshow Thanks! :) This was a really tough time for me and writing helped me get through it.

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Will

posted by Emoshinell

Here is a poem I wrote about the boy I love. It doesn't rhyme but it doesn't have to to be a poem. Send of commentaar feedback.
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To me, Will is meer than a name. This is what it means to me:

W is for the softest whisper in the sweetest breeze of spring.

I is for the icy chill that goes down my spine when u spare me a small glance my way.

L is for the look my penetrating eyes give u when u turn away from me; when I want most for u to stay close to me.

And L is for the unconditional and irrevocable and irrational love I feel for your soul.

Without you, my hart-, hart is silent. u arethe only one who has touched my hart-, hart and it will always be yours. u are my only love. I've left my hart-, hart with you; look over it closely. It's your only responsibilty. Protect it from all harm. u are the only one who who ever has and ever will touch my soul. And it too is yours.

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Chapter 2: Gods

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

“Hey” Ethan greeted me and nodded and smiled as much as I didn’t want to get into the whole boy volgende door thing, he had a hot body that u could see through his tight shirt, and his brown hair matched his dark brown eyes. “Hey, where’s Thor?” I asked as I walked across the keuken-, keuken floor and sat myself down across from him his dark brown eye’s still no me. “Getting ready, we’re going to a club tonight” he said, still eating his banaan and watching me.”It’s 4 o’clock” I zei raising my eye brow. We’re going somewhere else first, I would tell u but I’m afraid...

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Chapter One

posted by Spotty_Vision21

This book is a vampire novel. Simple fact is I disliked Twilight so much I decided to write a half-decent vampire novel. So here is chapter 1
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Eve looked back at her wings. They were magnificent, pure white and shining. They stretched out about 20 feet. Grinning, she gave herself a running start and launched into the air. Momentarily just enjoying the rush, she opened her eyes and gasped. Everything looked so small! The river gracefully curved on for miles. Letting out a small giggle Eve dived. Now she could make out a few faces. Her mother, Janet, waved from the bibliotheek where she worked....

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Critical Decisions

posted by rcostelloe

Coinage of Commitment

I suppose every writer faces the dilemma of criticism. Sure, some suggestions are instantly convincing of exactly what u thought you'd hear. But others create a quandary, like a double-edged sword. Should u accept the criticism, make changes in your work of your style, of stick with your own judgment, the one u started with? Either way, u could be wrong, and it may take years before u know the answer. In some cases, there may be highlights in an author's ambition level, of sense of destination, that make the decision particularly challenging.

For instance, in my own case, I wanted...