Garth's POV
"Wow! Look at all this snow!" I said. We were caught in a snow storm. It was snowing heavily. "We might want to turn on the heating elements, so the flaps and rudders don't get frozen." zei Humphrey. He flicked the switch and there was a beep. The heating element was on. "What temperature is it outside?" Lilly questioned. "Uh... -5 of -6 degrees maybe?" I replied staring deep into Lilly's eyes. She blushed. "Wow stop Garth!" She giggled. I kissed her... "Wow! Can u not?" Humphrey said. "Fine, well go out to an empty zitplaats, stoel in the cabin" I replied. Me and Lilly walked arm-in-arm out the cockpit door and went to the back of the plane. "Humphrey seemed pretty pissed!" zei Lilly.
Meanwhile...
Humphrey's POV
I felt tired, I had finished my coffee, it had no effect on stopping my tiredness. I looked at all the instruments and observed them carefully. BEEP...BEEP...BEEP...BEEP. I looked up. The Engine warning was sounding and so was the Master warning, but nothing was wrong. I pressed the reset button. The alarm stopped. "Huh. Must be malfunctioning" I zei to myself. BEEP...BEEP...BEEP. They went off again, but this time there were meer going off. This time, the Engine alarm, the Fuel Temperature alarm and the Master alarm were going off. "Ok, something is not right here" I zei to myself. Garth walked in the door with Lilly, he heard the alarm. "What's Going on!?" Garth shouted. "I don't Know! The alarms are going off, but everything seems okay." I said, looking at the fuel gauge. I hit the reset button again. The alarms stopped. Just after doing this, the lights on the instruments, flickered and went off, so did all the lights in the cabin. "Whats going on?" Asked Lilly. "I have no clue..." Garth replied. The lights on the instruments came back on, but nothing else. "Look! The airspeed, its on 0!" I said. "So is the altitude!" Garth replied. "Check the engines, see if the propellers are still spinning" I ordered. After a while, Garth came back. "The Left engine is on fire!" He yelled. "What?! How? Is it-"
BOOM
The Plane banked to the left. Using all our force, we leveled the plane. "Throttle to 100%, we need all the power we can get!" I roared. I could feel it, the plane was falling, I was going to die. Is this it? I died in a plane crash? No, I will not let this happen... "We need to go to land I we want to survive!!" Garth Yelled. "I'll go back to Kate, keep her company" zei Lilly. She walked out of the cockpit. We struggled to keep in control of the plane. We were only a few Kilometers from land, when suddenly
BOOM
The right engine failed and exploded. We had no engines, flaps of working instruments. We could see land. "Alright! Gear Down!" I yelled. TERRAIN! TO LOW! PULL UP!... TERRAIN! TO LOW! PULL UP!. We were only a few meters off the ground. I heard the landing gear hit off the trees below. I was petrified! We pulled back the yoke and we flared for landing. We hit the ground, Hard. I hit my head of the yoke. So did Garth. I was knocked out....
Narrative
The plane hit the ground hard. There was no explosion, but the plane was ripped apart. Kate, Lilly and the kids were awake during the whole landing. their part of the plane was majorly intact.
Humphrey's POV (Unconscious)
"Where am I?" I zei to myself. "Am I dead?" I was in what looked to be a completely white room. There was a door on the other side of the room. I walked over to it and opened it. On the other side of the door was the crash site. I walked trough the door and went into the plane. "Kate!" I ran over to her. She wasn't breathing. "No..no..no..KATE!" I yelled. Tears filled my eyes. She had Died. Lilly was also, not breathing, neither were the kids. I walked up to the cockpit. Garth was there. he had blood all over his face. He too wasn't breathing. "Am I the only who survived?" I zei to myself. I saw my Knife. I took it and went to Kate's body. I stabbed myself.....
