Advice Depression Stage 2

PuNkRoCk123 posted on Apr 17, 2010 at 04:01AM
PEACE. Music, its calm.
Sitting in the dark.
!Thinking!
Small Blade in my
hand, blood spilling out
of my arms and lower stomach!
Sitting on the floor
Staring at the wet
blood. I swallow my
last gulp of salivia
leaving my mouth dry
Mind wondering. i
slowly feel pressure
around my wounds
Eyes water up. i
cry out but no sound
comes out. A light is shown,
A shadow is seen
coming out
Oh no! "someone"
came for me! :(
"Someone" grabs me,
throws me and burns
my heart.Crys, Yells,
Screams! No Crys I See,
No Love I Feel
!Blank!
I'm Died
save

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een jaar geleden DragonsArt said…
better...sort of...
een jaar geleden PuNkRoCk123 said…
its a metaphor...
both of them are... they were suppose to go together, but i thought of seperatiog them..
een jaar geleden PuNkRoCk123 said…
plus i wrote these when i was in 6th grade.. and i found them smushed up somewhere.. and i was rereading it and i realized nothing has changed.. i still feel like that.. except a little worse, i suppose...
een jaar geleden sugarcane15 said…
crying
so sad