I tried hard on this, so I'd like some feedback please. (there's no kate, cuz im a girl, so..) I'll make meer parts, populair of not. again, FEEDBACK PLEASE!! (edit made to the story) From now on, it'll be less like the movie.
Okay so there's replaced people with new appearance to make it less like the story: Lilly- Liz, Hutch- Jason. Removed: Kate, Cando, Garth. Added: Calla, Eric. Nothing drawn door me. Feedback highly appreciated!