"Wow! Look at all this snow!" I said. We were caught in a snow storm. It was snowing heavily. "We might want to turn on the heating elements, so the flaps and rudders don't get frozen." zei Humphrey. He flicked the switch and there was a beep. The heating element was on. "What temperature is it outside?" Lilly questioned. "Uh... -5 of -6 degrees maybe?" I replied staring deep into Lilly's eyes. She blushed. "Wow stop Garth!" She giggled. I kissed her... "Wow! Can u not?" Humphrey said. "Fine, well go out to an empty zitplaats, stoel in the cabin" I replied. Me and Lilly walked arm-in-arm out the cockpit door and went to the back of the plane. "Humphrey seemed pretty pissed!" zei Lilly.
Meanwhile...
Humphrey's POV
I felt tired, I had finished my coffee, it had no effect on stopping my tiredness. I looked at all the instruments and observed them carefully. BEEP...BEEP...BEEP...BEEP. I looked up. The Engine warning was sounding and so was the Master warning, but nothing was wrong. I pressed the reset button. The alarm stopped. "Huh. Must be malfunctioning" I zei to myself. BEEP...BEEP...BEEP. They went off again, but this time there were meer going off. This time, the Engine alarm, the Fuel Temperature alarm and the Master alarm were going off. "Ok, something is not right here" I zei to myself. Garth walked in the door with Lilly, he heard the alarm. "What's Going on!?" Garth shouted. "I don't Know! The alarms are going off, but everything seems okay." I said, looking at the fuel gauge. I hit the reset button again. The alarms stopped. Just after doing this, the lights on the instruments, flickered and went off, so did all the lights in the cabin. "Whats going on?" Asked Lilly. "I have no clue..." Garth replied. The lights on the instruments came back on, but nothing else. "Look! The airspeed, its on 0!" I said. "So is the altitude!" Garth replied. "Check the engines, see if the propellers are still spinning" I ordered. After a while, Garth came back. "The Left engine is on fire!" He yelled. "What?! How? Is it-"
BOOM
The Plane banked to the left. Using all our force, we leveled the plane. "Throttle to 100%, we need all the power we can get!" I roared. I could feel it, the plane was falling, I was going to die. Is this it? I died in a plane crash? No, I will not let this happen... "We need to go to land I we want to survive!!" Garth Yelled. "I'll go back to Kate, keep her company" zei Lilly. She walked out of the cockpit. We struggled to keep in control of the plane. We were only a few Kilometers from land, when suddenly
BOOM
The right engine failed and exploded. We had no engines, flaps of working instruments. We could see land. "Alright! Gear Down!" I yelled. TERRAIN! TO LOW! PULL UP!... TERRAIN! TO LOW! PULL UP!. We were only a few meters off the ground. I heard the landing gear hit off the trees below. I was petrified! We pulled back the yoke and we flared for landing. We hit the ground, Hard. I hit my head of the yoke. So did Garth. I was knocked out....
Narrative
The plane hit the ground hard. There was no explosion, but the plane was ripped apart. Kate, Lilly and the kids were awake during the whole landing. their part of the plane was majorly intact.
Humphrey's POV (Unconscious)
"Where am I?" I zei to myself. "Am I dead?" I was in what looked to be a completely white room. There was a door on the other side of the room. I walked over to it and opened it. On the other side of the door was the crash site. I walked trough the door and went into the plane. "Kate!" I ran over to her. She wasn't breathing. "No..no..no..KATE!" I yelled. Tears filled my eyes. She had Died. Lilly was also, not breathing, neither were the kids. I walked up to the cockpit. Garth was there. he had blood all over his face. He too wasn't breathing. "Am I the only who survived?" I zei to myself. I saw my Knife. I took it and went to Kate's body. I stabbed myself.....
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-Ares AKA AlphaClub AKA Caleb
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-Ares AKA AlphaClub AKA Caleb
AND FOR THE RECORD... YES, SOME OF US DO STUPID SHIT ON JERE THAT MAKE FIGHTS WORSE, BUT AREA... u NEVER SEE THAT u ARE ALSO NOT ALWAYS RIGHT!
It's been a while since I made one of these reviews..
And I did say, I was gonna review a story from here on Fanpop..
This is possibly one of the first fanfics I ever read. And it's a awesome story..
It's nice not having to read though sex scenes for once.
And the pictures are a good fit..
The story is about Kate having a doctor Jyrkll, mr Hyde type of deal.
Though she learns to control,the "Hyde".and uses it for good..
Either way.
Someone just play
MONSTER/SKILLET
and everything would be perfect..
Well.
That's all I got.
I have a lot on my mind..
And I did say, I was gonna review a story from here on Fanpop..
This is possibly one of the first fanfics I ever read. And it's a awesome story..
It's nice not having to read though sex scenes for once.
And the pictures are a good fit..
The story is about Kate having a doctor Jyrkll, mr Hyde type of deal.
Though she learns to control,the "Hyde".and uses it for good..
Either way.
Someone just play
MONSTER/SKILLET
and everything would be perfect..
Well.
That's all I got.
I have a lot on my mind..
The morning after that Me and Sophie wake up to find my parents aren't in the hol, den
Me: Sop wake up my parents aren't here.*uncomfortably
Sophie: Probably hunting
Me:Are u sure?
Sophie:Come on let's go and find them
We walk to the hunting ground and found my parents hunting
Me:Nice catch mom and dad.
Rose and Shade: Thanks son morning guys
Sophie: Morning to u too.
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As me and my parents brought back the food to eat
I notice Sophie didn't my share
Me: Sophie what's wrong?
Sophie: I can't eat that it's your family kill
Me: Sop you're family to me
Sophie:Okay Jason
Rose:You cared about her don't you?
Me:As a friend of as a crush
Rose: Crush
Me: Then as a friend.
Me: Sop wake up my parents aren't here.*uncomfortably
Sophie: Probably hunting
Me:Are u sure?
Sophie:Come on let's go and find them
We walk to the hunting ground and found my parents hunting
Me:Nice catch mom and dad.
Rose and Shade: Thanks son morning guys
Sophie: Morning to u too.
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As me and my parents brought back the food to eat
I notice Sophie didn't my share
Me: Sophie what's wrong?
Sophie: I can't eat that it's your family kill
Me: Sop you're family to me
Sophie:Okay Jason
Rose:You cared about her don't you?
Me:As a friend of as a crush
Rose: Crush
Me: Then as a friend.
Hungerly Rocko sat in a boom with his M14 rifle
He watched his sister stalk the caribou
This is taking to long'' he zei and raised his rifle
*CRACK*
The geweer-, geweer went off
Got em'' Rocko zei with great pride
hooi-, hooi that was my kill'' Kate zei with anger
u took too long'' he zei historically
BACK AT THE VALLY
Morning sir'' Garth said
u don't have to call me that red'' Rocko said
So baby tonight is the moonlight howl'' Princess exclaimed
Sure I'll take you'' Rocko said
hooi-, hooi dad this is my boyfriend'' Katie said
Oh really hooi-, hooi son u see this bullet it will fly a lot faster at 9:15" Rocko said
Oh yes s...sir'' the boy zei in fear
A little later Rocko began seeing numbers 1001394000231
Oh no not again Rocko puffed his cigar
Th3y a1l mu5t d1e Rocko heard in a familiar Russian voice
TO BE CONTINUED
He watched his sister stalk the caribou
This is taking to long'' he zei and raised his rifle
*CRACK*
The geweer-, geweer went off
Got em'' Rocko zei with great pride
hooi-, hooi that was my kill'' Kate zei with anger
u took too long'' he zei historically
BACK AT THE VALLY
Morning sir'' Garth said
u don't have to call me that red'' Rocko said
So baby tonight is the moonlight howl'' Princess exclaimed
Sure I'll take you'' Rocko said
hooi-, hooi dad this is my boyfriend'' Katie said
Oh really hooi-, hooi son u see this bullet it will fly a lot faster at 9:15" Rocko said
Oh yes s...sir'' the boy zei in fear
A little later Rocko began seeing numbers 1001394000231
Oh no not again Rocko puffed his cigar
Th3y a1l mu5t d1e Rocko heard in a familiar Russian voice
TO BE CONTINUED